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@ModeGone Personally I think the abilities are very unique and work well together. Though could I ask ehat the exact range of his time freeze is?
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@Leslie Hall I'm really excited to play in this so if it's not up to par let me know how to tweak him!

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@Leslie Hall
It could depend on how much magic is put in but the low-end being a radius of a few feet while the uttermost high-end range being a mile? A whole city block (as in roughly 500 by 500 feet) could be the average. Again, how long the 'pause' is being held for would increase the ongoing drain. A few feet for an hour might be pretty petty change in comparison to a whole mile for a minute but holding a spell for an hour is in itself quite taxing.
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I dunno how many of you play League, but...

Jinx, Nami/Illaoi, Thresh/Orianna... and now Twisted Fate. I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a little giddy with all the unintended connections.
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In my opinion the time stop spell seems a little off.

> Everything is frozen, so nobody could actually move.

> Tim has to manually keep the spell going if he wants it to continue. (In addition he's the only person who can move, because everybody is effected besides him. That includes teammates. Well it should...)

> Can only really hold it for a few seconds (at risk of serious magic drain)

The magic skill seems a little flawed? Or maybe I don't really get it.

Edit: You'd probably benefit giving your character a different skill that's not so flawed
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@Achronum Very nice! Alexander is accepted.

@ModeGone I do see @Pudding's point, but I'd like to hear your response to the skill seeming counter intuitive or flawed before I make any judgement. Just to clarify, I don't see anything wrong with a contained time freeze spell; provided it's roleplayed fairly. Perhaps the field has to expand out from Tim or there's a relatively obvious sign that the spell is coming? Just something to give a window for other characters to have the option to react to the spell.

@Baklava Time to get started on my Bard character then.
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I'm just going to ditch the time power if that's alright. I've been spending the last three hours or more rewriting and figuring out the costs and limitations and I give up. While thematic in the whole "time and space" concept and having the limitations be within a few seconds to a few minutes due to how fast combat can be and how much wide of an area the magic has an effect on... I'm banging my head against a wall for an ability that feels too much like I'm trying to imp Homura while keeping the spell from being overpowered with how long it can last.

The spell was expanding from where Tim had been at the point of casting. If he leaves the bubble before the time's up, it pops taking with it all the magic put into its creation. It effectively would immobilize everything within the bubble but not prevent, say, attacks from entering it. However any outside force would just freeze at the edge before resuming its projected path and speed.

The way I saw it playing out was a silver-white pattern emitting motes of rainbow light spreading itself out during casting on the floor from his feet or (if Tim was airborne) out from his navel in the air. While it takes a brief amount of time to 'load' (though this takes a bit longer the further out it has to spread), it is enough for a being to realize an AoE or something was about to take place and either target Tim or try to get out of range.
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@ModeGone If that's what you'd prefer to do.

I'm currently writing up my Sun Prince. Will hopefully have it finished soon.
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@Leslie Hall

If you don't mind, I'll edit my CS and flesh out the powers a bit more to avoid future confusion.
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@January Go for it!
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@Leslie Hall

Clarified range restrictions and yadda yadda. If anything is a problem, let me know.
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@Leslie Hall
Tragic backstory AND bootleg Reaper powers??? Jokes aside, here's my application.

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@banjoanjo Where's their Death Lotus?

Mitsuru is accepted!

EDIT: Wait it's Death Blossom. Death Lotus is from League.
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So I was pretty sick today. I did my best to get this finished but I failed. I was gonna try and finish it before bed but I just took my nightly dose of medicine and now I'm starting to see through time. Don't worry though, because I filled out most of my template with placeholder information!

Anyway, time to sleep.

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@Leslie Hall Wait-- a TRANSFORMATION THEME SONG?! ...I must add one.
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Must. Add. Character Themes.
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Oh shoot. Yeah gotta add a theme song. Always theme songs O.O
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Transformation theme song added. Balance almost restored. Now I need a character theme song....
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Added theme songs, yo.

Also Mitsuru's Death Blossom is probably just them spinning around with their weapon like some sort of murderous beyblade.
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