@pugbutter: Okay, I missed the skills section.
The Iron Roses are the most famous order in the country, however, and have repeatedly been sent out to deal with dangerous threats.
However, aside from that he looks pretty much fine honestly?
Though... I have to say, the other character tied to him... this is not the place to make money or anything like that. And sociopathy won't endear him to the rest of the order at all. ^^;
"Sociopath" seems a bit much IMO. Selfish, greedy asshole? You bet!
I was going to ask once (
if) I'm accepted as to whether I have the option of following Rhydsar around as a non-knighted, non-peerage bodyguard, probably rather like a Norse
húskarl. He would call himself the boy's "squire" as a loophole exploitation, if anyone felt suspicious about that.
Though money's not an issue to him right now so don't worry about that; for lack of better phrases, you can say he's "indentured" to Rhydsar and therefore supplied sufficiently with food and munitions, unless fealty to the Order strips him of previous oaths. Until they became secularized I imagine the Order demanded that noblemen waive their holdings and titles
et cetera, as proof of their devotion to the clergy and the Gods? Asceticism and modesty tend to be consistent trends with churches.
(If we're indeed accepted BTW then your changes will be implemented when the biographies are posted into the Characters tab. I haven't edited them yet just in case someone would think I stealth-edited the Skills lists in there, or something like that.)
Regarding the Order's reputation, though, Merc also said something in his original draft about it being the
oldest order, in addition to one of the more popular, which by the very nature of our knowledge of your world is either incorrect or a lucky guess. While I suspect we'd get the hang of the tone of the group dynamic while incorporating ourselves into it, further explanation and exposition are always appreciated when it comes to worldbuilding! We will read anything you post. :)