Big scary bird guy is scary. He is good and accepted

So how is everyone doing. I sent a message to the ones who expressed interest, but they haven't said anything yet.

Getting ready to go to bed

Name: Jesús Martinez
Alias: El Salavador Loco
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: Appearance
-Weighs 200 lbs.
-6 foot tall
-Covered in various gang tattoos
Age: 26
Role: Commando
Equipment:
- Mark V Hybrid Armor
- Plasma Knife
-Plasma Rifle
-Cartage Pistol
Bio: Jesús Martinez grew up in the Sol System Alliance in the slums of the city New Rhome. His parents worked to the bone to feed Jesús and his brothers and sisters, but the meager food gave Martinez a hunger. Not for food, but for success, power, and for wealth; the easiest way to do this was to join a gang at 15.

For four years Jesús squandered his life and his life doing whatever the boss, "Huesos", and his cardinals asked, advancing in rank, until day he finally hit it big. Martinez and a group of other gang members were picked to assault a rival gang. When they arrived the crew and Jesús in particularly dispatched the crew with ease. Another year flew by full of fighting and death before Jesús was summoned to guard a squad to break into a warehouse and steal plasma knifes that were fresh from the factory. It turned out to be sting operation led by the local gang squad and he surrendered without a fight. At the trial he was faced with two opportunities prison, which would gain his respect, or join the Armed Forces, which would give him a better future. Regretfully he chose prison and there he became even more hardened to the world around him. On the day of his release four years later Jesús realized he no longer wanted to be part of the life anymore. So he walked out.

While every gang is different they all agree on one thing: blood in, blood out. For a year of his life he had to fight off various attacks both physical and mental, since he left his familia, his gang family that is, he lost all respect on the streets. One day he had enough, Martinez needed respect again and he had heard of a group called the Crimson Legion. Jesús tried joining straight up after a visit to the moon that houses New Rhome, Europa. He was denied, for not having enough experience. So Jesús walked away muttering under his breath about experience. For a while Martinez waited and listened, the group of mercenaries casually dropped word about their target, "Huesos". Jesús was astounded, but it made sense, "Huesos" wasn't a good guy. He straightened up and left the bar, from there he went directly to the old hideout where "Huesos" resided carrying only his Cartage Pistol and Plasma knife. Jesús rushed the front doors, killing the enforcers outside, with a few bullets and a knifing. He slashed and shot three more before they could reach their guns and he looted their corpses of ammo and a single grenade. Then Martinez ran through the warehouse hideout using the only tactic he knew. bum rushing, it was effective although he received a bullet wound or two. Soon a bloodstained Jesús Martinez arrived at the boss's door and knocked rather clichey before he whipped the grenade through the window and jumped back down to the first floor. As the explosion sounded he walked back up to what was left of the boss's room and opened the door to confirm his kill. Which, of course, killed him nobody expects a grenade to the window. After looting the office of money he walked down to first floor and waited as he thought, "How's this for experience." As a bewildered group of mercenaries arrived Jesús asked "So when do I get picked up?" and while the group was a little put off about a felon on the team, you can't forget about the mission that was accomplished by one man. When asked about his alias he told them his old gang name "El Salvador Loco" and from there adventures started.

Green: So it looks like a good start, but there are a few things I have to nitpick on. First off and this is the big one, Earth was destroyed 500 years ago so you can't really grow up in LA. (Its in the races thing I'm not just making this up). But you can adapt your story to elsewhere and still work with it. Secondly The legion isn't just a you sign up kind of deal, its is due to your performance in the field that you get an invite. Now I don't think a gang war would be enough to draw their full attention, maybe give it a little peak, and time in prison doesn't exactly count as work experience and even if he had been under watch after four years frankly they wouldn't care anymore as you stated saying he lost his street cred. And a year of fighting off a gang on your own is a bit impressive and enough to get you back on the radar, but it is lacking that moment, that spark that would merit a recruitment. Maybe if you added in something at the end that would secure you a place. You know just one thing that makes the legion go alright we want him.

Other than that he looks good, also you win brownie points for using James. Also my Fiance is from El Salvador so that also wins you random brownie points.
just saying

... In your spare time you should reeaaalllyyy expand on the whole galactic history thing :P

Lol well I would say that would count for a "spark" and more than enough to catch their attention. I'll accept him.

I can't wait to do this!

also are we paid or?....

Sorry guys I have been busy today and just sat down for a few seconds.

Nope it charity work :) lol, ya we get payed, and well I might add, but I wasn't really planning on implementing a money system really, if you want to use money for something, just run it past me in PM and it will probably just be all good

Aww we can't just requisite anything we need from our wonderful armorer?

Arthanus said
Sorry guys I have been busy today and just sat down for a few seconds.Nope it charity work :) lol, ya we get payed, and well I might add, but I wasn't really planning on implementing a money system really, if you want to use money for something, just run it past me in PM and it will probably just be all good

I was just asking so I can something along the lines of "OK, time to earn your food, boys!" or something like that

So we only have 4 members of a ground team right now, I would kind of like at least six before we start, so if you guys know anyone who you think would like to join in please ask them to. Because I really don't want to have a generic NPC Alpha and Beta to fill up our spots.

Also I had a good idea, Mage being the operator I think it should be your job to decide who goes where in the operation. It only makes sense :)

really? I don't know...... first time I've been chosen to do that!

I don't have friends sorry D:

Arth, scratch one. Dracon is going to join

I have some reading to do here but I can take a spot if that's fine?

I would think so. We're still trying to get people to just fill in spots so you'd probably be safe to start your CS but arthanus has the final call lol

Mage: no worries, you just got choose where you think the best place for people to go. You should do fine. Unless everyone prefers to choose what job you want.

Crim: yes were still accepting feel free to post up a cs.

Okay, thanks, I am making a demo character, and will have him up by the end of the night here.

Well I updated the current roster and I'm going to get ready to move us forward into the real rp so we can start once we get another cs or two up. So ill put it here and ask, which team do you want to be apart of in the first operation.

Team 1 - Infiltration Unit

Team 2 - Assault Unit

Team 3 - Sabotage/Clean up Unit