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I'm debating between a zoan fistfighter or a swordswoman.
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I'm debating between a zoan fistfighter or a swordswoman.


If it helps I'm doing knife fighter.
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If it helps I'm doing knife fighter.


Hmm... Maybe...
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I'm debating between a zoan fistfighter or a swordswoman.


Wow. My thoughts exactly lol

Also, a few things.
1. Is there anywhere you guys would prefer the story starts out with? I find myself leaning more towards East Blue, if only for tradition's sake, but I could probably get things going from anywhere.

2. As far as characters go is there anything I need to specify to help with the CS creation? Is there anyone who needs help designing a character, because I've got time and would be more than happy to help.

3. As far as a starting time for the actual rp, I realize that this is going to be a crazy weekend and all, but I don't want to just leave the beginning postponed indefinite. So.. how about we set things up for Monday?


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Name: Bella Nocturne
Alias: Nightshade Chef
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Age: 27
Position on the Ship: Cook
Personality: Curious is one word that can easily describe Bella. Her curiosity has led her into many a problematic situation. Creativity is another defining factor of who Bella is it takes some creativity to hide the taste of toxins. She hates waste, both effort and resources. She considers bad cooks to be a waste of her oxygen, though she believes those who are learning to cook or trying to improve are worth the combined weight of the kitchen in gold.
Background: Growing up in a well off family she wanted for nothing but spent time in the kitchen watching the servants working. One day on a trip to another island for a fun vacation their ship was destroyed by pirates she floated on some flotsam to a deserted island at the age of eleven. Her life took a horrid turn on that island but it helped shape her into who she is. 9 years on that island gave her time to learn to survive and more importantly kill things so she can survive as well as different ways to do it. Rescued by a ship that stopped to investigate and brought her back to civilization. Back in civilization she got a job working as a cook in a bar and proceeded to work up the chain.
Weapons/ Items: Assorted Knives, Collection vials, Poison test strips.
Abilities: Encyclopedic knowledge of poisonous/venomous flora/fauna, Advanced knife skills, Good accuracy with thrown objects.
Techniques: (Having trouble thinking of these)
Other:
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@malmshodes Well more specifically a mythic type Xian if that's okay
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@malmshodes Well more specifically a mythic type Xian if that's okay


I don't have any problem with someone using a mythical zohan on principle, but if its OP I won't accept it.

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Quick question: who is planning on being a devil fruit user? I ask because I'm working on my character and want to have her on the minority.


I'm planning on making an 'inventor' type who uses sound vibrations, so no fruit ability.

I'm debating between a zoan fistfighter or a swordswoman.


Not to step on your toes or anything, but my character will also be a swordsperson who will essentially use a steel-plated string bass as a shield and a bladed bow as the sword. Not that there's an issue with having multiple swordspeople. Just thought I'd let you know.
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I'm planning on making an 'inventor' type who uses sound vibrations, so no fruit ability.

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Not to step on your toes or anything, but my character will also be a swordsperson who will essentially use a steel-plated string bass as a shield and a bladed bow as the sword. Not that there's an issue with having multiple swordspeople. Just thought I'd let you know.


That sounds really cool!
As far as the sword thing does, I don't have any issues with several people using swords. :)

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As far as the other instruments go, are any of them weaponized too, or somehow used in his fighting style?

Other than that I like him. He's an interesting character with unique abilities.
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Hello I see the doctor space is available and wish to play with you all
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Hello I see the doctor space is available and wish to play with you all


Wish granted. I'll reserve the doctor spot for you :)
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As far as the other instruments go, are any of them weaponized too, or somehow used in his fighting style?

Other than that I like him. He's an interesting character with unique abilities.


For the time being, none of his other instruments are weaponized, but his combat growth will be split between refining his fighting technique and inventing/weaponizing musical instruments.
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For the time being, none of his other instruments are weaponized, but his combat growth will be split between refining his fighting technique and inventing/weaponizing musical instruments.


Sounds good. He's accepted. Go ahead and put him in the character section :)
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Name : Chester Caraway
Alias: The Disturbed Doctor
Age: 20
Appearance: he is tall about 6'2" and has a barrel chest and broad shoulders his physic is in prime condition at all times his diet and musculoskeletal system finely cared for. He has icy blue eyes with a ring of gray around the pupils . His hair is a light grayish brown and pulled back in a messy ponytail. He wears a lab coat and a tan dress shirt with suspenders and brown pants with dress shoes.

Personality:he has multiple personality quirks and suffers from mild schizophrenia and bipolar disorder .he has a habit of making people uncomfortable with tales of past successful and unsuccessful surgical stories. He is kind and generous though his motives seem rather mysterious. He never has a dour mood and always wears a grin.

Background: he came from a small island ravaged by disease war and famine his father was killed and he was taken in by a triage doctor he studied with the man for the greater part of his life before man was executed the two for a long time searched for new methods and experiments to bypass hunger and thirst or to repair the body he was treated as a dangerous entity.

Weapons: steel darts/ randomized chemical compounds/ needle and thread

Abilities: eidetic learning from books. Razor fine eye hand control. He can memorize pictures and written words permanently upon study . His hands never slip of twitch and every action is precisely planned hence his accuracy with steel darts

Techniques: battlefield mcgyver: He has an immense pool of knowledge and can occasionally turn mundane items into lethal weapons and traps. Strange science: uses a temporary mutagenic agent with unknown consequences

Position: doctor

Negatives: ADD like behavior and forgets to label things . DANGEROUSLY curious
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This is my first draft in case I need to edit it
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Name : Chester Caraway
Alias: The Disturbed Doctor
Age: 20
Appearance: he is tall about 6'2" and has a barrel chest and broad shoulders his physic is in prime condition at all times his diet and musculoskeletal system finely cared for. He has icy blue eyes with a ring of gray around the pupils . His hair is a light grayish brown and pulled back in a messy ponytail. He wears a lab coat and a tan dress shirt with suspenders and brown pants with dress shoes.
Personality:he has multiple personality quirks and suffers from mild schizophrenia and bipolar disorder he has a habit of making people uncomfortable with tales of past successful and unsuccessful surgical stories
Background: he came from a small island ravaged by disease war and famine his father was killed and he was taken in by a triage doctor he studied with the man for the greater part of his life before man was executed the two for a long time searched for new methods and experiments to bypass hunger and thirst or to repair the body he was treated as a dangerous entity.
Weapons: steel darts/ randomized chemical compounds
Abilities: eidetic learning from books. Razor fine eye hand control.
Position: doctor
Negatives: ADD like behavior and forgets to label things . DANGEROUSLY curious


First thing, please try to put some more effort into your punctuation, mainly the ending punctuation, please.

The personality section needs to be at least a full paragraph long. So it needs three more sentences.

The biography is a bit hard to understand because of the punctuation issues. Could you clean it up a little.

What kind fighter is he? How does he use his abilities in a fight?

What about techniques? Our characters are just starting out so they don't have a wide range of abilities under their belts but I'd at least like to see each person with a technique or two.

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The reason why it's my first draft I'll do some edits and try cleaning up my punctuation but it's honestly a weak suit
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Alright there's the first edit tell me if I should add or remove anything
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