@FamishedPants You da real MVP.

@Spriggs27 I hope you enjoy flatteringly insulting pickup lines. Because that's all I know.

you think it's a newcomer but it was me ! Dio !@FamishedPants i don't know how set a image it's the only thing i can't do it's embarassing@Lunarlors34;~;

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......
This is my response.
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Quit silently judging me. I can feel the thoughts that are racing through your mind.

@Zelosse Well that might not get him far.

name:
Rachild Severus

appearence:
Rachild have Brown hair and yellow eyes, he is small and not very strong, he wearing clothe butler everytimes, he have a sword with him and a bag full of book

age:
20

gender:
male

race:
Human

Magic:
he practice the magic of yang a lot, he use it when he want disappears without be followed

personnality:
Rachild is very mischievous and quiet most of the time, he harvest informations and has a very good memory for that, he is very vindictive towards those who try to manipulate or those who hit weaker than itself, when he want something, he have it everytime

background:
Rachild is an elite trader who is capable of is provided the rare object also easily as it harvest information, since all small living selling information as shared secret has another person, he had quickly the reputation of "little Weaset" at his customer but no one knows his identity in this environment, thanks to this it creates a cover of trader and he works for the highest bidder He has long studied the magic but his mastery of the sword is mediocre, despite this its origin remains unknown, but there is still quite unknown in others

like:
Rachild love silence more than money, as he likes to be discreet and people give him what he wants when he trade, he has a particular interest in the spirit and magic, he writte a book secretly for the information of each magic and every spirits.
He loves hospitality more than anything and it will make a service has all those who evidence

dislike:He hate being manipulated or others search in his personal case, but he hate the cult of the witch more than everything to the point of giving free information about their meeting point has anyone chase them

i don't know if it's okay sooooo ^^"

@Dioxit

Feels a little google translatey for me.

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Quit silently judging me. I can feel the thoughts that are racing through your mind.

@Zelosse Well that might not get him far.

Honestly it isn't supposed to. It's the razzle dazzle he puts into action that sets hearts aflame.

i didn't use Google translater i use it only for complicated words so it's normal, but i try to writte more than possible so i think i will correct some words@FamishedPants thank you for noticed ^^

i correct that it's okay now ?@FamishedPants

@Zelosse

If you're trying to spark a flame in someone's heart with razzle and dazzle, then you probably shouldn't try to do so while Heinrich's around. :^)

@Dioxit

I'm not the one who decides who joins so you don't really have to worry about my opinion, but it still looks fairly bad. I am going to go out on a limb and assume that english is not your native language, though, so it is not as though I can blame you. You could be worse. You could be Fiddle, who writes about six paragraphs but if you put it through google translate you'll find that all he does in his post is like one or two things and the rest is jibberish.

Fuck you fiddle you little pussybitch fite me 1v1 final destination no items no scopes.

thank you for you're opinion @FamishedPants it's actually not my native language so i try to do my best so i ask to everybody, i think it's better if i have the opinions of everyone and i think you see it now : i don't use Google translate if that can make you feel better ^^

@FamishedPants Imagine how I felt when I had to speed read through the whole IC. So much fluff from everyone I just skipped the 5 last pages, reading only a couple words here and there.

@FamishedPants
Oh yeah he writes an entire paragraph just to describe the particular shade of color their shoelace is XD

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Honestly it isn't supposed to. It's the razzle dazzle he puts into action that sets hearts aflame.

He'll have to fight Vesta before she would consider rubbing her horns against his, she can't just rub her horns against any old person, shes not some kind of harlot or street walker that rubs horns with people.

Name:
Rachild Severus

Appearence:
Rachild has Brown hair and yellow eyes, a small build with little to no muscle. His attire consists of butler-like clothing at all times and wears a sword on his hip and his bag seems to always be filled with books.

Age:
20

Gender:
Male

Race:
Human

Magic:
A competent user of Yang magic

Personality:
Rachild is a very mischievous and quiet person. He is quite good at collecting information and has a very good memory to aid in that venture. He is very vindictive towards those who try to manipulate or those who hit weaker than itself, when he want something, he have it everytime

background:
Rachild is an elite trader who is capable of is provided the rare object also easily as it harvest information
Since all small living selling information as shared secret has another person
He had quickly the reputation of "little Weasel" to his customers but no one knows his identity in this environment
Thanks to this he covers as a trader while secretly he works for the highest bidder
He has long studied the magic but his mastery of the sword is mediocre
Despite this its origin remains unknown, but there is still quite unknown in others

Like:
Rachild loves silence more than money
He likes to be discreet
Good at trading
He has a particular interest in the spirits and magic
He writes a journal filled with information of each magic and every spirit(s) he has come across or learnt about
He loves hospitality more than anything and will make a service to all who have evidence

DislikeHe hates himself or others being manipulated to search in his personal case
He hates the cult of the witch more than everything to the point of giving away free information about their location to just about anyone so they can hunt them down and bring them to justice

There ya go edited most of it for ya :P Except the parts where I had no idea what you meant.
@Dioxit

thank you very much@Lunarlors34for the help, for be honest i was lost when i write it ^^"

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He'll have to fight Vesta before she would consider rubbing her horns against his, she can't just rub her horns against any old person, shes not some kind of harlot or street walker that rubs horns with people.

Challenge accepted.

i think i have to wait wait liferusher for confirm my IC

well anyway how are you today ? :D @Zelosse@Lunarlors34@Spriggs27 @FamishedPants

Ok now, need some clarification. I know that The human wielding sword with its human, the orc and his slave, both dead, the bland blonde bii..mbo, the meat shield, Tani and Satella AND this latex freak ( I mean just look )


These guys are/were all in a fight and my guy is watching them do it. What about all the other's location/condition?