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Finding a name that I that fits by describing the character is actually difficult.


Do you want to describe personality or powers?

On the images front, Danbooru doesn't allow for hotlinking, yeah.
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<Snipped quote by Pudding>

Do you want to describe personality or powers?

On the images front, Danbooru doesn't allow for hotlinking, yeah.


That explains why they weren't showing up for me. ^^;
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*second attempt*

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@Pudding: So she has a debuff focus then, basically? It's after 2:12 in the morning and I make a point of not accepting or declining things after 12:00, but you're probably safe in assuming she's accepted. ^^;

Just don't move her to the characters tab until I post it officially.
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Yeah, Debuff. My concept is that she brings others down to build herself up.
So essentially her skills will revolve around sapping other peoples strength to increase her own.

Cool. I'll wait till you post officially
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@Pudding East Asian names are written surname first. If Himeko's the given name, then the characters should read 富有 姫子.

Rich Princess, huh? The entire family having a surname meaning 'rich' must be interesting.
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I'm aware of that. But honestly I've never had an RP be so specific about names, lel.
For the sake of localization, I wrote it that way.
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I'm aware of that. But honestly I've never had an RP be so specific about names, lel.
For the sake of localization, I wrote it that way.


Using western order for the Romanisation (Himeko Fuyuu) is fine, but East Asian names in character form always remain in eastern order.

Wikipedia uses the western order, as seen here, but they always use the eastern order too: (小泉 純一郎 Koizumi Jun'ichirō?). Changing the order basically changes how the name is written (and sometimes gets rid of some jokes that can be made too, such as I did with Hyoukyo).
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I don't think it's that big of a deal in an RP setting o.o)"
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I don't think it's that big of a deal in an RP setting o.o)"


Fixing 姫子富有 to 富有姫子 is like fixing Smith John into John Smith. It's just like using grammar correctly. I don't introduce myself to people outside of East Asia as 翾朱, I just use 朱翾 like I always do. Of course, when romanised, I give it in western order.

Himeko Fuyuu's fine, but using that order in the Japanese is blatantly incorrect if you want to write the name correctly. If you're supplying the name in the original Japanese, keep it in Japanese order. Localisation can occur once you transliterate it into the Roman alphabet and switch the name to western order.
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Honestly, I kind of don't care.
Like, I've been nice and listened to what you've had to say, but at this point, you're just wasting your breath. I know it's grammatically wrong. I understand how Japanese grammar works. It's not a big deal. Lel
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Honestly, I kind of don't care.
Like, I've been nice and listened to what you've had to say, but at this point, you're just wasting your breath. I know it's grammatically wrong. I understand how Japanese grammar works. It's not a big deal. Lel


If you don't care about it that much, then it shouldn't pose too much difficulty to correct the wrong.
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You're right, it's not difficult. But it's much easier to leave it as is.
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Name: 中島 星 (Nakajima Hoshi)

Magical Girl Title: Shooting Star

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Appearance:


Magical Girl Appearance: Upon Transformation, Hoshi’s garb becomes a blazing red, black, and gold uniform that harkens back, strangely enough, to the livery of the Prussian military of old, that might make you ask, "Ch-Char?" at first glance. While the heeled boots and long, flowing scarf may not seem combat practical to the average viewer, rest assured that Hoshi’s all action, high-octane, three-times-faster-than-you fighting style isn’t hindered in the slightest. Just like the glorious starburst emblazoned upon her chest, our girl is ready to race into the fray, as soon as she dons her shades after transformation!

Wouldn’t want Aniki to learn we’re endangering ourselves, after all.

Personality: Hoshi is an optimistic girl, whose basal state is the casually upbeat type of person who makes friends quickly and does so for keeps. She appreciates life in its utmost, and all of the beautiful little things in it, in her mind, should be cherished, because one never knows when they might be gone.

And that duality of nature is what drives her, beneath her easygoing, and at times almost breezy demeanor. She understands very deeply the importance of protecting that which she holds dear, and how suddenly, callously, and quickly life can flip itself upon its head and tear everything away if one isn’t careful. Not willing to let that happen in the slightest, Hoshi is always willing to do whatever it takes to hold them close. Running in the morning? No problem. Looking up martial arts and boxing training manuals online and practicing in the living room? Worth it. Making food when she can to help lighten her Aniki’s load? She’d do it every day if she could.

When a little girl is given a second chance at life, she’s bound to want to do two things: Make the most of it, and Give Back with all of her heart. She is a fiercely loyal friend who is nearly impossible to anger, let alone lose, and she will always have the backs of the people she cares about, no matter what their problems are. She knows firsthand how much of a difference having even one person there in a time of need can help someone.

As such, if you talk to her, you’ll find yourself conversing with one of the friendlier girls on this side of the planet. Though her decorum isn’t always up to snuff, there is no true impoliteness about her, save from the rare burst of a dry witticism. We can blame her Aniki for that one, given that such phrases are basically his primary form of communication. And while on the subjects of things good old Nakajima Kyotaro can be blamed for, let's discuss her tastes in entertainment. Being a guy living on his own, he didn't have much in the way of things that would interest the usual twelve-year-old girl, so she ended up making do with what he had to offer. One of her fondest memories was when they first watched a movie together, Enter the Dragon. From there, she found that, while she wasn’t lacking in traditionally “girly” tastes by any means (her wardrobe is a testament to this), she also had an untapped love for action, fighting, and other shonen stuff, much to his surprise. Even fighting games! He had to deal with her spamming Raging Demons for three weeks, once…

Despite her willingness to give most things a try, one line she definitely will not cross is that set by her moral compass. Her resolve to protect others is absolute, and she will never quibble on her sense of right and wrong. Everyone, however, deserves a second chance.

That’s a sure thing.

Skills: You mean besides making her Aniki worry? She’s a naturally fast runner, and while she never had the opportunity to get on the track team in middle school, she could often be seen running with them in the early mornings after the coach figured out she wasn’t hurting anything. As such, her stamina is also at a very high level for a young girl of her age, which helps her in her self-taught martial arts training. This training consists mainly of form work found off the internet, since Aniki won’t buy her a punching bag or something and for some reason she hasn’t looked into martial arts schools nearby. She’s a surprisingly good singer, at least during karaoke time, an increasingly experienced cook, and a thorn in her Aniki’s side in most fighting games by this point.

Abilities: Her magical girl abilities all revolve around one thing: raw speed. While her strength is indeed enhanced by the transformation, as it is for every magical girl, the gains made are dwarfed by those towards speed, agility, and reaction time. Simple and straightforward, much like her approach to fighting: Get over there and hit it a lot.

To that end, her “Special Moves” tend to take full advantage of her blinding speed, such as a “Gungnir Thrust”, which is essentially a flying side kick delivered at ridiculous speeds for the maximum possible impact, with a few directional variations. Another would be the “North Star Blitz”, which is perhaps even simpler— bunches and bunches of punches, all over and slipping through any opening they can find. The strangest of the lot is most definitely “Roar of the Dragon”, a punch thrown so hard and fast that the sheer force of air displacement alone is concussive, allowing her range to suddenly spike out by ten feet at this point in time.

And that’s to say nothing of all the other fun ideas Aniki’s shows and games have given her…

Weapon(s): Everyone who’s ever punched a wall knows—hands are pretty fragile. Even with proper form helping them out, there’s still only so much of an impact the knuckles can take, so with that in mind, what’s a girl like Hoshi to do? Those monsters aren’t going to punch themselves, after all, so her hands need protection.

What better than a pair of golden gauntlets, that seem to glow like the stars in the night sky? Providing both protection and additional power to her strikes, Hoshi’s fistic pursuits would get nowhere without her weaponry. They even come with Kung Fu Grip!

Brief History: Hoshi’s life was, in all honesty, very, very normal. She was a normal girl, who lived in a normal house with her normal parents going to a normal school five days out of the week. She was happy, healthy, and full of all the vitality you would expect from a young lady in modern day Japan.

Then, her parents died at twelve.

Hoshi’s world was destroyed by a random car accident one night. There was no warning, not even a premonition of it. Her parents simply never came back. After a numb pair of nights in the Social Services office, her next, and as it would appear, only of kin was called in—one 22 year old, gainfully employed, and very, very bewildered Nakajima Kyotaro. Her mother’s nephew, and apparently, only Plan B. The two didn’t know each other at all until that point. She didn’t even know who he was until he returned a few hours later— and explained to her that he’d decided to take her in, if she wanted to come with him.

Without uttering a word, she would leave at his side a few minutes and a bunch of paperwork later.

Over the next few weeks, she would begin to get settled into her new home and used to her newfound older cousin being like an older brother, having wisely decided to not try and replace Mama and Papa despite taking on their status of Legal Guardianship. It was a slow, painful process, but 3 years on into the present day, Hoshi and Kyotaro are now practically inseparable, and not a day goes by where she doesn’t try and give back however she can. If she were ever to count her blessings, her "Aniki" would doubtlessly be at the top.

Hoshi is currently enrolled as a first-year at East Umitori High School, in class 1-C.

Fairy Name: テンドウ (Tendou)

Fairy Appearance: Tendou is a small woman, as most fairies tend to be, roughly palm sized. Her favored garb is rather traditionally japanese in style, and her long, straight blue hair reaches roughly down to her mid-back, partially done up into a small ponytail on the side. Her wings are birdlike, reminiscent of an eagle’s, but obviously much smaller.

Fairy Personality: Someone stop this girl from watching so many samurai movies. Her usual demeanor is poised in the utmost, and her cool head is often crucial in tempering Hoshi’s more hotblooded tendencies. Seems to fancy herself a wordsmith, and will often spew quotes and poetry where the situation deems appropriate. The jury, however, is still out on whether or not she just makes most of it up. What is clear is that she definitely cares for and has faith in her young charge, no matter how stoic she may seem to be. The girl has been through so much.

Theme Song: youtube.com/watch?v=AsbOOPkmEGw
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I'm interested, and should have an idea up soon for this.
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@Pudding: Accepted.

@HereComesTheSnow: Accepted.

@RolePlayerRoxas: Looking forward to it!
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Accepted. I'm getting increasingly excited about this RP, honestly.
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Afraid I'm going to drop out of this one, sorry. It's my own fault: it seems that everyone else had similar ideas to me and beat me to the punch so to speak. Good luck!
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