@RyoRyoRyoken Wish granted.

@Buddha Wow, I'm a bit blind. I only just now saw all the lists of suggested teams (to be fair I was heading to bed when all that went up iirc :P)

If I were to make any suggestions it would be maybe spread out the Chunin out a bit, but I don't know what the idea is plot or driving force wise so maybe a team chock full of Genin is what the plot demands

EDIT: Nice to see that there are more lovely lasses coming in for characters :)

@McFazzer that team is mostly because genin might not realize their sensei is "the old hokage". We thought it'd be more fun.

@Buddha that makes sense. Plus shenanigans will be the result, naturally :3

@RyoRyoRyoken Wish granted.

Chikage Yoshitaka [+]

Chikage Yoshitaka

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Chikage has burn scars covering her hands and most of her forearms, typically covered by her gloves.

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Personalia

_{Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure}

“Life's better when you aren't the one dying.”

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｎａｍｅ: |

Yoshitaka, Chikage

| Ａｌｉａｓ: |

Blood Shadow, as a pun of her name. Bomb Girl, as a reflection of what she does.

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Female

| Ａｇｅ: |

16

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: |

Konohagakure

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |

Yoshitaka

| Ｒａｎｋ: |

Genin

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Psychology & History

_{From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel}

“If I had a theme song...”

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

Though she never originally intended to become a kunoichi, Chikage had always been a little different from the rest of her family. She had more energy than they did and was never content with living an idle lifestyle. She was getting into trouble from the day she could crawl. Though not the sharpest tool in the shed she was not without her curiosity and willingness to learn, though her interests lay in more exciting things in life than simply running a store or crafting toys. It wasn't until a few years into the Winter did Chikage begin on her path to becoming a shinobi.

The first to succumb to the Winter in her family was her father, who refused to eat as a measure of keeping the rest of the Yoshitaka household alive. Then went her grandmother, to pneumonia. Her mother would share the same fate within a year. Losing her family took its toll on young Chikage. She had nothing to do and was generally suffering before she had emotional trauma. At the suggestion of her grandfather to avoid being idle, to distract herself from the miserable reality, Chikage entertained the idea of joining the Ninja Academy and doing something new and exciting. She was already predisposed to seeking cool and new things so her grandfather signed her up.

As it turned out there was a good reason nobody in the Yoshitaka family had ever tried to become a shinobi. She wasn't really good at it. Instructors found her chakra was weak and Chikage herself wasn't a very quick learner when it came to the basics despite all her effort. She tried and certainly improved over time, but her frantic nature and slow taking to ninjutsu made the instructors assume she wouldn't ever graduate. However it was found that she could make up for some of her weakness with shurikenjutsu, being that she had a very accurate throw. This wasn't enough. Just before all hope was lost and Chikage would be gripped by the cold fingers of depression, she was introduced to exploding tags.

Enthralled with the explosive nature, Chikage decided to infiltrate an armory and steal from their cache of tags to train with. Despite the apparent danger of such actions, as usually little girls with bombs don't come out alive, she had just enough of an appreciation for the danger as to not kill herself. In fact it inspired her to find out how to get explosives of her own once she exhausted her supply of stolen exploding tags. Though Chikage was never considered booksmart her mind became like a steel trap with the introduction of bombs to her life. She researched in secret and practiced making her own exploding tags and various other kinds of explosive materials in the basement of the Yoshitaka home. At least for a few days before one of her homemade bombs detonated. Though she lived to tell the tale and the house didn't collapse, as the explosion was only small enough to destroy her "lab" table, it did scar her arms and alert the authorities of her actions.

After a brief inquisition into what Chikage had done the Academy had to consider expelling her. This was dangerous business after all and she wasn't that great of a student anyways. But with her new knowledge and arsenal of bombs they were willing to give her another chance at becoming a shinobi and putting her new talent to use. She barely graduated from the Academy at the bottom of her class, scoring very low on all her tests but just enough to pass. To everyone's surprise she then went on to perform exceptionally well as a genin in the field. In combat situations, at least. Friends and foe alike were stunned and frightened by her wanton destruction. Some witnesses consider it a miracle that her seemingly indiscriminate attacks haven't killed anyone she didn't intend them to. It didn't take long for her to get a reputation for her explosive style.

Unfortunately Chikage has remained a genin for almost four years now. While she has proven that she can easily kill her enemies, and have fun doing it too, she has noticeably been lacking in other vital aspects of being shinobi. The Hokage has noted her incredible irresponsibility as one of the key factors in being unable to be promoted, even going so far as to say that Chikage is plainly dumb when it comes to anything but blowing stuff up. She has no other valuable skills and has to completely rely on the leadership of others lest she default to her back-up plan of destroying everything. Despite her youth she has racked up some of the most collateral damage in the Land of Fire, costing Konoha a sizeable amount of money every year to repair the damages. Despite not being promoted this doesn't seem to bother Chikage much at all. She's been perfectly content to remain a genin. She only cares to have something to entertain herself with, be it a mission or whatever else may come with the lifestyle. She can only enjoy herself with the fleeting experiences such as combat. If her hands remain idle too long she begins to drift away from her sanity. The reckless, almost suicidal action is much preferred over any silence that forces her to remember the Winter. Being "Bomb Girl" is merely a coping mechanism, but nobody would be able to tell that just by looking. The fun Chikage has while blowing up her enemies does a good job for masking her problems.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

The Yoshitaka family has been resident to Konohagakure for four generations by now, having prior existed in the region since before the village was founded. Far too small to be considered a clan and far too lacking in achievement to be considered well-known, the Yoshitaka lineage has been filled with primarily farmers prior to Konoha's existence. The more recent generations since had been more varied in their professions, adapting to the city lifestyle and leaving the farm behind. Most recently they have come to own a toy store, though business had been rocky during the Winter and left the family rather poor. The Winter took more than just their wealth but also lives, leaving Chikage and her grandfather as the remaining members of the Yoshitaka family.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |

Yoshitaka Yasujiro | Father | 36 (at death), Konohagakure, held many jobs with no career, died of malnutrition
Yoshitaka Miyuki | Mother | 39 (at death), Konohagakure, former toymaker, died of illness
Yoshitaka Chieko | Grandmother | 60 (at death), Konohagakure, former toy store owner, died of illness
Yoshitaka Reizo | Grandfather | 63, Konohagakure, toymaker and toy store owner, Chikage's legal guardian

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |

Some may find it hard to believe, but the seemingly fearless Chikage has her mental weaknesses. Who would guess that someone perfectly willing to strap bombs to themselves would fear anything? Certainly not death. But rather Chikage fears having nothing to do, as her mind is quick to wander and she will eventually go into a depression. Her memories of her deceased family and hard life before becoming a shinobi still haunts her and she's afraid that she will never forget. In fact her greatest hope is that one day she will be able to forget all her bad memories and be able to only have fun. All she wants in life is to enjoy herself, learn new things, and meet new people, but she believes that can never happen while she can still remember sad things. Sadness is her worst enemy and she wants nothing more than to be rid of that emotion entirely.

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Combat Reports

_{From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches}

“Did somebody say 'firepower'?”

| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: |

Surprising literally no one, Chikage earned the title of "Bomb Girl" for her aptitude in the preparation and use of explosives. She isn't much of a front-line fighter, but she excels at mid-range combat where she can throw things at her opponents. Usually bombs. Chikage is also incredibly dangerous in ambushes or surprise attacks, using the element of surprise to her advantage for lethal results. She is actually on the stealthier side and prefers the ambush approach to any combat scenario. Enemies that are not focused on her or are otherwise preoccupied are her prime targets. If she has to pelt them with explosives from range or if she can surprise them with a trap, it doesn't matter to her. The only times she has issues is when her opponents get in close which often prompts her to retreat to avoid the beating she would surely receive. She will never fight close-quarters unless there was no other choice. Though at that point it may not be in her opponent's best interests to corner her like that being that she is known as "Bomb Girl"...

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

N/A

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

N/A

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

N/A

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

N/A

Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

All Academy Techniques

| Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Sealed Hell the Eye Cannot See

Ｒａｎｋ

D

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Medium

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

The only named technique that Chikage has in her repertoire outside of standard techniques. It is simple in design, serving to mask explosive tags to perfectly match the appearance of whatever surface they are applied to as a camouflage. Only this can be done to many explosive tags over a wide area. This allows Chikage to plant undetectable bombs throughout a battlefield. This gives the illusion that Chikage can make things in her vicinity explode at random but this does require some preparation beforehand to be useful. If she is seen using this technique it kills the surprise and alerts the enemy to her strategy. A personal favorite for Chikage is to use this technique while her enemies are occupied fighting teammates, planting bombs around the avenues of escape they may take so as to kill them when they retreat.

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |

Weapon List [+]

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Explosive Tags

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Explosives

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Strips of paper that have been sealed with explosives. These can be activated with chakra, detonating on either a timer afterwards or immediately depending on the seal. Chikage has more of these than any sane person would be willing to carry.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Smoke Bombs

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Explosives

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Small explosive pouches that quickly release a large cloud of white smoke upon activation. Used for concealment and confusing enemies. These are Chikage's go-to tool for escaping bad situations.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Kunai/Shuriken

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Throwing Weapons

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Common throwing knives that are common in the shinobi world. Chikage likes to attach explosives to them.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Homemade Bombs

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Explosives

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Explosive pouches that Chikage makes in her free time, consisting of explosive tags and homemade nitroglycerin. Once activated with chakra they will detonate on any reasonably solid impact. These create a much larger explosion than a single explosive tag would create.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Sealed Barrel Bombs

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Explosives

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Large wooden barrels containing gunpowder and homemade nitroglycerin, with exploding tags on the exterior. They are stored in sealing scrolls that Chikage keeps along her belt, each scroll containing three barrels. Perfect for providing very powerful explosions when able to be prepared and hidden before combat for an exploding trap, though they can be used from the air as dangerous cluster bombs. Sufficient impacts will detonate the barrels, though the exploding tags on the exterior can be activated on a timer for more utility.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Slingshot

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Projectile

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

A wrist-mounted slingshot that Chikage will use to launch her homemade bombs over a great distance at speeds greater than she can achieve by throwing. Also useful for non-explosive projectiles such as smoke bombs, rocks, or whatever small objects may be within reach. With proper lobbing and aim, Chikage can launch projectiles over half a kilometer away.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Ninja Wire

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Utility

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Thin metal wire, similar to fishing line but much sturdier. Effective in conducting chakra, making it a useful tool for shinobi who set traps. Chikage typically uses her wire to remote detonate her barrel bombs in ambush attacks or controlled demolition. Can also be used for restraining captives.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

"Chikage Surprise"

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Explosive

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

The "Chikage Surprise" isn't surprising to anyone who knows Chikage. Essentially a suicide vest that Chikage wears underneath her normal garb, meticulously (and uncharacteristically) designed to have failsafes and be impossible to accidentally detonate. Composed primarily of exploding tags, vast quantities of them, this "Surprise" has been intended to use as a last resort or a means to avoid being captured by enemies. Morbid intentions aside, Chikage is also perfectly willing to use it as a bluff and intimidate people within her vicinity to bending to her will by threatening their lives. Though Chikage has yet to test this exact vest, previous tests with prototypes indicate that the blast radius is sufficient to her intended purposes. In her own words: "I have to worry about not taking my comrades with me more than the enemies escaping. I probably won't feel a thing but not so sure about anyone else..."

Accepted

Nō [+]

Nō Iemochi

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Personalia

_{Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure}

“The Sun always rises the next day so don't worry”

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Iemochi Nōhime

| Ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅｓ: |

Nō

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Cherry Blossom Mistress

| Ｓｅｘ: |

Female

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17

| Ｂｉｒｔｈｐｌａｃｅ: |

Konohagakure

| Ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ: |

Iemochi

| Ｒａｎｋ: |

Chunin

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Psychology & History

_{From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel}

“Rise and Shine, time to get to work”

| Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

Nō is a young kunoichi who comes from the Iemochi clan. Her clan is originally from the Iwagakure but migrated to the Konohagakure during the Winter War. She was raised in a household full of strong women who had a desolate out look on life. Nō was the youngest of her mothers brood, and was treated as such. She would always be picked on for her smiling and joyous nature, while everyone around her would be smirking with vengeance and carry a thirst for revenge. Her families dark nature made her want to be even brighter and lighten the mood. She can always be seen having a optimistic outlook on any situation and enjoying her time with her friends. Even during the winter, the women of her clan added to the despair of the situation while she was seen as a shinning light of joy even in the toughest of time.

During her early years as a genin and academy student she earned the nickname "Smiles" simply because that is what you could see on her face all the time. She grew up learning lighting and earth release to prepare her for the Iemochi clan's kekkei genkai, Bakuton. She is no prodigy by any means and to took most of her time as a genin to learn to use it and then to apply it in combat it took her even longer. She only recently passed her chunin exams due to her usage of her new technique. Always striving to do her best and work with everyone, she is not shy to combat. The cooperative nature shines on the battle field, fine on her own, she is good at supporting her allies and watching their back. People started calling her the "Cherry Blossom Mistress" due to the color of her explosions being a cherry blossom pink and one of her techniques dawning the name. It was given to her by her grandmother before she died at the end of the Winter.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｂｉｏｇｒａｐｈｙ: |

Iemochi Clan
Th Iemochi clan originates in the Iwagakure. The men of the clan are usually bland and easily blend into a crowd while the women shine bright. Most have some blistering characteristic whether it be eye color, or hair color or even skin color. The clan itself was famed in the Iwagakure for its usage of Bakuton, the trait to use it was only carried by the women making them "rare gems" in the land of earth.

The reason the clan left the Iwagakure was because of the betrayal. The Iemochi clan went on the dry spell when birthing women, and continued to give birth to men that provided no strategic advantage to the village. So the Tsuchikage, a cruel man at the time, approved of the discrete assassination of all the men in their clan. This sent the women into a outrage and a time of grief, only later that turned into hate and anger. The clan knew it had to leave the village so they did, and the Tsuchikage let them, calling the women "a dying breed, and any village that took them in would be taking in a infertile and wounded dog".

But the Konohagakure did accept them before any other could snatch them away. Hyuga Jurou told the Iemochi clan that he had two reason for taking them in; their kekkei genkai and because he had pit on their situation. They went in towards the end of his reign and many of the other clans did not bother them, but when he died most of the clans came forth and spoke about their distaste and distrust of the kunoichis. Some even went as far as to call the spies, laying in wait for their time to strike. This is why most of the clan members are dark and broody, always quick to strike and not caring about others.
But even during the Winter and its long stay, the clan never acted against the will of fire, and did their duty to the Konohagakure and its people.

Today their are not as hated but still many are not quick to trust the Iemochi Clan. Some of the older people feel that they are still going to stab the village in the back in the end. Their is no one main branch they all consider themselves one big family with many mothers. The clan head is elected by popular vote and a test of strength and their are two rules, no man my be head of the clan and no daughter of the current clan head can take the position while their parent still be in rule. The current clan head is Kikyo Iemochi.

| Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ｔｉｅｓ: |

Tano Iemochi| Oldest Sister | 37, Konoha, Jounin
Suguro Iemochi| 2nd Sister | 27, Konoha, Nurse and Civilian
Hoshino Iemochi| 3rd Sister | 20, Iemochi Compound, Civilian
Muratagi Iemochi| Mother | 63, Iemochi Compound, retired Jounin

| Ｄｒｅａｍｓ ａｎｄ ｆｅａｒｓ: |

Dreams: Nō has, like many girls in her clan, always wanted to take the trial and become head of her clan. She dreams that one day she can bring smiles to all those who have been wronged in the past and are still bitter over it and those, like her, who where born into the hands of hate and sadness, and did not get out of it. She understands that they are in a new age and stand in a different country but to her that means its all the more reason to start over and anew.

Fears: She fears that the hate programmed into her clan might claim her too. She knows that it was betrayal that brought them here, and its also betrayal that fuels their current condition, among other things. But her greatest fear is a what if; What if she is Betrayed? Will she become bitter and spiteful too? She fears the unknown and awaits the day someone crushes her trust.

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Combat Reports

_{From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches}

“Teamwork makes the Dream work”

| Ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ ｓｔｙｌｅ: |

Nō is a mid-close range fighter. She shines in fighting with her taijutsu know as "Explosive Fist" and a mixture of ninjutsu. Most fights she tries to get in close to her opponents as fast as she can and use her kekkei genkai to take them out quickly. Not as good at the "Explosive Fist" as her older sister she only knows the basic techniques and still relies heavily on her ninjutsu to help her get through a fight. Her only long range ability lies in her lighting ninjutsu, because most of her earth ninjutsu is meant for close up encounters. Best way to take her down is to keep her immobile and faraway so she does not get within striking distance, because once she is within close combat range she becomes harder to deal with.

| Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ － ｂｌｏｏｄｌｉｎｅ ｌｉｍｉｔ: |

Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａｉ ｎａｍｅ

Bakuton: Explosive Release

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Gives the user the ability to mix lighting and earth based chakras to create and use explosive chakra. It can be used in many different ways, but the most common is giving certain weapons explosive properties. Like giving a sword explosive slashes, turning kunai into a small grenade, or making a punch feel like you got hit by a bomb. Most Bakuton techniques are bright red/white when used, but the Iemochi Clan's Bakuton techniques have colors, colors that are distinct to the females "color". In the case of Nō her color is pink due to her eyes. The Iemochi have five ratings for explosive power: C0, C1, C2, C3, and C4. C4 being a small fire cracker mostly only taught to beginners but do not do any damage in combat, while C0 in the right hands can level entire portions of cities. There is only one C0 technique and it may be powerful but the user loses most body parts and is surly to die. It is called "Explosive God (Punch, Kick or Palm would go here)." Nō knows most of the basic C3 techniques and some C2 techniques.

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ

Bakuton can be overcome easily by over usage. The user can be greatly damaged by their attacks especially the higher up they go on the power chart. C0 is a guaranteed death, which is why there is only one technique, and the clan head knows it, that uses that amount of explosive chakra. While C1 will break bones, C2, C3 will hurt, burn, sting, leave scars and such, and C4 does little to nothing (hence why it is usually used to train and not for combat). The Bakuton levels where made around concentrations of explosive chakra, the more concentrated the stronger the explosions. The amount of chakra need is a big factor as well, so Bakuton users are good early fight but later game they can be weaker, slower to act and leave openings. Aside from the constant wear and tear of combat thick and sturdy surfaces cannot be blown through easily and take the power of C2 and above.

| Ｎｉｎｊａ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |
_{Jutsu names can be found here.}

Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Explosion Release: Blossom Destruction

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness
Lightning Release: Thunderbolt
Suicide Bombing Clone She makes a clone with Explosive chakra and can only make a C2 clone one at a time.

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Tracking Fang
Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Explosion Release: Exploding Palm
Explosion Release: Exploding Strike

| Ｃｕｓｔｏｍ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ: |

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Explosion Release: Exploding Strike

Ｒａｎｋ

C

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Melee

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

This jutsu is simply enough it focuses the explosive chakra into a certain body part causing it to glow with the distinctive color and then upon release which ever way that body park is facing that is the direction the explosion will go in. For example it the explosion was focused into the fist, when it is detonated if the fist is facing up the explosion will go up, if it is facing straight it will go straight. The power comes form the force and impact it causes. If its used at close range to an enemy it can be devastating not only to he enemy but also to the user even if they are not in the blast zone they are still affected with the initial shock and momentum that any explosion can cause. Take shooting a RPG (even though they don't exist) the shooter may not be blown to bits but he or she will still feel the kickback and power of the blast none the less. This is a C3 and can not blow holes in an enemy, it can wound and can hurt but not blow to smithereens. In the hands of a master (which Nō is not) you can use the power of C3 without losing a hand, arm, foot, or any other body part.

Ｊｕｔｓｕ ｎａｍｅ

Explosion Release: Blossom Destruction

Ｒａｎｋ

A

Ｒａｎｇｅ

Melee

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

This jutsu is special to Nō, she mixes two different techniques and makes a finishing move. She fist uses the Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness, to trap her enemy and layers the dome with C2 explosive chakra, she can only do this close to her enemy and it takes time to prepare. After making the dome she leaps in the air right above it and uses Explosion Release: Exploding Strike to punch the dome and trigger a giant explosion. Catching anyone inside and near by, in the blast including herself.The technique is risky and she has only used it one other time and after she used it she was in the hospital for two months. If it works it can either defeat a foe or cripple a stronger one, but it is easy to elude and if some one can find a way out the dome then it is a wasted attack.

| Ｗｅａｐｏｎｓ: |

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Bloom and Gloom

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Knives

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Twin knifes that Nō uses in battle. One is black and the other silver.

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Gloves

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Gloves

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

Black combat gloves that Nō uses in battle to protect her hands.

Accepted. Pretty dope.

Me and my love for weirdness.

Fairy Tail RP: I waited for a Mage that uses Orgasm Magic.

Naruto RP: *Waits for a Senju because hey they're so.......wood....*

That cuz I've never seen a Senju executed well in a Naruto RP.

BTW Hil, Bud. You guys know any player who have written a decent Uchiha character so far and other characters like Senju etc, it doesn't have to be from a canon clan, it can be an original.

I'm doing my marathon on old Naruto RPs for a good read and see it dying. SO far, I saw none. Guild wise.

#Let's all AIM TO WRITE GOOD CHARACTERS

I like to think that Yamato was well written. But, that's my own character, so I'm biased. Besides him, I was a fan of the Osuushi twins in True Peace. Aoi Don Maquia from Savato was also really well written.

@Buddha

Small request. I was wondering if I could switch Dio's Chakra Natures from Water/Wind to Water/Lightning?

I don't see why not but I want to remind you that the Hyuga 'natural affinity' is wind chakra and that he'd fall out of the boat with this one. Also, I'm not really sure that constantly changing characters right now is a smart idea. I leave it up to you though.

Edit: Up for review. Wish me luck... Review in red. Primarily the jutsu

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Hirtori Nagasaki

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Personalia

_{Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure}

“Man, I only have like ten of those left!”

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Nagasaki, Hitori.

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Hit.

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The Fool

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Male

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18

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Konohagakure

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Nagasaki

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Chunin

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Psychology & History

_{From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel}

“Just count One to Ten, and it will be all over.”

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Since birth Hitori was a silly individual. Always with a grin painted on his face and a cool demeanor that always allowed him to make friends quite easily. At the same time he seems to never care about anything, never opinionated on any subject and using facts to make his judgements on ideals. As he grew older and the hardships began to appear he became more calculated with any decision he makes. Always making a choice that would have the higher chance of achieving his goal. He achieves these goals in the swiftest manner possible.

In combat he seems to change. While usually never serious, he makes a exception when it comes to the well being of him, his friends, and family. Staying almost completely quiet and with his hands in his pockets, taking slow strides and movement until he finds it necessary to act. To see it for the first time, one would assume he had a death wish or was just a lazy individual. His actions gave him the Title of "The Fool". One part being for his care free silly personality, the other part being how he fools others to underestimate him until he reveals his true nature. Turning to a slow and lazy boy, to a quick highspeed fighter.

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The Nagasaki Clan was always a small clan that has never gained to much renown, but still respected for some of the individuals that were born to the name. The clan slowly began to die out before the Winter, now only leaving one family. Although this never came as a problem for his family, as they all have a care free view of the world. If the clan was to die out, it was just how it was supposed to be, but if it were to blossom then luck had shine upon them. For two generations, the family has suffered a curse that makes it harder than most in using Ninjutsu and Genjutsu.

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Hikari Nami| Mother | 41, Hitori's House, Stay at home Mother. Born an Orphan.
Daku Nagasaki| Father to Hitori| 42, Hitori's House, a Farmer for Konohagakure. An ex Jounin before the Winter.
Sutakku Nagasaki| Brother to Hitori | 8, Hitori's House. Has problems walking since birth, but known to be a Prodigy for being the best shot with a bow in the history of Konohagakure.

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Hitori has a modest dream of protecting his family. Although it also causes great fear that he could lose them someday. Hitori seems to be the only one to care for his Family and overall clan to grow and be known all around Konohagakure. Hitori hopes to be the catalyst for its bright future and brake their curse.

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Combat Reports

_{From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches}

“No. They didn't make it...”

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Hitori was born with the family curse of not being able to effectively use Ninjutsu and genjutsu by himself. He has taken to using the teaching of his Father, using scrolls and elemental bound weapons to help him in the use of Ninjutsu.

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Enclosing Prodigy

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Passed on to almost all that are born to the Nagasaki Family. This Ｋｅｋｋｅｉ ｇｅｎｋａ has allowed the Nagasaki Clan to enclose any and all items into a scroll with minimal chakra. It is rumored their Enclosing Technique Is so strong it is possible to trap a tailed beast inside. If it is a passed down technique and not limited by blood (i.e. it's a well kept secret on how they do it but theoretically anyone can learn it) then it's a hiden not a KG. This sounds more like a hiden

Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ

Allows Hitori to Enclose almost any kind of B rank or under Ninjutsu Limit this to the chakra natures that a user has and I'll accept it. Otherwise you can use all 5 chakra natures and I'm not a big fan of that., almost all weapons, and even some medium size Summons.

Ｗｅａｋｎｅｓｓｅｓ

It takes several seconds to minutes to Enclose the item. If physically interrupted, the process will have to restart. Depending on the object, it could also drain much of Hitori's Chakra

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Ａ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Gunbai Fanned Wind (Gunbai)

It's good, but it won't be anywhere near as strong as Madara (because you'd lack the chakra)

Ｂ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Wind Release: Wind Cutter Technique (GunBai)

Water Release: Water Fang Bullet (Kusari)

Manipulated Tools: Heavenly Chain Disaster

All fine

Ｃ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Dust Wind Technique (Gunbai)

Manipulated Tools: Binding Meteor

Twin Rising Dragons

Water Release: Gunshot (Kusari)

Ｄ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ

Enclosing Technique

Unsealing Technique

Dance of the Sickle Blade: Falling Descent Blade

Ｅ ｒａｎｋ ｔｅｃｈｎｉｑｕｅｓ
N/A
All good, look at the comments I made.

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Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Foul Wind

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Gunbai

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This weapon is a non-folding fan, carved from an unique spirit tree from which only ritualistic instruments are made. A Hierloom that was supposedly stolen from an unknown clan, during the founding years of Konohagakure. The fan itself can also be used as a club or to block attacks and has a Wind Element bound to it. It's about four feet tall and It is held on his back as a three foot long scroll. I'd honestly just carry the gunbai itself, lol

Appearance [+]

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Whip Lash

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Kusari. A War Sickle with a long chain, at the end a counter weight is placed.

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A Kusari that is used to deliver brutal strikes by swinging the sickle with the chain, rather than simply employing the weighted end. The weapon was Custom made by Hitori's father and was his Father's weapon before his retirement. It has a Lightning Element binding to it. It's reach is about 10 meters and usually the extra chain is wrapped around Hitori's waist. It is held on his back as a three foot long scroll.

Appearance [+]

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ ｎａｍｅ

Scrolls

Ｗｅａｐｏｎ， ｔｏｏｌ， ｏｒ ｏｂｊｅｃｔ ｔｙｐｅ

Sealed Weapon Scrolls

Ｄｅｓｃｒｉｐｔｉｏｎ

These hand size scrolls carry a variety of Kunai and Shuriken. Each one carries about 20 thrown weapons.

Please look at my comments, edit accordingly, and let me know when you are done.

@BuddhaI can taste the introduction post

@pkken I've considered making it today actually, so you must have psychic capabilities.

Everyone can thank me later

The thing is I'm not sure about teams and I can't really start unless I have the teams figured out.

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I don't see why not but I want to remind you that the Hyuga 'natural affinity' is wind chakra and that he'd fall out of the boat with this one. Also, I'm not really sure that constantly changing characters right now is a smart idea. I leave it up to you though.

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Sigh, my dreames of creating laser dragons are dashed. Meh, I'll leave it as it is.

@Buddha I don't have exact numbers of accepted characters, but would teams of four work instead to balance it all out?

EDIT: Or at least make it easier?

@Buddha I don't have exact numbers of accepted characters, but would teams of four work instead to balance it all out?

Right now we have four teams of three, but we are missing two jonin. The Hokage can lead a squad, but I'd like for her to lead 'the best' squad then, because that'd make sense (she's not the type to go leading misfits into battle). Another point is that I'd need to rebalance the teams because I am not putting Sakana under the leadership of my other character (boring, and stupid for me to write.)

True. Good times. I like Aoi too. I wanna think Sentou is but she barely got screentime due to my time constraints and break down with irl. Sorry about last time though.

Lightning Hyuuga never makes sense to begin with but that's just me.

We'll wait patiently for tomorrow.

I may have to add a couple more Sword Style techniques, I feel Ria is lacking the Swordswoman feel but then again, I take pride in your consideration of less techniques, more skill demonstrated in IC.

Question: Not sure about this RP but Shadow Clone isn't a jutsu that anyone can have or anyone can just have it?

Hilly. About what you said with the Police thing, I'll go with what you said and consider it as the thing for the rp.

SInce Hyuuga and Sarutobi founded the village, it's safe to assume canon clans followed hence being noble clans as the former?
I know that Uchihas and Senjus are not going to be prominent but how much of an influence do they have in the village? Hilly did say Uchiha founded the police, others followed hence forming the Konoha Military Police.

Do the Uchihas and Senjus maintain their origin? Coming from the Sage's sons? I want to believe that we're not gonna have Indra nor Asura reincarnating. But I am having my doubts due to the OOC first page pic.

How modern is the setting, it's not gonna be like our previous one right?

Not much rules on how the sharingan works during PVP. How will this be handled?
Things like their resistance to genjutsu, copying jutsus, precog etc I felt need some elaboration.

Sorry for the questions but better to ask than be sorry. I want to make sure I don't go doing the same mistakes in the past. So I need your guidance on this.

EDIT: Can Ria be in Hokage-sama's team? xD For old time's sake, a shout out to what should have been Sentou and Ayame.

@Buddha So four teams of three should easily become three teams of four, right? (mental maths sucks) If the Hokage leads one. Justify it as the teams have to expand to have more combat power in this trying time?

@McFazzer I mean I could also just ask someone to make a jonin. But I'm not sure who I'd ask. It needs to be someone that is quite dedicated to the RP, and has good writing skills. I'd ask you, but you seem content to have just one character.

Team Kishimoto


Team Senhime


Team X


Team X

Here's a mock. It may be subject to change, but this is what we're/I am thinking of so far.

I may have to add a couple more Sword Style techniques, I feel Ria is lacking the Swordswoman feel but then again, I take pride in your consideration of less techniques, more skill demonstrated in IC.

The alternate sword master route is for her sword style to be extremely simple. Swordplay distilled into its purest form. Something like:

"The sword only has a few moves. Slash. Cut. Cleave. Block. Parry. Stab. That's all my sword needs to kill"?

@Buddha Yeah, I'm not the best at juggling characters honestly. I'm honored that you considered me, but yeah, I'm definitely not the best choice.