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The school, Saint Valerius Academy is a year-round academy that's located in a relatively remote place in Northern Europe, with the closest civilization being the town nearly twenty miles distant. The academy proper is atop a small hill in a valley, surrounded by lush, heavy forest. Its classes are for a high-school only, with college level classes available for the more advanced students. Dorms are provided on-site, and located away from the main school buildings. With each advancing grade level, students are awarded with more freedom(Both in selecting classes and outside of school hours.) One day(Sunday) is given as a relaxation day each week, and the students are allowed off the premises to go to the village.

The Nobles are sons and daughters of the very, very rich, making this a school that's very exclusive and almost impossibly(For an average person)expensive to afford. In return, the school promises to create an exceptionally safe(Via both the highly-trained and paid guards, and the Knights) learning environment that promotes interaction and skills that such future captains of industry would need. While all the classes are available to everyone, the Nobles will only get Nobles as classmates, and so on(The Knights may, in fact, sit in on these classes).

The Middle Class are usually local children who graduated with exceptionally high grades from their schools, and got a scholarship into the academy. The others that make up the Middle Class are rich(But not the super-rich) who can afford at least some of the school's fees and then the sons and daughters of the faculty and staff.

Knights can be selected from the Middle Class, but more often than not they are transferred into the school for the explicit purpose of being a Knight to a specific noble.







Knight Ranks

1 Henry McGregor (NPC)
2 Isaac McGregor (NPC
3 Corenthia Jones (NPC)
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5 Cain Yuver (NPC)
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Noble + Knight Pairings:
Noble || Knight

Criston Cross || Cain Yuver
Cedric Green || Ethan Walker
Marie Constantin || Isaac McGregor
Ivan Stone || Henry McGregor
Philip Parish || Corenthia Jones
Lillian Carmen || Link Wallace






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I'm sold
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Well, I'll just have to make a CS when I can.
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Well, obviously, I'm sold. =3
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I finished up the Principal's CS and added it to the list of NPCs. I'm going to be slowly working on filling out the current NPCs' CSs but for tonight, I think I'm done. Lol.
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Would you prefer us entering two characters: a Noble and Knight? Or are we expected to have one character and work with other players to match Nobles and Knights? Also my favorite character in manga right now Oikawa Tooru, lol
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@Kidd Usually, people end up making two characters to even everything out. My hope was that you all could work out the numbers. But yes, you may have to double up so that everyone can have a pair.

If it comes down to it, however, I'm more than happy to make a character for anyone that needs a pair. I can only do this once though as I'll be running the NPCs as well.
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@Lyla She looks good for what I see so far. Looking forward to the finished product. I'm still working on the Dean.

Also, apologizes to everyone for not being on this past weekend. I've been with family and they can take up a lot of my time. I'll probably be on a bit more now. :)
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@HylianRose Yeah been slownto progress. Normally Sun-Mon are busy for me as well as Sat sometimes. :)
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interested but I will pm you my CS since I have an idea for a character I would like to go through with you.

Also question since I had a problem with another gm about this. If you do not like the idea are you going to deny me indefinitely to the rp? I want to ask now because I dealt with that BS earlier in the week...
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@FallenTrinity I'm sorry! I wish I'd seen this earlier but I've been dealing with family for a while now. No, I'm not one of those GMs that will turn anyone away for a 'bad' CS. I'll work with you to improve it if the need is there. And if RPers would rather than happen in private rather than on here, I'm fine with that too, just let me know.

I would like to point out that there is a sample CS on the Character Tab. I'll go move it now so it's more visible. It's the Principal of the school, Alex Hampton.
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@HylianRose
Do you want specific pictures for the CS? Also if you can quickly check through my CS so far and give me some constructive feedback on how it looks that would be great ^^
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Sure thing! The picture is a tad bit more medieval than the RP is going to be so I first just want to make sure it's clear that this is still modern day, just with swords and magic and tradition. Imagine today's college students, but more knightly or noble. Lol.

(So, I doubt he'd be 23, as much as the picture makes me think.)

Magic and Melee do not, culturally, mix well. I know it makes perfect sense for them to, however, as is the culture of the RP, Magic stays in the Magic Order (Twilight) and Melee stays with the Physical Order (Shield). I'm still working on my Shield teacher (the Dean) for an example of this. Even I realize that these CSs can be a sort of... process. But the end result should be very, very well thought out.

4th Rank is okay for now, but I don't think ranks will be finalized. I hope no one takes offense to this, but just so no one is fighting for a position, I think I'm going to assign ranks later on so that the character that gets the rank deserves it. That being said, having the character at the 25th rank is not bad. I'd rather you have a character who is bad at everything that can improve, rather than one that is already at the peak of their character development. If they are at their peak, then where do they go from there? (Hence why I already made NPCs for the first 3 ranks. ^-^; Henry has his own issues that'll be revealed once I get his CS done.)

I'd like to see more for his day to day attire as well as from his strengths and weaknesses. If you look at Mr. Hampton's CS, you'll see that I included a brief description explaining the specifics of his strengths and weaknesses. For example, "Low Strength" seems very self explanatory, however the description lets you know that he's tried weapons before, and is willing to pick up a dagger if needed, he just wouldn't be very good with it. It gives his weakness... flavor, if you will.

You'll need to finish up the personality section, obviously. :P

The Skills section also need descriptions for the same reasons as the strengths and weaknesses. It gives them flavor and can also explain how they obtained those skills. Who taught them? What reason did they gain this skill? If they're an expert or master, what got them to that point? Also, please try to think a bit more on what skills really should be expert and which should be novice, apprentice, etc. I didn't regulate this section because my thoughts were that people could handle it. Try to spread it around a bit. :P
(Also, if he's an expert at swordsmanship, I'm going to say no to being an expert as magic as well. The two counteract each other and he couldn't honestly be perfect or even close to perfect in both. If he has physical prowess, his studies should suffer because you can't study and work out. If at all, he would only be journeyman at both if he were to pick both up. (for which Ms. Grimarth would give him shit.)

As for Powers and Talents, etc, He can only get one major, two minor as a 4th year knight. Not.. uhh.... 10. Ye. He can of course have other maneuvers, but this section would be for his major and signature moves. He's not limited to these, but... you could just call them the ace up his sleeve. Lol.

The childhood description is good and gives us a good idea at why he is such a clean cut and strict knight, however, who was his father? Was his father an important knight? Did he just want his son to be the knight he couldn't be? Did his dad's noble die for some reason and caused him grief? Was it his mother? -legasp- It's obviously unfinished, but these are my thoughts for now. :P

Now, I'm off to spend the day with my best friend. I'll check in on my phone but don't expect long posts like this one from me for now. These types of posts will have to wait until I get back home.
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@HylianRose

Thank thank you and definitely. Appreciate your feedback and will work on it post haste (after Xmas shopping)
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