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@Ambiguity -


@DJAtomika -


I realize I should have produced a timeline much like I did in the prior. I shall remedy that soon.
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@Rockette

Woo comments! I'll get right to editing. The timeline you posted very recently also clarified a lot of the current state of the world for me. Also, I'll change Faelon to Nibelheim. I think I was confused, on my part, when I read Archadia's description since they're a prominent medical country, if you will. Anyway, easy fix!

Just a few questions, if you don't mind?

While the backstory will need to be majorly reworked, I would really like to keep her military history. While contact with the monsters near Ground Zero will most definitely be taken out, would it be a stretch to have a militia garrison near the northern part of Archadia? I can salvage her backstory if I can keep her little bit about biological warfare on bandits that raid the northern towns that are far from Archadian civilization. However, if all of Archadia is civilized, as in heavy militia presence everywhere, I can definitely rework her backstory even more where she's simply trained. But that biological warfare aspect is a major part of her character and leads to the conflict with Ascephea. I'd love to hear your thoughts!

As for the weaponry, the pulse rifle is a fancy word for a combat rifle that has been modified ever so slightly to have more stopping power than a normal assault rifle that'd be seen with members of the militia. Out of thought of SOLDIERs having access to gear that perhaps normal military/militia personnel wouldn't have access to. However! I'm more than happy to relabel. Like I said, I'm very receptive to needed changes and such.

I will most definitely knock down her ranking. When I was making the character sheet, I was unsure of what would constitute Commander, First, Second, and Third class SOLDIERs. Your clarification's very helpful *Thumbs up*

I think that wraps up the questions. I'll begin editing the easy fixes while I wait for your input on the backstory.

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Roger that! Enjoy the show; seems you've got quite the cast of characters Here. Things open up/people leave or whatever, give me a shout.
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Sorry for the double tag, Rockette!

I've made edits that should've accounted for everything you've listed. I scaled down, or I hope I've scaled it down, her weapons. The original bullets, like you said, were very unfair haha. Hopefully the alternative I've provided will suffice. However, I'm more than willing to omit the specialized bullets altogether.

As always, I'm open to any changes. Also, if you want to move future talks about the character to PM, I'm more than happy to message you. If so, I can also include Icmasticc into said message :]
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Gonna have to all these edits on my phone graaaagh

Stupid work.

I'll make em in a bit.
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@Rockette Okay, so, here's the deal. I may lose internet access tomorrow or the next day. If I don't post an update over OOC, assume the worst.
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@The Survivor - Thanks for letting us know. Hope everything is or will be okay.
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@Rockette Edited. Hope it's fine now.
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@Ambiguity@DJAtomika - You both took well to our criticism and made changes where needed and appropriate. I hope to see these characters develop more so through the narrative. Post them when able.

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@Rockette Thanks Rockette!

To everyone else, if you wanna talk relations with my character, please feel free. I'm going to read up on everyone's more in depth shortly.
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@icmasticc@Rockette We're good for now, if I don't update it you'll know why.
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@The Survivor - Alright. Again, thanks for letting us know. Hopefully, nothing happens though.
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Alright everybody, announcement time!

First, new character submissions are officially closed. If you've PMed us about a delay and we've spoken about it already, then this message does not pertain to you. However, for any other parties, unfortunately we've reached the deadline and will be holding off on new characters for a while. The submission process went very smoothly and Rockette and I are both excited about the cast we've obtained. Hopefully, you guys will be able to enjoy the RP with same passion that you can came in with.

Secondly, I want to thank everyone involved thus far for their patience. We had a longer submission process than some oRocther roleplays and it's been a bit of a slow period, but now that the beginning is on the horizon, things will picking up and there will be much more to discuss and write about.

Finally, Rockette will more than likely share more info with you guys when she hops on later tonight. I'm not exactly sure what she wants to share and go over before the start of the IC so I'll refrain from mentioning anything definitively. As always though, if you have any questions you can ask here or PM one of us and we'll gladly answer to the best of our ability. It's not much longer now. Hope everyone is excited.
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@icmasticc@Rockette Okay, so here's what I've managed to get up, sorry if it isn't as pretty as the others(I'll fix it up once I have the time) but I think I've got a neat thing going here. Was originally going to go for the loner type, but realized that was too much like my last character, so I decided to switch things up. I'm not sure if I described my Aeon as well as I could have and I hope the abilites are okay.

Edit: If anythings up or needs to be fixed, I'm pretty sure I;ll be able to fix it before my deadline ends tomorrow.


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@Raijinslayer - Really great character, I hope to see him develop through the narrative! You took well to the changes within this Requiem and I love the bond and relationship between the Aeon and James. Put him up when able.
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All right, we're coming down to the start of the role play, now that all character submissions are in.
So, in this beginning, where do you see your characters: distraction or infiltration? One will use shock and awe tactics, while another sneaks past to secure a point within Archadia.

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D I S T R A C T I O N_______
♦ Carmen.
♦ James.
♦ Arin.
♦ Athena.
♦ Kain.
♦ Corr.


I N F I L T R A T I O N_______
♦ Corbyn.
♦ Amentia.
♦ Nicholaus.
♦ Bruce.
♦ London.


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@RocketteDistraction. James and Raganavic aren't really good on stealth ops.
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@Rockette Ha, na Arin will be distraction all the way.
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@Rockette I would say distraction as well. My character's not really the sneaker given that her weapons and powers are anything but subtle. Plus, presumably, she'd be put with those who have a higher inclination to injury and needed support.

Just my two cents.
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Corbyn is all lonely in that infiltration group.
//sad.
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