@AAB

I guess we could have the country names that way, but I'll mess up like a hundred times before I get it right, I liked the idea of the Tiadan people being called Tiadani though.
EDIT: The hiertanians and the Tiadani don't look that different at all, the only reason the Lutairians looks so different is because of their heritage.

@KiwiBaer

It takes so much more time when you write it out first twib.

@AtomicNut

So I think the people of lutaires seeing that kind of magic would think it's a sin against nature and be horrified. Tiadan is kinda more chill with that kind of stuff, not as bad as Hiertania, but still pretty fearful of it.
EDIT: Your post has a few pronouns off the main thing that stood out was that Alecto got it wrong. Anatole said to get ready for Luthier to become king, but luthier is the crown prince, Rowan is the second prince.
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Now that I've finished knitting for the day, it's time for some writing and posting!

@AAB

I guess we could have the country names that way, but I'll mess up like a hundred times before I get it right, I liked the idea of the Tiadan people being called Tiadani though.
EDIT: The hiertanians and the Tiadani don't look that different at all, the only reason the Lutairians looks so different is because of their heritage.

@KiwiBaer

It takes so much more time when you write it out first twib.

@AtomicNut

So I think the people of lutaires seeing that kind of magic would think it's a sin against nature and be horrified. Tiadan is kinda more chill with that kind of stuff, not as bad as Hiertania, but still pretty fearful of it.
EDIT: Your post has a few pronouns off the main thing that stood out was that Alecto got it wrong. Anatole said to get ready for Luthier to become king, but luthier is the crown prince, Rowan is the second prince.
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Now that I've finished knitting for the day, it's time for some writing and posting!

She also slipped the word "overthrow." I'm spellchecking the whole thing. English is my third language. But Alecto got it right, Anatole's words were about to betray her XD.

@AimeChambers
But there's so much more ability to edit and make it sound better when you basically have to write it twice *thumbs up*

@KiwiBaer

AAAAAANDD you could write the whole thing, then see someone has posted and have to rewrite it all over again because you took too long~

@AtomicNut

For english to be your third language is amazing! I'm still on my second language (Japanese) and the best thing I can write is, "I went to Sapporro to buy some souvenirs. The souvenirs were really tasty!"

@KiwiBaer

AAAAAANDD you could write the whole thing, then see someone has posted and have to rewrite it all over again because you took too long~

@AtomicNut

For english to be your third language is amazing! I'm still on my second language (Japanese) and the best thing I can write is, "I went to Sapporro to buy some souvenirs. The souvenirs were really tasty!"

I cheat because the other two are romance languages. Consider as if English was my second language.

@AimeChambers
*Shrugs* C'est la vie.

EDIT: It wouldn't be such a big deal if the post wasn't three million years long ;~;

I guess we could have the country names that way, but I'll mess up like a hundred times before I get it right, I liked the idea of the Tiadan people being called Tiadani though.

Now that I've finished knitting for the day, it's time for some writing and posting!

Great.
Once I see the map and know other country names, I'll make a little chart.

You knit too? :D I am a good knitter.
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English is my third language.

Yay: multilinguals! :D What are the other two? And would you be able incorporate some of their style into the way one of your characters talks (since neither of them are necessarily fully Hiertanian in culture), or would that not be worth the effort?

For english to be your third language is amazing! I'm still on my second language (Japanese) and the best thing I can write is, "I went to Sapporro to buy some souvenirs. The souvenirs were really tasty!"

:D

One of the more complicated sentences I've made in Finnish while still getting the grammar right:
Miksi sanoin, että viimallinen ei ole elossa?
(Why did I say that the wind-keeper is not alive?)

Welp, that only took a billion years, but there ya go! Sorry Bett's part is so long, I just got really into his character and started rolling with it lol.
also I love how muted all the colors are all the way up until you get to Maella and it's just super bright pink.

Yay: multilinguals! :D What are the other two? And would you be able incorporate some of their style into the way one of your characters talks (since neither of them are necessarily fully Hiertanian in culture), or would that not be worth the effort?

Galician and Spanish. I was born in one of those places in Spain with two languages. Then I started English at age 10. I still slip up a lot when I am tired and i almost never proofread.

@AAB

I knit, but only with loom, I haven't graduated to needles yet. About two months ago we had to knit some baby hats for my Health Growth and Development class/home ec and while we were supposed to make two I made 50. It was super fun! So I got some looms for my birthday and started making my own hats. I was trying to do a glove the other day with a weird cross design, but I ended up messing up and gave up, gonna restart today! I made a cat ear hat yesterday~

The map is having some issues with getting it scanned for my friend to continue working on it. Once I get to a different printer things will move along again.

@AtomicNut

So many cool languages~ For spanish I retook the first class for it two times. Not because I didn't get A's in the classes... but because we need language credits to get a good diploma and taking spanish in junior high didn't give me any credits. So I took one in my 8th grade and one in my 10th grade.

The cool thing about the classes is you learn most of the vocabulary in the first class, then use tenses and the like in the further classes so I can understand a little bit of a whole lot of sentences.

Sorry for the wait guys, I'll try and get up my post later today!

@AimeChambers Do you want me to wait for everyone to post, or continue as we are?

It's already been a few days, as long as there's a good amount of posts (a minimum of 2) in between, you can keep going.

Whelp, let's see if the first character death actually goes to Adrian for not being able to hold that treasonous troublesome tongue of his.

I get in a post for Ihana either today or tomorrow. (I took Sunday off.)

@AimeChambers

So what shall I do with the meeting with the Queen and General?

Since she seems unclaimed I can fill in with NPCness and what not, but what is the rough plan? I'm assuming at this early stage she'd be seeing what current relations are like and if there are any primary suspects? That sort of thing?

@Tsar Gatto

Yeah, basically she's holding off whether to take action until the two warriors get back, but plans to do something and not just stand by.

I will be posting for the king later today/tonight. I have to catch up on missing assignments in school and talk to my manager at work.

@Ryougu Hoping to see you soon buddy!

@AimeChambers
Right, I'll get to work on that ASAP.
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Royal greatness

I'll have Galeran and the maids reply after the crown prince, I'm planning on starting with Galeran scolding them.

EDIT: Yesterday is the new today! ...Got to get the map scanned today!