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@The1Rolling1Boy You'll need to write in your background where you got the energy sword from.
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I know, I figured. It's a work in progress. I just had to post it take a break and like try to collect my thoughts before I continued. So yeah just give me a bit
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Ah this RP, well if it all right with you, I'll bring back Agent Montana and pair him with Omega again unless you are doing the pairing still. Either way I'll get a bio up in a few hours when I'm finished with my classes.

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Never mind found the old bio from the old RvB so here it is granted I'll work out the kinks to fit the format of the bio here of course if necessary.

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I'm liking the interest we are getting here. Noice stuff!
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@Argetlam350 accepted.

Omega - Increases hand to hand and weapon handling skill. Increases aggression in the user.
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Okay, I finished my CS! I hope I didn't go too crazy with the background... I just really like to have twisted backgrounds with my characters because it's more nature to me for my characters to be who they are because of their background and it kinda adds onto their personality... Nevermind it's weird and there is no reason to tell you besides I wanna which would be fair to you and just nevermind, Point is I finished the CS and I hope it's all good
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Some of the bits in the history are quite long-winded as a sentence, which is the only real issue there is. If I were GM I'd not change too much (This isn't meant to be all aggressive, just a pointer).
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@The1Rolling1Boy Ais aren't already installed into suits. they're not even installed into suits they're plugged into your brain. Also these suits are given to you and if you are going to have an energy sword you would have to have picked it up off a covenant unit.

Also you use the word has instead of as and had multiple times.
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@Argetlam350@LetMeDoStuff If you guys can add the AI bonuses to your cs
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Got it and done.
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@Argetlam350 sick and sick
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Oh... Hm never knew that. Okay, I'll fix it then. I have horrible grammar and writers block so this might take a while
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@The1Rolling1BoyNah mate, we are all terrible in our own ways, as long as it's understandable.
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@Nytefall I think I fixed it but I could be wrong
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@The1Rolling1Boy look up hemingway or use google doc which has spell check
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@The1Rolling1Boy The problem I have is that your back story doesn't make sense. Mainly down to wording and what not. I've made some changes to it but there are parts i don't understand.



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@The1Rolling1Boy The problem I have is that your back story doesn't make sense. Mainly down to wording and what not. I've made some changes to it but there are parts i don't understand.





I'll try to fix but not today though.... Writers block so I'll fix whenever I get around to it
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@Nytefall I might not be able to post in the IC for a while once it's up. Issues IRL are likely to make me go awol for an unknown amount of time.
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@ShatteredZeroxk no worries keep me in the loop
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