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Sorry, today was really tiring. I'll try to finish Nimmie's sheet tonight but no guarantees.
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@Mangrale Not really a deadline. I'm just excited lol. I want to start by Monday

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Okay then. Just wondering, but what will happen if VNLA doesn't find the "N" member in time? I'm rather curious.
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Serafina now has a Bio.
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Woot! Yay for awesome. Double points for sandwich awesome.
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@Aro There's a spot for you still.
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Finally got this prettyboy up and running too. @EmzyOfNeverland


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Three things, but firstly-
Who could hate this?

The others being, and don't take this the wrong way- the line between allusion and plagiarism; and I'm getting Mary Sue vibes?(I hope I'm wrong.) Specifically: Hyperbole or just OP? Also, for being proclaimed to be "not proud and haughty", he's totally haughty and proud. (Although I can understand if that was the point. But the dry sense of humor isn't surprising really. It'd be more unexpected if he had a rather boisterous one.)
Sorry, but I felt something needed to be said. Plus I don't like leaving the thread dead for too long. I'm a bit of a spazz, for that I may have to apologize in the future.
Also, just so it doesn't slip past anyone's notice, no offense @EmzyOfNeverland, but rather I want to have your back on this- how is he able to just form Dust at will without using a Semblance that's meant to do that? I'm baffled, so please inform me if I'm missing something.
Also, fair warning @Crimmy, Aven will inevitably come at odds with your character as he stands now. Like, even if I wanted not to, I couldn't stop it because of the way Aven deals with things and how your character is. Not saying you, like, need to change anything, just letting you know.

I'm not trying to be mean, I just don't want certain issues to rip the RP apart from the inside if that can be helped.
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@tobiax You might have tagged the wrong person because Reiken doesn't do that. I have had so many characters come through that I know youre talking about someone but I can't put my finger on who.

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@EmzyOfNeverland I was under the impression he was referring to Arjuna, myself.
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@alexfangtalon Accepted.

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Just saying, I don't like the use of the term Mary Sue.
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Eadgar and Forrest would have an interesting relationship.

A Deserter and a still Loyal White fang~
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@AquaAzura You think that's a relationship? Try a White Fang supporter who wants to see the good in humans, next to a blueblood human who by default manifests many of humanity's negative traits in himself, up to and including hatred of Faunus.

...though honestly, I don't really have much justification for that last part other than he's from old blood and was raised poorly. Maybe that's justification enough, but... I don't know if it's somewhat superfluous or not. What do you think, would he be better off as a character without that aspect of himself?
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Eadgar and Forrest would have an interesting relationship.

A Deserter and a still Loyal White fang~


Yeah, that would be interesting. They could have even potentially known one another on Menagerie.

@AquaAzura You think that's a relationship? Try a White Fang supporter who wants to see the good in humans, next to a blueblood human who by default manifests many of humanity's negative traits in himself, up to and including hatred of Faunus.

...though honestly, I don't really have much justification for that last part other than he's from old blood and was raised poorly. Maybe that's justification enough, but... I don't know if it's somewhat superfluous or not. What do you think, would he be better off as a character without that aspect of himself?


Yeah, these three would be volatile.

EDIT: At least they are all on separate teams.
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@AquaAzura You think that's a relationship? Try a White Fang supporter who wants to see the good in humans, next to a blueblood human who by default manifests many of humanity's negative traits in himself, up to and including hatred of Faunus.

...though honestly, I don't really have much justification for that last part other than he's from old blood and was raised poorly. Maybe that's justification enough, but... I don't know if it's somewhat superfluous or not. What do you think, would he be better off as a character without that aspect of himself?


Yeah it would be a difficult for all of them to be in the same room, Especially if you keep Vlad's racism. And on that topic it's make sense why he would be racist against Faunus he doesn't think highly of other humans and I can only imagine how he would view a group of people openly considered inferior especially in Atlas. So while I don't agree with it but it make sense.

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Yeah, that would be interesting. They could have even potentially known one another on Menagerie.

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Yeah, these three would be volatile.

EDIT: At least they are all on separate teams.


That could be possible, I mean Menagerie is pretty close knit and even if Eadgar left at a young age Forrest would remember any Faunus from Menagerie.

It would be possible that they crossed paths during their White Fang missions. If Forrest does recognized him, he would leave Eadgar out of his reports out of not wanting to hurt another Faunus, unless he was asked specifically to report Faunus students where he would have no choice but to report him to the White Fang, so that could make for a tense relationship on both end~
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I think its fate that Serafina is in SFYR for Forrest to deal with rather than any of them. Lol.
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Three things, but firstly-
Who could hate this?

The others being, and don't take this the wrong way- the line between allusion and plagiarism; and I'm getting Mary Sue vibes?(I hope I'm wrong.) Specifically: Hyperbole or just OP? Also, for being proclaimed to be "not proud and haughty", he's totally haughty and proud. (Although I can understand if that was the point. But the dry sense of humor isn't surprising really. It'd be more unexpected if he had a rather boisterous one.)
Sorry, but I felt something needed to be said. Plus I don't like leaving the thread dead for too long. I'm a bit of a spazz, for that I may have to apologize in the future.
Also, just so it doesn't slip past anyone's notice, no offense @EmzyOfNeverland, but rather I want to have your back on this- how is he able to just form Dust at will without using a Semblance that's meant to do that? I'm baffled, so please inform me if I'm missing something.
Also, fair warning @Crimmy, Aven will inevitably come at odds with your character as he stands now. Like, even if I wanted not to, I couldn't stop it because of the way Aven deals with things and how your character is. Not saying you, like, need to change anything, just letting you know.

I'm not trying to be mean, I just don't want certain issues to rip the RP apart from the inside if that can be helped.


Haughty and arrogant aren't necessarily synonymous with pride. Like, he's really proud of his skills, and he basically considers himself to be very good at it. He just doesn't go around being all conceited and smugly superior about it or exaggerate it too much. Of course, he does seem to tilt in that direction a lot.

On the Dust manipulation thing, he basically just grabs dust from his quiver thing and turns them into arrows.



The WoR never mentioned that a semblance was necessary for doing so (timestamp at 0:59). Canonically, Cinder's fire powers aren't related that much to her ability to play with Dust either.

The others being, and don't take this the wrong way- the line between allusion and plagiarism; and I'm getting Mary Sue vibes?(I hope I'm wrong.) Specifically: Hyperbole or just OP?

The Arjuna I'm going for here is more of a zealous paladin type who wants to cleanse the world of sin rather than the mythological Arjuna's actually haughty, ridiculously prideful brat (starting shit with Karna, starting shit with Hanuman, starting shit with a lot of folks), although I guess there might be similarities between him and Arjuna later in the poem, where the guy's humbled out a bit after having Krishna as a sidekick. Don't really have that great a grasp on the latter chapters of the Mahabharata though.

I do admit 100% that the Gandiva is basically an incredibly nerfed version of the mythological Arjuna's actual Gandiva. The one hundred and eight bowstrings, the ability to fire multiple arrows at once, the amplification of arrow strength. He can try firing a huge number of arrows at once, but he can't actually blot out the sun. That's hyperbole. The rumbling thunder is also a hyperbolic description of how loud it can be. The range isn't though. I decided to model the actual range of the thing off a rocket launcher (which I guess is what it's trying to be, just a bow that shoots arrows that hit really hard), and those things do have mile-long ranges.
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@Crimmy I personally love your character.i almost used that picture BTW 😂
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