@Raze You should be able to view Hallelujah and its stats. Sure, they do not exactly conform to the rules, but the ability adds an important limiter to the 「Stand」's functions. The durability part is the difference between the torpor active and inactive, an example situation of it being inactive when receiving a hit would be any blind strike really. If there are changes to be made, I would appreciate to get to know them soon.
Name: Daraku Haisha (Given name: Daraku) Daraku is a scrawny-looking kid with scruffy black hair and brown eyes. He wears a pair of thick glasses. While Daraku isn't very strong physically, he's a quick runner and decent strategist. Daraku stands at 5'8" tall.
Height: 5'8" Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Black Physique: Unimpressive.
Possessions: -A Leather wallet with ID. -A set of pens, clipped to the outside of his shirt's pocket. -A small notebook, contained inside his shirt's pocket. -A swiss army knife, partially for self-defense.
Accessories: -A sturdy pair of thick glasses. -A fancy belt with a shiny buckle.
Bio: Daraku was born in Morioh, to a timid father and a headstrong mother. His father is an accountant while his mother does journalism. They're both still alive and when he has dinner with them when possible. His grandparents have all passed on however, most died of old age.
Throughout all of his schools, Daraku was an easy target for bullies, looking like a typical nerd as he did. This has caused him to grow up as a rather vengeful person who detests bullying...unless it's him picking on a bully. He has a job in repairs, though he repairs more than just the electronics mentioned in his job description. Daraku is currently 21 years old.
Battalion
Ability: King's Order Battalion unleashes a loud, violent roar, that disables all stand abilities for any stand user who hears it in a twenty-meter radius around Battalion. Stands affected by this can not directly attack Battalion either. The effect lasts for up to 20 minutes, depending how close the stand user was to Battalion.* Power - B Speed - C Range - D Durability - A+ Precision - C Potential - D
Looks: A Short warrior in extremely heavy armor. Carries a Hammer on a chain and an incredibly large Stone shield that covers most of Battalion's body when held in front of it, all of it when crouching. Battalion has a Lion's head capable of unleashing a ferocious roar.
Battalions can attack thrice in decently rapid succession, but due to the size of the hammer, he really can't hit very rapidly. The hits do hurt a lot, however.
Rush Attack Sound: N/A
*Daraku is also a stand user and thus affected by King's Order.
Alright, see, I wasn't going to say anything on this thread under the assumption people wouldn't be interested, but I feel my hand has now been forced. @Raze, I do not intend to join your RP, not only because the way you write is frankly terrible, but because I did not in fact give you permission to use my idea for your RP. I sent it to @Not So 0riginal under the assumption that you weren't coming back to host such an RP, only for him to turn around and give it to you without asking me first.
That in mind, and at risk of sounding peevish or what have you, I'm going to have to insist that you come up with a new plot for this game that doesn't revolve around what I came up with. I'm not sure if I can get moderators involved in a situation like this, but I'll sure as hell try if I have to, considering the circumstances.
Alright, see, I wasn't going to say anything on this thread under the assumption people wouldn't be interested, but I feel my hand has now been forced. @Raze, I do not intend to join your RP, not only because the way you write is frankly terrible, but because I did not in fact give you permission to use my idea for your RP. I sent it to @Not So 0riginal under the assumption that you weren't coming back to host such an RP, only for him to turn around and give it to you without asking me first.
That in mind, and at risk of sounding peevish or what have you, I'm going to have to insist that you come up with a new plot for this game that doesn't revolve around what I came up with. I'm not sure if I can get moderators involved in a situation like this, but I'll sure as hell try if I have to, considering the circumstances.
Alright, it's not too hard to make lore and story if it's just from an already created series. And I'll just ignore the terrible writing part. I gave my excuse on the interest check. @BCTheEntity
I'm not really feeling the same way about the RP. While I do not wish to hurt anyone by saying this, I will have to admit that I find the OOC handling of this RP to be quite abhorrent. The rules have come late, especially important details like the stand power limitations as well as Rush Attack information, not to mention the lack of a proper Character Sheet in the beginning... I don't think that with all this I would find this RP interesting anymore since I keep finding little to no motivation to post, so I will have to withdraw my character and myself.
@Hekazu In all honesty I might just scrap this, it had a bad opening and I don't have the time to fix everything with my own posts. The time it took for me to post the rules wasn't just me saying "I'll do it later." or "I forgot.", it's because of the true lack of time I have to manage something that I want to be intricate, but put together too loosely. I feel that even I need to force myself to keep it going with OOC or IC posts. I feel a lot less stress when working on something like BattleCross. I have a nagging voice in my head constantly saying "That's not good enough" but there is another that keeps saying "Let the game go on". I find myself bored even looking at the page.