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Sounds interesting

What are your thoughts on a "handsome"(lol) goblin


Go crazy. As long as they're not just like, a real-ass human painted green who is living among these goblins, you're fine.

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Remember, stuff like resistances built up in the past life don't carry over.

Gifts will be pretty bad at the start, as stated above, so you'll have to cull some of the far. Namely, change this to just being able to ascertain characteristics of a plant, and even that will be fairly "hazy".

I know I said the OOC would be up tonight, but a fever's gotten the better of me so I'll be pushing that back to tomorrow.
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@Moonlit SonataI did end up finding out that you were the original creator of this (upon investigating the copycat a few months ago). There was another user on this site that tried to start up this RP like three or four separate times, maybe even more, but I won't tag them or anything because I find them rather unsavory, and it turns out they're still more or less active on this site. If you'd like, I could PM their idenity to you, but I'm not so sure how much that matters to you.

I managed to find my original character that I made for the copycat, and I'm currently weighing between using it, or making a brand new one.
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@Moonlit Sonata
Would you be the one making NPCs as well or are we allowed to?
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@Moonlit Sonata Here's the idea i have for an OC. Will fix whatever ya tell me i need to fix. I think her Gift might possibly be ok as well, but considering i am half asleep right now when making this app i will ask if you can help me fix her Gift up into an acceptable form if it isn't in a satisfactory state as of this point in time.


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Alright, I made something that I think could be fairly interesting to use. I tried to make his skill fairly simple, but I don't know if it needs to be changed at all. The gist of it though, is that he can learn things quickly, and invent things more effectively.
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Finally got my character finished. Tried to keep it short and sweet, so hopefully everything looks good.


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Here's my CS. Straight out of a school life anime.

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@Moonlit Sonata
Would you be the one making NPCs as well or are we allowed to?


If you have suggestions then feel free to shoot me a PM, but the NPCs will be just that, NPCs.

@Holy Grail
She did not find a way to accelerate time in a normal human science scrub world. The DeLorean exploded and she died like that. I'm so sorry. Gift is limited to one target at a given point in time.

As was stated previously, I'll generally advise against limited Gifts like these that have a very set and obvious path of expansion, but if you're sure you want to go through with it then feel free.

@txgood2

Remove the comment of how other goblins see him. That's the sort of thing that should emerge naturally during roleplay, rather than being imposed in the CS. The Gift is fine, but keep in mind that even if he gains access to human technology he'll still be well below human inventors who have studied this sort of thing properly, given the weakness of his soul currently.

@LeonVon
Good to go.

@Hammerman
I'm understanding the ability more as language comprehension than anything else, and that she has the starting point of having some understanding of the human language. If that's not the case though, let me know.



Feeling much less sick today, so once the day's obligations have been wrapped up (which will be in about seven hours), I'll write up the OOC.
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@Moonlit Sonata
I'm okay with language comprehension. I just went with "reading" because your example said an English/language teacher would have that gift and she was just an avid reader. Well, she did read difficult books other high schoolers would never read in their own volition so I suppose "language comprehension" could work too.
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Is this still open? It looks really interesting and I'd love to make a necromancer.
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Gifts will be pretty bad at the start, as stated above, so you'll have to cull some of the far. Namely, change this to just being able to ascertain characteristics of a plant, and even that will be fairly "hazy".


fair enough, I have updated and simplified the gift accordingly
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Is this still open? It looks really interesting and I'd love to make a necromancer.


Yep, welcome to the party. I should say though that if you want to go for a necromancer kinda deal, you should expect to be limited to animating, say, about one goblin-sized body at any given time. I'll explain how stuff like that goes when the OOC's up, which'll be in a few hours after all my real life work's gotten wrapped up.
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<Snipped quote by Moonlit Sonata>

fair enough, I have updated and simplified the gift accordingly


Good to go.
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@Moonlit Sonata I revamped and changed the power as well as her past life history. Maybe this idea works out better than the one other and is not as limited?

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@Moonlit Sonata Okay, I erased the bit about his reputation among goblins. I apologize for that, by the way.
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@Holy Grail
For reasons I can't disclose because [spoilers], the universe of origin must be a mundane one. Magic doesn't really work in the way you're assuming, but that'll be more apparent in the OOC.

@Rice Porridge
I was expecting a goblin model, but this is fine too.

Wow, who put this OOC here?
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@Moonlit Sonata
like I could do that
I just feel like this has more options to start out with
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@Moonlit Sonata Ok! Will edit that into the OC's profile. Still, thoughm how should i word the Gift to be able to work as best as it can within the world of the roleplay?
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