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And posted.

If anyone see any mistakes or really weird sentences, feel free to PM me about them so I can correct it.

Also, @ObliviousRoadie I hope I did the puppy properly.
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@Lugubrious I'm sorry, but I won't be able to post it today. I have classes, and I won't get home until late. It will definitely be up tomorrow.
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@Lugubrious

Hey, just wanted to let you know that my exams will be wrapping up by the end of the week, and I'll probably be able to get a post up by then.
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@Lugubrious aye aye sir, still reporting in from under the hellfire of finals study and other such malarkey

a post is in the works as we speak
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Hey Lug, ScreenAcne asked me to tell you he's been caught up working on a project, so he might be a little slow with posts. Just a heads up. He said he'll make sure not to drag the RP too much though.
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fuck I hope I have time to finish up my post tomorrow cause it's 3 AM right now and I gotta sleep

just gonna say it's pretty much halfway done
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@Lmpkio, hate to have to let you go, but in this business, you've got to do what you've got to do. Next time, if you don't really have any intention of staying on, don't make a big deal about trying to continue. Just as with Abyssal, it's less of a nuisance for the people you're dealing with if you be up front about your disinterest.

@The Wild West, I was preparing to kick you as well, but I realized that I neglected to say you're on probation in my last post. That said, I did mention you in the post before that, and according to...

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I swear I'll be more active once my summer break begins, just one more week of finals and I'll have a lot more free time on my hands.
you, ten days ago


You've been free of finals for three days. So, in the interest of fairness, your probation begins now with one condition: I want you to use that free time to both start and finish your NPC battle if you have any intention of staying on. It doesn't have to be some seven-page extravaganza, either. I just want you caught up, basically.
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Gah, you updated whilst I was literally in the middle of writing my NPC battle, @Lugubrious. I, uh... I mean, I'm getting on with that, so yeah. I'm just going on about the SHAWK.
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Gah, you updated whilst I was literally in the middle of writing my NPC battle, @Lugubrious. I, uh... I mean, I'm getting on with that, so yeah. I'm just going on about the SHAWK.


No problem. I wasn't planning on interrupting your battle, and you're making good time, so there shouldn't be any kind of issue.
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i am about to write at M A X I M U M S P E E D , hold on tight ladies and gents
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Donezo. And having written all that up, @Lugubrious, please note that I'm going to be going on holiday in a few days, and likely won't be able to post in that time. So you're aware.
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@Lugubrious

May I join in?

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@Lugubrious i have reached t e r m i n a l v e l o c i t y
aka i have put the post up
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@The Wild West, a brutal fight. I'm glad you're staying on with us.

@Lugubrious

Hey, just wanted to let you know that my exams will be wrapping up by the end of the week, and I'll probably be able to get a post up by then.


I'll hold you to that.

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May I join in?



Well, the character seems fine. I'd appreciate a line break being added between section for readability maybe. A highly durable high-speed assassin would seem at first glance like being too much, but the metrics you gave for speed and durability place him close to the peak of human ability, and since a lot of contestants already have superhuman ability, I'd say it's a pretty fair fight. There's nothing ludicrous about his arsenal, either. At this point, a big thing is whether or not this is a character you're sure you're going to have a blast writing for. Making someone you genuinely want to play, I find, is essential to maintaining interest in an RP.

That said, I do want to talk to you about another criteria. This RP has a posting requirement of at least once per two weeks, but more is highly encouraged. I also encourage total communication about problems that prevent posting, whether personal or with the prompts I provide. Are those terms acceptable?
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@Lugubrious

I'll get on the line breaks right away. As for the matter of his durability and speed, would you be cool with me just bumping his ability up to the "norm" of this RP? As in he just has normal durability and is pretty fast in comparison to the characters of this RP? Regular posting, I can definitely do. If there is a point where I can't post regularly I will be sure to let you know.

P.S. Something I forgot to mention about the Beam Katanas, they are literally just lightsabers. I felt like I should mention that now to avoid confusion in the future.
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If I may?
I don't think it necessary that he is boosted up to be on par with some of the other characters. If he's weaker physically than some others, it'll force you to think of other ways he can win and thus make for more interesting writing.

Reading a pup-stomp isn't really that entertaining, but reading about how the underdog outsmarts the superior opponent is much more intriguing. He's already at the peak of human physiology, which is superior to a lot of characters, actually (Sophia & Pithy, for example, are both on normal-ish human levels.)
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@kapuchu
You know what, that is a very fair point and I think I'll take that idea. Thank you for that.
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Alright, well, sorry to keep you waiting @FloodTalon but you're in. Go ahead and port your sheet over to the Characters tab. In a short post of mine soon to come, I'll get you set up, but you do have a bit of a say in the matter. Basically, either the Queen of Terror or Fran is going to be retconned out of the RP, and you'll take that one's place against the remaining one. To get you caught up, I'd ask for a long post that included the entire fight with the remaining NPC as your introductory post. Sound good?

Now, for @Ayame, this is a tricky situation. If you'd kept your 'guarantee', you'd have gotten the last spot, but if looks like Flood has beaten you to it. His acceptance means that we're at our full count of 16 players. I can still work you in as a guest character, able to get into and interact with the City and those within it, and perhaps even have a shot at stealing a phylactery and getting a wish, but you won't be a part of the main roster.
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@Lugubrious

I'm cool with that.
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@Lugubrious Its fine. I've been pretty swamped. I have two assignments due today, and another three due next week.
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