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I'm hammering out the foundations of my post right now. Maybe I'll join the others at the Training hall, it sounds like a good place to start.
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@Iatos Just a heads up, there are six characters in the training center. The duel between Dante and Jefferson is being worked on as a collab, Eir is gonna go on hiatus for 2 weeks, while the remaining 3, I'm not quite sure yet.
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@Rob Yeah, I saw. I work something out.
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@Animal@Araby264@yahoo3422@Superboy@Tenma Tendo@Tominas@TaliPaendrag@NobodiesHero@Pirouette@Iatos

By the way, for those who are interested, I made a discord server for the RP. Here's the link.
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I'll get a sheet up sometime next week. Kinda busy.
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@samreaper Everything seems okay. Also, I edited the formatting a bit. My only suggestion is maybe change up his talents/skills. Aside from being ambidextrous, his conditional stamina, increased metabolism, and ability to a lot without feeling satiated are all by products of his quirk. So they aren't really skills/talents.

Maybe go with something else that would show us some of his abilities that he has developed over time. A good example would be his fondness of sports and baseball. That's definitely a skill.

Anyway, here's the edited version.




@Phobos Before I go into detail, I'm gonna apologize because I'm gonna be fickle. The image isn't really doing it for me. If its alright with you, maybe you can use something else? I searched for images of the same character, and since he's supposed to be 13 years old and kind of short, this is what I got: [1] | [2] | [3] | [4] | [5]

Now we got that out of the way, let's see what we have here. Everything seems fine to me; sucks for Tetsuo though, poor kid.

The edits for Tetsuo's CS is milder, so I'll just ask you to include these into the CS.





Thanks! Once you guys finish with those edits, just keep me updated. Then you can post in the character tab and join the IC.



@Kal-El Sure thing, no rush.
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So hey guys, Araby and I finished the wombo-combo Jefferson-Dante fight post and it's... kinda really long. Like, really damn big. That being said, would the folks in the training facility mind if I just post that sumbitch right away, or do you guys wanna do stuff first?
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@TominasYou can post it now. No need to hold things up on our account, at least that's my opinion.
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I'm gonna start typing up updates and will try to get them up soonish; which just really means a few hours at the earliest.

Regarding everyone so far. @Animal hasn't been introduced to the story yet and is dealing with real life. He'll jump right in when he can.

As for @Araby264 and @Tominas, I'm helping them out with a collab post regarding their fight at the training facility.

For the rest of the characters in the training facility, @yahoo3422 is fine with the fight just taking place, while I have no idea what @Tenma Tendo and @TaliPaendrag are planning. As for @Superboy, he'll be off for at least 2 weeks, but he's on discord once in a while, so that's something.

@NobodiesHero and @Pirouette are interacting but if you guys don't feel like prolonging it, I can give you something else to deal with. Already asked Pirouette and she's cool with it.

Then I'm just waiting for @Iatos@samreaper@Phobos to do their introductory posts. If you guys get those in before the update, I could include you guys there to. As for the people who're quiet, I'll hold of on their updates since I've got no clue what they wanna do.
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@Rob I'm cool with it as well.
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I'm fine with the fight taking place as well. I was just letting Tendo post before I do. :3
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@Rob @Araby264 @Tenma Tendo @Talipaendrag

I will say, where Tenma hasn't said anything against it and it's been in the works for a bit, I'll just slap it up and let it sit there. If nothing else, I think the fact that we HAVEN'T done the fight yet has been holding back the group in the North Korean Training Compound, as they're kinda stuck between a rock and a hard place.

EDIT: I was ninja'd, Tali done got me good

DOUBLE EDIT: It's going to take me a hot minute to polish this up, so expect it tonight but not necessarily in the next hour. Probably next two. You'll know if I overestimated.

TRIPLE EDIT: C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!!!: Fair warning, this post is kinda huge.
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As a martial artist with over ten years of experience, I must say that the detail in that scene was quite impressive. A small improvement to make for next time would be the headbutt. You don't headbutt by bashing your forehead into a person, it hurts you too much. You use the top of your head which is much harder. And to answer Jefferson's question, it takes much less force than people think to break a bone. It takes about six pounds of pressure to break an elbow, even less than that to break fingers.

Sorry, couldn't help it, I'm a martial arts nerd.
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@NobodiesHero

Lololol, all good. I wrestled in school, which is kinda where the mashing his forehead into her temple came from. If you grind your head into a sensitive spot on someone's face, it hurts like the Dickens if nothing else. I didn't mean to make that come off as a strike, but I can certainly see how you read it that way looking back... Hrrm. I'll have to be more clear next time. Regardless, Araby and I had been working on this for a little bit, so I'm glad it has your stamp of approval!

That being said, it was kinda huge, so I'm looking forward to seeing what goes on with the rest of the crew for a little while before I follow up.
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@NobodiesHero I guess I know who my go to person is when skeptical with fight scenes and training.
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@Rob I would be more than willing to help. I love adding realism and detail to my fight scenes.
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I'm a detail nut when it comes to training. Those were always my best posts besides important story posts
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Thank you for the compliment. Tominas did most of the work.
And I wiplnkeep that in mind, thank you for the advice.
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