Going to work on my character's concluding details tonight, posting in 24 hours.
What season are we in, too? Month? (She's a forager and a gardener, so I need to know what kinds of herbs and vegetables she's eating this time of year ;))
@Oddsbod What kinds of magical creatures would be hunted/valued in Invernier?
What season are we in, too? Month? (She's a forager and a gardener, so I need to know what kinds of herbs and vegetables she's eating this time of year ;))
Going to work on my character's concluding details tonight, posting in 24 hours.
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Along these same lines, do you know about what time of day the first IC post will be set? Being that my character is accustomed to a somewhat nocturnal schedule, I just want to begin investing thought into what state of mind he'll be in. @Oddsbod
@wxps350 Selfish opportunist, seems cool. I like his set up too, actually bouncing carelessly between the two factions, should make for some fun relationships with any other Army/Legion characters. Comparing caring for living parents to keeping old graves tended is a nice look into his mindset as well, that was a cool touch.
Some things I'm not super clear on with the history. Why was he not allowed to actually see his parents? Who was raising him, if his parents were so sick? Did they raise her when he was young, then fall sick? If he couldn't keep a cent of the money he earned, how did he afford basic living?
On the later living, why was there a soldier garrison just hanging out at the edge of town? You mentioned Forbhin and his mentor didn't join the Army of Heroes until the war broke out, but any trained party of soldiers would probably be working under the Army.
You mentioned they eventually switched sides to the Legion, but after a battle where the Legion crushed Army forces, Forbhin ends up stealing an Army insignia and pretending to be in the Army, and labels his master as a Legion soldier. I'm not sure why there're Army of Heroes soldiers cleaning up the leftover of a big fight if they were the ones who were massacred. I'd also like to see a bit more on why they jumped ship to the Legion.
You'll also need the short personality description to go with the bullet points.
Otherwise, I like where this character is going, seems like a lot of fun to write, and bounce off of other characters with.
Just wondering, not that my character has them, but can a Carnelian have mage-eyes, and if so, how would they manifest?
Aw man, I got to this too late , haha. Let me know if anything opens up, definitely interested. Till then, I did send a draft of a cs through a pm, though I understand if you don't want to worry about it unless a spot opens.