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Mirror, Mirror on the wall, why must you show me what an Idiot I was once?
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Mirror, Mirror on the wall, why must you show me what an Idiot I was once?


Hey, at least it's once. There are many people who are still idiots.
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Hey, at least it's once. There are many people who are still idiots.


Fair.

But I'm pretty sure I have been an idiot more than just once.

And probably will be sometime...in the near future.

Concerning things.

Metaphors.

Ain't they grand?
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It's a bit late where I am so I'll be off soon.

@Expolar
By the way, were you asking because you wanted to do something with Caelum?


Ya, in the future I was thinking to do one or two things with Caelum. Curious about those ideas?

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Hey thanks! I'm sorry I can't remember if we rped together.>.< I got a horrible memory

Edit: rough draft of the cs!

Name: Lach (Lock) The Blood Samurai

Age: 23

Birthday: November, 15th

Magic: Magic Slayer: his families blood has been tainted by a powerful anti-Magic spell known as Magic Slayer, Its sole purpose is to negate all magical power. Those around him, in a close proximity, can still use magic. Although the longer they stay around him it becomes harder for them to use their magic. How ever, if he gets any of his blood on them, he can cancel their magic all together.

Magic Level: A

History: Lock was born into a family that was descended from clan dedicated to hunting wizards. Long before Zeref, before magic was accepted as normal. There were people who were afraid of all wizards, and dedicated themselves to eradicate them, ironically with a magic spell that tainted their very blood. Dangerous and effective as they were, they were defeated and fled the country.

He grew up training with his father to become a Wizard bounty hunter just like his fathers before him. Because he didn't have to spend any time training on making his anti magic stronger, he focused on his swordsmanship and tactics with fighting different kinds of magic. He was a prodigy, quickly mastering his sword he was already bringing home bounties at the early age of 18.

A few years as a bounty hunter brought him some good money, but he wanted to learn more about his anti magic, and being in a magical guild would and could help him learn how to control it more so. Another reason being he wanted to be apart of something more...

Personality: Loyal, Charming, Mischievous, Relaxed, Dedicated

Guild and guild mark location: NA Wanting to join Phoenix Wing

Team Members: None

Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. Mastery of Swordsmanship
2. Endurance/Sheer will power
3. Brilliant tactician.

Three Weaknesses:
1. His magic can be deadly to him if not careful. (Can loose too much blood)
2. Ranged Magic
3. Lonely

Greatest Love: N/A

Motivation: To train and become a master over his ability,

Appearance:


Because of his magic and fighting style, he has countless scars all over his body.

Additional Details:
His weapon that was handed down to him from his father. It's been in his family for generations.


meh, sorry it's not really good, a bit out of practice


After reading through the CS, it seems okay. But If I had to nitpick, I would say to try changing the name of the magic. I'm aware that it is not like dragon slayer magic. The name also fits the description. But I suppose I'm afraid that it may confuse a fee people that haven't read or seen the magic being used.
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@Expolar
Yeah, I definitely am.
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Sure, I could do that.

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Are you asking for a spar too? xD


And if I was? XD
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And if I was? XD


You want to make it a three way?
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Before you clear it, I do have some concerns I would like to express with the character in question. I know Caits wants me to hold off on comments until GMs have had a chance to read it, so I will.

Also, it is the rough draft, it would be premature to say anything until we can have a look at the final draft.
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You want to make it a three way?


You're horrible, you know that?
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You're horrible, you know that?


I saw the opportunity and I grabbed it. I have no regrets.
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I saw the opportunity and I grabbed it. I have no regrets.


Just don't grab anything else. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

no regrets either
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You're all sick and twisted. I love it XD
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You're all sick and twisted. I love it XD


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@Caits
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Tries to flee, scrambling at the ground Crying weakly "Noooooo" ^.^

thank you for making my night.
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Laughs evilly as Caits is enveloped in the insanity that is this roleplay OOC
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It's a bit late where I am so I'll be off soon.

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Ya, in the future I was thinking to do one or two things with Caelum. Curious about those ideas?

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After reading through the CS, it seems okay. But If I had to nitpick, I would say to try changing the name of the magic. I'm aware that it is not like dragon slayer magic. The name also fits the description. But I suppose I'm afraid that it may confuse a fee people that haven't read or seen the magic being used.


I can see that, I kinda wanted to do it that way for that reason, but I'll change it if needs be.

@Crimson Raven
I have been away from role playing for a while, so I am a bit rusty, and for sure not happy with my own draft. I welcome some constructive criticism.
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So... I have been trying to post. And...

Well, I need to do it in splurts.

I need to respond to Techno...

and some other things...

in one post....

and then in another... there will be a time skip of only a few hours so its like "later that same day"....

to then finally get this arch moving... so i do kinda need the guild masters @Zarkun and @lugubrious To... be present for that one as the arch I did hope would involve all three guilds... Do you guys have any objection to that?

I'll get the first post out shorty, but the second post depending on some things might be a bit longer... given that I haven't started either, and I lost everything that was in preparation for this arch...
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So... I have been trying to post. And...

Well, I need to do it in splurts.

I need to respond to Techno...

and some other things...

in one post....

and then in another... there will be a time skip of only a few hours so its like "later that same day"....

to then finally get this arch moving... so i do kinda need the guild masters @Zarkun and @lugubrious To... be present for that one as the arch I did hope would involve all three guilds... Do you guys have any objection to that?

I'll get the first post out shorty, but the second post depending on some things might be a bit longer... given that I haven't started either, and I lost everything that was in preparation for this arch...


Fraquar is there too. What is he, chopped liver?
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