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After a bunch of delays the sheet is finally done even if I can't get the hider to work. Any feedback is appreciated. Lets get this hype train going!
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@Dogematix, it works perfectly for me.
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@Za Warudo@Tangletail@vietmyke@FoxFire
And we have an introduction post up and ready to go. Starting things off nice and simple with a bar brawl of sorts. Because how a character punches somebody in the face tells you a lot about them! That and it helps establish tone pretty quickly: serious grimdark adventure story this ain't! Feel free to watch, partake, or if you feel so kind save Valya from being eaten by a cat-man.

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There are few typos scattered about, but I'm sure that can be fixed with a good look over! Besides that though everything looks good on my end. Feel free to move him over at your leisure!

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Be working on a post soon...

What a lovely start off. In a bar which is probably not the most enjoyable place for a mute person to be, and a fight breaks out. Least she gets to jump up and break both off in a cat's ass.
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Yeah, I actually don't know how somebody like her might feel.

I mean, my brother spends a lot of time down in Washington D.C for work, and is by Gallaudet University and the bar scene over there is still filled with people, so you have a bar filled with college students texting instead of talking because it's easier for quick communication in like a group chat then signing sometines, it's kinda surreal in a weird/awesome kinda way. But then again most of those kids are deaf as well as mute, so I don't know how just a mute person would find it.
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Since there's going to be the inevitable rush to see who can save our damsel in distress first, should probably just say who's doing what.

Ed & Dory will probably be chatting shit before things kick off, then Ed will get involved, but I'll probably wait for everyone else to establish what their characters are doing before anything super specific.
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Of course the other option is nobody rescues her. Valya ain't exactly a damsel, she has the capacity to turn her foe into bloody chunks smeered onto the wall. (Then again capacity to do something and the skill and experience to pull it off are two very different things.) She's just not a grizzled soldier/adventure, and so has a habit of panicking in actual combat scenarios. But if push comes to shove she should be able to deal with her current situation mostly okay. Hopefully. Maybe.

Butttt, I'm certain she wouldn't mind the help.
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Of course the other option is nobody rescues her. Valya ain't exactly a damsel, she has the capacity to turn her foe into bloody chunks smeered onto the wall. (Then again capacity to do something and the skill and experience to pull it off are two very different things.) She's just not a grizzled soldier/adventure, and so has a habit of panicking in actual combat scenarios. But if push comes to shove she should be able to deal with her current situation mostly okay. Hopefully. Maybe.

Butttt, I'm certain she wouldn't mind the help.


"Ed, she's got this."

"Yeah but..."

"Ed, she'll be fine"

"Yeah but... HERO"

*eye rolling intensifies*
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Of course the other option is nobody rescues her. Valya ain't exactly a damsel, she has the capacity to turn her foe into bloody chunks smeered onto the wall. (Then again capacity to do something and the skill and experience to pull it off are two very different things.) She's just not a grizzled soldier/adventure, and so has a habit of panicking in actual combat scenarios. But if push comes to shove she should be able to deal with her current situation mostly okay. Hopefully. Maybe.

Butttt, I'm certain she wouldn't mind the help.


Also quick question, what are your thoughts on musical links? Just in terms of setting tone etc, because quite frankly, I have the MOST HEROIC SHIT planned.
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Well, given that Valya looks like she's completely out of her element, it wouldn't be unusual for the mercs to step in and get the cat off of her.

The question is... who wants it? If you want it Za Warudo, I'll leave it to you :O.
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Also quick question, what are your thoughts on musical links? Just in terms of setting tone etc, because quite frankly, I have the MOST HEROIC SHIT planned.




Nah, I kid. I ain't the fun the police so I say GO FOR IT!

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Oh yeah, she's totally out of her element. If this circle was her element this would be her approximate location at the moment. Girl is like not even 5'5" and barely weighs one hundred pounds soaking wet. Not the type to be caught in a scrap much more likely to be running away from the scary cat-men like a sensible person.

Also fun fact for you folks! At the current moment your characters would'n know who she is at the moment either given that she isn't in the telltale robes, as the party is to officially meet the caravan tomorrow morning when you set off.
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Gentlemen im back in buissness. Expect sheet soon as possible.
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Posted a collab between myself and Dogematix

As a note, just because Ed is willing to fight, doesn't mean she necessarily has to be the one to do it, I'm just setting up the scene more than anything, for the lulz
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Better Ed than Vin. Vin is very "KILL KILL KILL".
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Almost done with my post. Just got to do a once over it after this last paragraph.

Introduction posts are always the hardest. Buuut, I feel for a muted character in a tavern full of drunken laughter... a look into her mental frustrations would be golden here.
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So the entire bar is now getting gassed?
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So the entire bar is now getting gassed?


More like covered in overpowered itching powder.
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<Snipped quote by Dogematix>

More like covered in overpowered itching powder.


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Honestly... I would have used a hallucigen.
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Soooooo, nothing new?
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