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Dead Cruiser Dishonour Before Death / Better You Than Me

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@Zombehs

This is actually really good. You're in.

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This is mostly okay, but I have one issue to address. It looks like you mentioned mind-control multiple times, including your weapons' special abilities. This is generally a big "No" for me in games. We did have one player get a similar ability, but it's limited to one non-player non-boss mook at a time. You'll need to either drastically reduce the ability's power to this level, or ditch it altogether. You can also swap out for a different ability for your weapons, if you think that's fair.
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oh hello yes

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Everyone pile in.
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Let me specify: his hypnotic gaze can put a mook-level enemy in a trance for as long as they maintain eye contact. It's a pacifying effect, not really mind control.

His weapons can "destroy" but can't control. Shiva might destroy a memory or idea, and Lonestar might destroy a desire or capacity for emotion.

Sound alright?
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