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I've been working on her! It always just takes me a long time for a new OC
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Alright fair enough if you need any help I'd be happy to take a shot at it though OC's are usually better done by their creator.
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Oki, here we go. Now, I know Chloe is incredibly powerful here, mind it's actually planned out.

Chloe's strengths come when she actually gets her fighting spirit as well as support from her Master, but they are by no mwans compatible. In other words, unless her master finds a way to get her in, which is a challenge by far given how Freya prefers solitude as well as his lacking social cues, she'll be as pointless as a NPC!


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@KawaiiKyoukoChloe's canon abilities are:

Eye of the Mind (False) B[1]
Projection Magic B[1]
Kiss Demon B[1]→B+

and her phantasm is

typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Kanshou_and_B…
Triple-Linked Crane Wings ( 鶴翼三連かくよくさんれん , Kakuyoku Sanren?) is an "exquisite technique" utilized by EMIYA, the culmination of his usage of the swords and the "true meaning behind Kanshou and Bakuya."[9][10] It is said to be a "fatal attack" used to get him through his numerous battles, relying on the married swords' attraction to one another, consecutive projections, and keeping the basic technique, symbolized by the chanted poem.[10] The user projects three sets of Kanshou and Bakuya, executing an unavoidable combination through throwing and slashing maneuvers.[9] Each blade is lethal and the multiple attacks are meant to prohibit escape or defense.[11] The only ways to defeat it are with an omni-directional defense, or by ignoring the damage to make a suicidal assault on the user.[9]


is there a reason why she has the abilities that she does?
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Mainly because I like to go outside of canon. I like to make my own twists to things. Makes it easier for me to visualize the cgaracter in the RP, as well as keeping me from being bored with it. I just don't do canon all that well! That's the only reasons really.

The NP idea was mainly stolen from Chloe in the Prisma show tho.
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@KawaiiKyouko I won't allow sharing pain as it is. Though very much conditional it allows her to use things from other servants that would be especially powerful. Case in point Arthur's Mana Burst, or Astolfo's Monster strength. Those are just our own current abilities we can share. If we face Emiya she could potentially use his unlimited blade works against him. If it's reworked so that she gains a small stat boost (+) from fighting along side someone she deeply cares about that I'll allow.

Affections of the Holy Grail doesn't work the way you're portraying it as. Kiritsugu's ability grants him bonuses in luck. If you want to make it so that she gains a rank in charisma when talking to people who aren't under mental pollutant that is fine.

Chloe has not shown any ability to 'teleport' I can't allow that in.

The Noble Phantasm I have issues with because even if Matthew joined in with her I don't really understand how that would unlock extra stuff like Gae Bolg's abilities for example. If you want a watered down version of unlimited blade works that is fine but I can't allow you to basically recreate any noble phantasm on the spot with his help as that cheapens the other heroes.
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That doesn't really feel like high risk/high rewardy tho, it's more like high risk/meh reward. I mean, I could remove the NP part from it, instead only utilizing the personal skills. But, well, I didn't actually explain well enough how it would work. There'd be dice rolls and such, meaning we'll have no idea how effective it might be. It might make her extremely broken, I agree, but it might also dohave absolutely nothing. and she herself has no real control of how it works either. Like a curse.

Well, that was kinda what I was trying to say. I just blame my sleepyhead for forgetting the word charisma. But, yeah, it gives her that and removes her fighting will.

Tagged in at the end, read in the wiki she could. I'll remove it then.

Trust thing, idk. I made it with the intention that these two would not get along well at all, so if they did there should be some benefit. But I can remove the unlocking abilities and make it unlimited np works instead.

I guess the easiest way to explain it all is that I had an overarching theme going, and with Chloe the Affections of the Holy Grail's negative side is what, in my mind, allowed her to be on the stronger side. I just like high risk high reward concepts.
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Well I can't have the noble phantasm do as it says. Getting your master to help you shouldn't give you the ability to (for example) use Blood Clarent Arthur, Mordred's Phantasm, because it's a literal personification of her rage towards her father not in innate part of Clarent the sword. It doesn't make sense. Archer even states using Excalibur at a similar level inside of unlimited blades works might end up killing him. In her story Chloe summons Excalibur to use against morgan Excalibur but it only manages to draw the battle out. It's arguable if the blast was at it's full potential.

It was probably just a giant prana blast on both ends. If it copies a weapon's design, and allows Chloe to use an approximate ability to the noble phantasm that's fine. Worse comes to it she gets a sword she can swing around like Clarent, or Gae Dearg. Maybe one can use prana slashes like Excalibur, or some sort of minor curse that replicates the original to a lesser degree. But using/copying Galatine shouldn't give the ability to just sit in the sun for a few hours and gain Gawain's boosts.

I'd rather not take the risk all the same. I'm trying to work with you here and get a servant that doesn't render any other character inert because they could potentially just have their skills taken by Chloe if she likes them. It prevents enemies from being effected because Chloe can't possibly rip away say Caesar's incitement if he's trying to kill her. At the same time it basically gives her the chance to steal instinct, and mana burst from Arthur which are two incredibly dangerous skills since Arthur is a top tier servant.

Astolfo less so but the potential is still there. I also intend to bring along other npc servants to aid us from time to time so things like Mind's eye (which she's already giving up just for this skill), or presence concealment can be added to that list. So she could just end up with skills she ditched on top of skills she could gain otherwise.

The trust thing doesn't need to go directly towards her master. It can be Leon, Arthur, Astolfo, or his master. Or any other ally.

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I'll look into it tomorrow. Too sleepy to think properly.
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Alright fair enough.
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@KawaiiKyoukoHave you decided on anything yet? I'm certainly not intending to budge on my opinion on the matter of taking skills from other servants.
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Ah, sorry, I've not thought about it much today. Drinking and stuff
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Ah finally, I changed her name slightly.


Every team needs its cheery girl! I tried to make her mirror Astolfo in the way that like they're both really cheery but with Amelia she's kind of a troubeled person which she masked by acting cheery and stuff.

Anyways if anything is wrong let me know, I typed this up at like 2 am and I'm still not completely sure about the spells and origin stuff but if theres something wrong I can fix it.
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@vancexentan I am sorry but I will have to recant my interest from this. I need to focus on school more, something that becomes even more difficult when juggling multiple RP's at the same time. I hope you fun guys and may we meet again in future endeavors.
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@SaveusY2JI don't see anything wrong with her she can be transferred to the CS Section.
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Alright I added both her and Astolfo to the character section.
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Alright I'll add them into the front page once @KawaiiKyouko is done with her characters.
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Since I'm struggling with creativity right now, I'll just make her NP I Can't Believe It's Not Unlimited Blade Works instead of Diet Gates Of Babylon, as you said was fine.

And idk Clairvoyance over that shared pain.
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@KawaiiKyoukoClairvoyence is fine. It's basically an archer skill.
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Yeah, I know.
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