Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by superservo27
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superservo27 Hey I'm Grump! I'm Not So Grump!

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I am new, been here since literally yesterday, and need writing advice. Anything would help.
Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by FrankenDaughter
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-Read everything, more, forever. Never stop reading. Not just here, not just fiction, read everything. Read a constitution. Read a medical dissertation. Read a cook book. Read everything, more, forever. Never stop reading.
-Read everything you write aloud when proof-reading--even better, have a partner read what you've written aloud to you, and do the same for them. This works on a lot of skills at once.
-Listen to readings. Poetry, spoken word, anything.
-Write things. Write shitty things, write things that turn out good. Never stop writing. Write forever.
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Write about things you know. There's a bit of journaling in here, but one of the most cimplicated parts of writing that follows you around and gnaws at you is going to be communicating clearly, which is no less daunting than oratory skill. Don't just think, write thought. Use the need to think and reflect on things as a springboard for writing.
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Burn down your house, figuratively. Re-write things not because they were poorly worded, but because nothing was said. Kill everything that grows brittle from your fingers until what comes back is golden. Then ask your friend to do it. Internalize how they hack and hew at your darlings so that you know how to do it next time. Then, build a new house. Burn down your house, figuratively. Re-write things not because nothing was said, but because the things that were said could've been made clearer to someone other than you. Kill everything that feels pleasant when you trace it with your fingers until what remains is harsh and new. Then, ask your friend to do it. Internalize how they hack and hew at the darlings you wrote for both of you so that you know how to do it next time.

Then, build a new house.
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Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by FrankenDaughter
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Also don't be afraid to live in the house. There are no perfect houses.

This is the spirit of sharing in roleplays like those here actually.

Remember always that there are no perfect houses. Just build them better.

Build nice houses.

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Reading helps a lot. Just seeing how other people write can give you an idea on the different way sentences can flow. If it's for roleplaying, just have fun! The more you write the better you'll get at it, especially when you're bouncing off of someone else.
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@superservo27

This is advice specific to here, but I think that's what you asked for. Plus, it'll help you get better at writing characters in general.

In every post, think about what your character's physical, mental and emotional reaction is to what happened in the posts your replying to. Then write what they think about this, either by showing it through body language or facial expression, or just telling it through a straight-up inner monologue. Then, after that, you write about what your character does and says in response to that.

For larger works, yes, redrafting is important, but I disagree that you usually have to burn everything to the ground. I never do. Then again, I've never been published so maybe that's better advice, but I'll tell you that there is often something of value in the first thing that comes out of your hands.

Basically, write with absolutely no regard for the quality or even basic spelling and grammar of your work. The goal is simply to get a first draft finished. (This can often be the hard part.) Then leave it and come back the next day and fix all the issues that are easily fixed, like spelling, grammar and glaringly bad prose. Then take several days off and come back to it with the mindset of a critic, but DON'T act like the whole thing's worthless. Go through it systematically, note how every paragraph could be improved or changed for the better, how plotholes could be resolved and pacing could be tightened up or fleshed out as appropriate, and make these changes. Do this a few times, a few days apart, and again at the end of the book when you've figured out the aim and theme of the whole book. You'll probably have to change a LOT of the beginning to fit these aims and themes.
Hidden 7 yrs ago 11 mos ago Post by Darcel
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1- Read.

If you don't have time to read, you definitely won't have time to write. Simple as that.
A cup of tea/ coffee and a book, enjoy the adventure.
Yes, taste the syllables and devour the words until the whole story is fully chewed and digested thoroughly.
If it's good, you'll find out. If it's badly written, throw the book out of the window.


2- Imagination.

Reading is the finest teacher of how to construct thoughts.
Word after word comes the power of magination.
Before you type, I want you to think, talk to your mind, express your ideas, shape and look at the view without depending on your eyes.
Focus and as fucked as it seemed, hear the voice of the character you're creating— Female or male? hunter or vampire? human or perhaps some dead queen for 1,000 years and like we french people say: C'est la voyage de temps, mon ami.


3- Emotions.

You are no better than one-liners if you can't do something as intricate and necessary as making somebody feel something when they read your words. Yes, roleplayers know how to spell, and yes they are very skilled at using a period at the end of sentences. But in all actuality, most are just building brick walls for us, instead of framing what we came here for: A live experience. A staircase, really.

Length? fuck that. Filler words don't count unless you're writing an essay for school. This is Roleplayerguild, a place where swords clash, words flutter off or splatter on the screen, wings extend from the backs of devine creatures. I don't want to see 1,600 words about nothing but rather, need 16 words about something. Build a kingdom, carry readers out of this world and set them down in a field of velvet, saccharin roses.

Your character is sad and hurt?
Make the words bleed tears.
Happy and funny?
Show us, make us smile and laugh like dorks.
In love?
Well, make the post pump and dance like a second beating heart.

Without emotional characters, you are just writing robotic events.
Find the right words and the rest is simple.

Make it matter, okay?


4- Write.

This is how you do it: you sit down and play with your the keyboard as if you were a pianist.
All you have to do is write the true sentences until it's done.
You take your characters, you put them on a journey, you find out who they really are.
More importantly, believe and care about your characters the same way you care about living humans you see every day.
Be unpredictable while noting down because there is nothing more delicious about writing words of a story and never quite know where they'll take you.
Don't be random, there must be a reason for each smile, each kick and each step you write. After all, the choice of your actions will express the truth of your character.

4- Enjoy.

Some people roleplay because they are bored, I hope you're not one of those creatures.
Find out the reason that commands you to write. Aside boredom, possess your own spirit and the spirit of your roleplay partners.
Roleplay is food, feast your mind and fucking enjoy it. Don't worry, you will never gain weight.
You roleplay and you fucking mean it.


The bottom line?
Don't tell me nice things, show me nice things.



On another note, I also agree with these two >>>@Silver Carrot@FrankenDaughter

Good luck.

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