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I rather liked my concept for my original race even if it didn't really get off the ground before the game end I'm bringing it back.

Character Application: Transferring the Perennials from The Galaxy Isn't Yours (Nation RP).

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@Timemaster@LegionPothIX Both of ye get in the CS :D

Do hoomans know the Ubi Vermis exist or are they hiding still.
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@6slyboy6 I'll likely have my first post be some in-medias res shit but I'm letting you do the honor of posting first. It'd be nice to know the situation that I'm in-medias res-ing into.
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@6slyboy6 I think I explained that the Matriarch hid from the humans so they don't know about them :)
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@Ciaran Your popsicle people are hawt. I look forward to sicking Aria Summer on another highly religious civilization. Our two civilizations seem to have some elements in common: your people eat fungi, my fungi eats people. This should be fun xD.
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@LegionPothIX Are you sure you tagged the right person? My people are worms without any free will that eat minerals in larvae form and then whatever the hosts eat to sustain themselves.
Also. No religion. Religion need free will to work, right? :)

But if you really where talking about my people, thank you :)
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@Timemaster I indeed tagged the wrong person. I meant to tag @Ciaran and edited it, but the edit wouldn't have fixed who got the notification.

Also. No religion. Religion need free will to work, right? :)


My hivemind has a religion. Religion is just a mythically focused organization of complex rules, rhetoric, and devotion.

But if you really where talking about my people, thank you :)


In reading through your character sheet I actually found it to be very sparse. I hope you don't take this the wrong way but I feel like I learned more about your character from reading the Neurax Worm wiki page than the actual sheet. Perhaps some revision and elaboration is in order.
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@LegionPothIX How would someone without free will have the ability to worship someone? In my opinion, without choice...there can be no religion. The Ubi Vermis do not think, they don't have feelings etc or in other words no free will. There is only one mind that controls everything at the same time.

Also. I know my CS (more like nation sheet but whatever, it's kinda the same thing) is sparse. I've just returned to RPing/writing anything from a long break and I'm still feeling a little rusty. I know that shouldn't be an excuse but that is how it is with me, if I don't constantly do something...I loose my skill at it. I'll give it a another look and give more information, no problem.
Thank you for taking time in reading the CS/NS and giving the advice.

Also. I am familiar with the Neurax Worm but strangely I didn't get inspired from there. The Neural Parasite ability of the Infestor creature from Starcraft 2 is the place where I got inspired from :)

EDIT : Another also. My race was not even remotely close to space travel or guns or anything like that when the Empire came so I don't have much to say about tech for them. Military ? None whatsoever. Only controlled creatures and nothing more.
Only one leader that dubs as all the other important persons that other races have because there is only one "person" that can think in the whole race.
In a way or the other...it's small because I don't have much to write about these things. I don't say that I couldn't (and probably should've) written something more in other places to compensate.
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@LegionPothIX How would someone without free will have the ability to worship someone?


The nature of theology and teleology in the context of its meaning and impact on a hive mind really is something that should be discussed in character if ever we have the opportunity.

Also. I am familiar with the Neurax Worm but strangely I didn't get inspired from there. The Neural Parasite ability of the Infestor creature from Starcraft 2 is the place where I got inspired from :)


I too worked in some Zerg, and Borg, aspects into my race as well as a lot of D&D monster manual stuff. They're the two main go-to's for hiveminds. Well, them and I guess now Unity.

Also. I know my CS (more like nation sheet but whatever, it's kinda the same thing) is sparse. [...] My race was not even remotely close to space travel or guns or anything like that when the Empire came so I don't have much to say about tech for them. Military ? None whatsoever. Only controlled creatures and nothing more.
Only one leader that dubs as all the other important persons that other races have because there is only one "person" that can think in the whole race.
In a way or the other...it's small because I don't have much to write about these things. I don't say that I couldn't (and probably should've) written something more in other places to compensate.


All of this belongs on your character sheet in a more detailed and expanded form. There's a place specifically there for it (History).

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Are we allowed to have robotic nations/factions/(I seriously don't know what to call them. Are they nations?)
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Just editing the Rarians but, on the way there got assaulted, by my 5 page take on the allegory(might have spell that wrong XD) of the cave. So might be able to post tom or on friday given that school doesn't surprise me with another one.
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@jorcool Robots were annihiliated when the hoomans arrived, as they feared their power. A race can make them (thought in secret or with approval) but hoomans will always seek to destroy foreign robots and AIs.
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@6slyboy6 I got an idea for a Star Trek themed race that would make these hoomans shit their collective pants. Sadly I don't think it'd really fit here because it relies heavily on technological staples of the show to come into being (transporters, replicators, holodecks, etc).
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@LegionPothIX If you can show me a CS skeleton I can consider letting them in.
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@6slyboy6 I could give you the basics but I have no intention of submitting them as a character at this time. The race I'm now playing was designed as a companion race to that one and they're very similar in some ways and very different in others. The main drive of that race also doesn't really fit in this setting, and their origins gives them little to fear from hoomans. Being born of the most inhospitable environment known to man, near the event horizon of a black hole, means their territory is very unlikely to come under fire from the hoomans.

The pants shiting terror part is that they're sentient AI that can become anything, at any time, and are nearly undetectable in nature. Every single molecule of every one of them is monitored at all times, through every moment of their existence, and the data is recorded in one unreachable place: in the black hole itself.

The whole point of that race is to explore the universe in a very Star Trek exque manner, but with a very different approach, still using all the same tools that are staples of Voyager/TNG.

They come into being when a computer analyzes a data pattern for a life it has little to no information on. A holographic model is made and pattern replicated, and quantum linked to a duplicate. Then that duplicate is compressed into a datastream by a transporter and beamed into the black hole for storage. Because they're quantum linked the matter outside the black hole and the matter inside the black hole experience the same phenomenons (even if the duplicate isn't a "person" anymore) and so the recording is made naturally by the black hole as if the matter inside is continually updating.

This race uses this process to explore what it means to be other races as a way to try to understand its creators (who fell into the black hole as they lived on the nearest habitable planet to the start that collapsed). The AI is in command of the life it is stored in and is trained on how to be that life, often by being born into (or changeling-ing their way into) an existing family unit for that species (not all of which are sentient species).
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@LegionPothIX Nice race idea. It is similar in nature with the Grey Goo race from the Grey Goo game (I know, I know...) and then combined with the Star Trek idea. Really nice, great job in creating them :)
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@LegionPothIX My exterminatus finger is twitching.
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Got new PC...so yeah, I might be set back on my sheet.
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@6slyboy6 Don't blame me. Star Trek is fucking OP.

@Timemaster I have no idea what that is. Google says its on steam so I might check it out.
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