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@Majoras End Interesting. I’ll tentatively say yes, depending on how you want to work them in.
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Naturally the GM rules all but I am alright with the idea that a select few daemon or half breeds are aligned with the circus.
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Had a little bit of time to tinker with a CS, changes probable, and still need to decide on a compulsion, as well find an image.

Still, it's a start... :D
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@FancyHats Can you post it in the character tab also so we don't lose track. Awesome audition.
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I am a little iffy on my compulsion/price of the contract might change it up. If anyone has ideas toss them my way.
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My character is up in the CHAR. it's what i got so far and i'm kinda stuck so imma turn it in now
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@The1Rolling1Boy took quick look. Liking so far. Will give feedback tonight if can. Still on clock :-(
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@FancyHats I'll ask you to complete the missing bits, and then will formally accept. I liked the audition quite a bit!

@The1Rolling1Boy I will humbly ask for another draft, if you're willing? The core of what is there is excellent- I do like it. But I find it's a bit more tell than show, if that makes sense? The audition is where I'm putting the most weight on accepting/rejecting characters, so please feel free to take your time to fluff it out a bit? Thank you so much for all the work you've done so far!
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I'm interested, do I just post my character sheet in the Character section and wait to be approved?
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@Aleranicus

Can i be the devil's advocate? Just need to nit-pic at some stuff. Other than that, the CS seems fine!

- In the CS, most sentences tend to run-on.

- "The ring man"?

- How did they get caught up in a riot?

- where did the roasted apple scent come from? Or how that ties into their audition?
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@VerusEbullio Feel free to Post here and if I give a tentative thumbs up, can move to Character Page.

@Majoras End Thanks, I'm dead tired and still have two more shifts today -_-. As long as things are kept positive and civil, I'm happy to have a devil's advocate.

@All: for those of you struggling with Compulsions, please see below for some examples:

You must never change your course of action due to fear.

You must always show mercy to your enemies and may never hold a grudge against those that act against you.

You must never tell a lie, mistruth, or obscure the truth.

You must always o er aid to those in need— friends, strangers—no matter how desperate the situation.

You must do all things in moderation and if you ever overindulge yourself, you lose your gifts.
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Posted some character images. Using the count from Gankutsuou.
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Credit for my picture goes to Claparo-Sans of DeviantArt
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@Tenslashsix I hope it's alright, I used Octus as my connection/interaction. If not let me know and I can change it. :)
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Feel free. I need to get my character sheet finished. I am about to change my compulsion the stuff I have posted was more of a rough draft.
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Alright I'll keep my eye open and change accordingly
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@Aleranicus
Thank you! That was just my first shot during a writer's block so give me a bit so i can work on the audition.
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@Aleranicus That took way longer than it should have, but it’s done. ^_^
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@Aleranicus, second pass completed. :D



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Alright added my Audition draft. Almost complete CS. Probably finalize by tomorrow.
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