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Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by LordofthePies
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If this is still open I'd love to join, @Blu


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Ophidian... Sounds like a CAT I KNOW.
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Ophidian is actually a type of lizard monster. There's another form of his character that is rather... scincid-y

https://www.google.com/search?q=Ophidian&oq=Ophidian&aqs=chrome..69i57.1987051j0j1&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8
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I only know that damn cat BOY.
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I've got no idea what you're referring to, but I'll pretend I do.

*Looks up Ophidian cat*
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Is it this little blue fellow?

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Is it this little blue fellow?



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Oh! xD
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@LordofthePies As a normal person, your character will only be seen as a level 1 threat so take one star off. But more importantly: the character doesn't seem to contribute much of a role. He seems like he's just an ordinary bystander in the grand scheme of things. I guess it's just that the Background info lacks any reason why he's coming to town and/or how will he be roped into all the weird stuff that will happen.

I will closing the RP from new applicants from this point on. Everyone that has already expressed interest can continue to fill out their CS.
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Thanks, I'll edit it. I'll let you know when I finish.

I'm not completely sure how to make Alexander less "bystandery."
Any suggestions? x.x

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@LordofthePies I would say the best thing to do would be to look at the other accepted characters and read up on their backstories. Some have personal ties to the missing Suzie Moore. Some are contributing to the strange, paranormal events that will be happening during the course of the RP. Every character in some way or another contributes to the progression of the story and to interesting interactions that may happen during the RP. Basically, your character has to have some personal story that will be explored during the RP that can potentially tie them to the others.
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*Cries into character sheet*
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Is it alright if Alex lives in Innsmouth, Massachusetts and his girlfriend had a similar fate to the high school senior and now he's on a hunt for answers? @Blu
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@LordofthePies
If all else fails.
La-Zha is very good at roping in innocent bystanders to jump into a pit of Shoggoths :D

More seriously, I could have them do something. If both @Blu & you are cool with it, suppose La-Zha could have him be their new recent plaything at the start of the RP. Perhaps before the start of the RP, it could have seen his talent with computers/tech and stuff and taken an interest in him for...various reasons.

If you want too of course. Just thought I'd try and help~
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*Cries into character sheet*


It's not much but maybe you can have your character work at Innsmouth Security Solutions like DeadDrop's character, Zach. Since your character is good with tech, I feel like there is an opportunity there. Or maybe rework your character to have them be involved with the CIA as a field tech guy tracking the paranormal stuff that happens.

EDIT: Also Rune_Alchemist's suggestion.
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I'm a fan of the CIA idea, I'll try to work that into his background. Thanks for the help :D

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Is it alright if Alex lives in Innsmouth, Massachusetts and his girlfriend had a similar fate to the high school senior and now he's on a hunt for answers? @Blu


Double post to address this. This is viable. Perhaps something like this happened before. Same circumstance but it wasn't as big in the news and your character has been obsessing with this for years. This is a boost to motivate him to really find out the truth of things.

EDIT: lol ignore this now!
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Boom, it's edited. @Blu
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@LordofthePies Alright that's good now. Accepted~

I believe we have these people left to wait for:
@T Risket expressed interest
@Zoey White expressed interest
@Kaesus sent a CS via PM
@ihinka expressed interest
@Migyudon CS in progress
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Should I just slap it over into the Character tab or is that your job? <.<

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