Gerontis said
@AlternathanEuhm, you still need to finish your Jounin CS before you can lead a team.

AlterNathan said
I could use some help ya know

Fieryfly said
The site probably gave you that because "oto" is sound and "ko" is child. But it is hilarious because "otoko" itself means man. Anyway as for names. there are quite a lot of Japanese names that have something to do with sound. For example there is Ayane (kanji for color + kanji for sound), Kanon (flower + sound), Akane (red + sound) etc. Are you looking for a male or female name?

Lesli said
@IVIasterjay :--- Your Ame ANBU :I would lower the speed. He already has a technique that 'greaty' increases his speed. Combined with his S ranked Technique, I wouldn't like to add an 'incredible' speed to it. It causes the S ranked to become already kind of OP in my eyes, together with some other techniques. If you would be so kind to reduce it to average speed than it has my approval.

Your Konoha geninI am not sure if the weapon/hat is a joke or such. But a floating hat that eats people (sorry, I am trying not to sound too serious about it.), but that is a no from me.

Also, she has sensing transmission, but no sensory technique? If she has one, would you please set in the jutsu link together with a little detail about how far and such? Else she wouldn't have much with the sensory transmission technique.

The custom techniques are a bit hmmm. Well one can remove a tag, she can activated the jutsu on miles away. That needs to be toned down if its a D ranked technique. Not to mention that it sounds like an auto-hit technique (of course when the tag is planted, something that can't be done automatically ), but I am against auto-hitting technique. So if you would please change that please.The last custom technique is a bit confusing. If it fails, it works? Sorry, but I can't work my head around that one.

IVIasterJay said
Changed to "Average".
Noticed. ^^

The hat is controlled using the contact version of her Mind Transfer False Body Animation jutsu. The inside is lined with her targeting tags, and it's being controlled by her mind. It "flies" similar to an umbrella flying in the wind, and it "eats people" by closing around their body.

Got it now. If you would please make that more clear in the CS that would avoid any more confusement about that. :)

Nope, she hasn't learned any Sensing Techniques yet. The application I'm imagining right now it to allow others to see through the eyes of her animated objects by touching her physical body. I guess that would fall under the Mind Body Transmission Technique though, so I'll just get rid of Sensing Transmission for now

It allows the person to sense what the sensor is sensing. A mix of both the Body Transmission and sensory mastery. I get what you mean, but that isn't that technique.

. I changed the first custom jutsu to merely be a condition of the second custom jutsu. And to understand how it works, just think of how a golem works. A piece of paper in the mouth bring it to life, and if it's removed the golem becomes inanimate.

This is way more clear :)

Lesli said
That said, your genin has my acceptance. I still have second doubts about your ANBU being able to absorb natural flames into chakra. That means he can just create a forest fire and have unlimited chakra. Would you mind to change that? Then you will have my acceptance on your ANBU as well.

IVIasterJay said
How about he absorbs all fire, but only converts fire or heat that was created from another ninja's chakra into his chakra? He would retain immunity to being hurt by fire, but only enemy fire/heat would restore his chakra.I'll get on editing the genin again.

LJN92 said
I have a feeling Team Osamu is going to be a riot XD

Lesli said
Hhmmm, Immune to a certain extent would be fine by me. I am against that he can absorb a high ranked fire technique or a special fire nature technique without any costs/risks.