[OOC] Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

[AlterNathan]

Gerontis said
@AlternathanEuhm, you still need to finish your Jounin CS before you can lead a team.

I could use some help ya know

[Lesli]

AlterNathan said
I could use some help ya know

Ask it then? PM's are handy for ask/requesting help from a GM. We can't spot or see anything if we notice a bit of spam in the OOC.

[Lazlo]

Fieryfly said
The site probably gave you that because "oto" is sound and "ko" is child. But it is hilarious because "otoko" itself means man. Anyway as for names. there are quite a lot of Japanese names that have something to do with sound. For example there is Ayane (kanji for color + kanji for sound), Kanon (flower + sound), Akane (red + sound) etc. Are you looking for a male or female name?

Oops, probably should have specified that. I'd like a male name please! Hehe.

[Fieryfly]

Kanon is a male name (flower sound). There is also:

Hibiki (sound, echo, resonance),
Kyou (same meaning, always nice to have different readings to the same kanji)
Hibiku (to resound, to reverberate)
Kyouichi (basically meaning echo boy)

I can't think of more of the top of my head really if you looking specifically for sound.

[Lazlo]

Kyouichi? I like it! Thanks a bunch, Fieryfly.

[AlterNathan]

Kyouichi... sounds like kunoichi and that is as far from male as it can get xD

[Lazlo]

I'm sure my character will be comfortable enough with his sexuality not to even notice something like that :P

[AlterNathan]

haha point taken

[Roran Hawkins]

Nathan, you can post for your Hyuga genin in Team 4 :C y u ignore meh *is totally crying*

[fattwan]

Hey yawl :D

[Blandman]

Post all done and dusted.

Also, just noticed I got quoted in the Breakdown.

I feel so loved. If I could feel love that is.

[IVIasterJay]

Lesli said
@IVIasterjay :--- Your Ame ANBU :I would lower the speed. He already has a technique that 'greaty' increases his speed. Combined with his S ranked Technique, I wouldn't like to add an 'incredible' speed to it. It causes the S ranked to become already kind of OP in my eyes, together with some other techniques. If you would be so kind to reduce it to average speed than it has my approval.

Changed to "Average".

Your Konoha geninI am not sure if the weapon/hat is a joke or such. But a floating hat that eats people (sorry, I am trying not to sound too serious about it.), but that is a no from me.

The hat is controlled using the contact version of her Mind Transfer False Body Animation jutsu. The inside is lined with her targeting tags, and it's being controlled by her mind. It "flies" similar to an umbrella flying in the wind, and it "eats people" by closing around their body.

Also, she has sensing transmission, but no sensory technique? If she has one, would you please set in the jutsu link together with a little detail about how far and such? Else she wouldn't have much with the sensory transmission technique.

Nope, she hasn't learned any Sensing Techniques yet. The application I'm imagining right now it to allow others to see through the eyes of her animated objects by touching her physical body. I guess that would fall under the Mind Body Transmission Technique though, so I'll just get rid of Sensing Transmission for now.

The custom techniques are a bit hmmm. Well one can remove a tag, she can activated the jutsu on miles away. That needs to be toned down if its a D ranked technique. Not to mention that it sounds like an auto-hit technique (of course when the tag is planted, something that can't be done automatically ), but I am against auto-hitting technique. So if you would please change that please.The last custom technique is a bit confusing. If it fails, it works? Sorry, but I can't work my head around that one.

I changed the first custom jutsu to merely be a condition of the second custom jutsu. And to understand how it works, just think of how a golem works. A piece of paper in the mouth bring it to life, and if it's removed the golem becomes inanimate.

[Lesli]

IVIasterJay said
Changed to "Average".
Noticed. ^^

The hat is controlled using the contact version of her Mind Transfer False Body Animation jutsu. The inside is lined with her targeting tags, and it's being controlled by her mind. It "flies" similar to an umbrella flying in the wind, and it "eats people" by closing around their body.

Got it now. If you would please make that more clear in the CS that would avoid any more confusement about that. :)

Nope, she hasn't learned any Sensing Techniques yet. The application I'm imagining right now it to allow others to see through the eyes of her animated objects by touching her physical body. I guess that would fall under the Mind Body Transmission Technique though, so I'll just get rid of Sensing Transmission for now

It allows the person to sense what the sensor is sensing. A mix of both the Body Transmission and sensory mastery. I get what you mean, but that isn't that technique.

. I changed the first custom jutsu to merely be a condition of the second custom jutsu. And to understand how it works, just think of how a golem works. A piece of paper in the mouth bring it to life, and if it's removed the golem becomes inanimate.

This is way more clear :)

That said, your genin has my acceptance. I still have second doubts about your ANBU being able to absorb natural flames into chakra. That means he can just create a forest fire and have unlimited chakra. Would you mind to change that? Then you will have my acceptance on your ANBU as well.

[IVIasterJay]

Lesli said
That said, your genin has my acceptance. I still have second doubts about your ANBU being able to absorb natural flames into chakra. That means he can just create a forest fire and have unlimited chakra. Would you mind to change that? Then you will have my acceptance on your ANBU as well.

How about he absorbs all fire, but only converts fire or heat that was created from another ninja's chakra into his chakra? He would retain immunity to being hurt by fire, but only enemy fire/heat would restore his chakra.

I'll get on editing the genin again.

[Lesli]

IVIasterJay said
How about he absorbs all fire, but only converts fire or heat that was created from another ninja's chakra into his chakra? He would retain immunity to being hurt by fire, but only enemy fire/heat would restore his chakra.I'll get on editing the genin again.

Hhmmm, Immune to a certain extent would be fine by me. I am against that he can absorb a high ranked fire technique or a special fire nature technique without any costs/risks.

[LJN92]

I have a feeling Team Osamu is going to be a riot XD

[Gamer geek]

Gero I'm not to sure if you are literally annoyed with Kato or not but if you are let me just say that I do what I do to add a bit to plot. Im not to sure if your annoyance is serious or if it is just in-character or not. Thats the downside to the interwebs, you can't always gauge people's attitudes easily.

[j8cob]

LJN92 said
I have a feeling Team Osamu is going to be a riot XD

And considering Nori isn't going to try and suppress any personalities hardly at all, it might very well become one at this rate.

[IVIasterJay]

Lesli said
Hhmmm, Immune to a certain extent would be fine by me. I am against that he can absorb a high ranked fire technique or a special fire nature technique without any costs/risks.

So... get rid of his KG entirely?

[Nicias Askani]

to any and all GMs present. before i start this i should probably get an opinion. Can i create Kiri jonin/anbu that is a swordsman of the mist? if so should i use a canon sword or should i creat my own blade since this is an AU?