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@Gummy1295 u can always run it by me beforehand or pass for now if I’d like raddum to go first.
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or pass for now if I’d like raddum to go first.


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@Fury Panda

I feel oddly threatened.
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I've finished my first post...

...Well, almost. @Fury Panda, I sent you the finished draft through PM, I'd love to hear your feedback before I submit it.
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@Gummy1295

I don't know if I'm scared of Jeff or scared for him.

Both, probably.
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I don't know if I'm scared of Jeff or scared for him.

Both, probably.


It's understandable. He pricked his finger on the same window that the claw broke into. My original intentions were to give him a little more composure, but after thinking it through, I thought it best not to introduce him as a Gary Stu.
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It's understandable. He pricked his finger on the same window that the claw broke into. My original intentions were to give him a little more composure, but after thinking it through, I thought it best not to introduce him as a Gary Stu.


Gary stu is not a delicious brew
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I laugh in the face of danger HAHAHAHAHAHA

Edit: I saw it as him thinking he was dreaming or something and setting out to prove it.
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Also I know I need to post, I was just trying to see what coding would work best with the color text of the Dream Hour.

Decided that Underline looks ugly with text that is partially colored. Beginning to actually write a post now.
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I laugh in the face of danger HAHAHAHAHAHA

Edit: I saw it as him thinking he was dreaming or something and setting out to prove it.


You'd be right! The reason he freaked out when he tasted the blood on his finger is because he used to think that everything was either a simulation or an incredibly elaborate prank.
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You'd be right! The reason he freaked out when he tasted the blood on his finger is because he used to think that everything was either a simulation or an incredibly elaborate prank.


See? This is the benefits of lower-tier technology.

You don't get brainwashed into thinking everything is a hologram! :p
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Alllrighty, I managed to post. Kinda calm externally dying internally mode activated

This is why old-fashion tools will never go out of style. Because you might need them in case you get stuck in a strange hour of the day with demonic bug claws and people punching doors.

Unfortunately I don't think anyone here (Even Itaki himself) Would be carrying a crowbar. Doesn't seem like something on the packing agenda.
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*when you accidentally laugh at instead of like a post and you can't change it D:*

Sorry about that @Ammokkx ^^"
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*when you accidentally laugh at instead of like a post and you can't change it D:*

Sorry about that @Ammokkx ^^"


I figured as much, though ratings don't mean too much to me anyway.
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Morning everyone. What a rude awakening tho; you wrote three posts while I was asleep. >_>

I'm starting my next turn like this:

Jeff knew he was doing something wrong when the little Moe girl was working better under pressure than he was.

[@Tenda Tenmo] She's so nice tho TT_TT
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"Unfortunately," Lock stepped forward, being the first to reply. "I don't think any one of us do. At least I don't, didn't really figure to take a crowbar to school with me."




-Eden does Eden things-


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@Gummy1295 I'm liking that someone seems to have gone full "fuck this shit". I like his internal monologue and how that related back to his feelings about the other students in the car.

@Raddum I couldn't help but chuckle when he asked for a crowbar. Out of character motivations...was he being serious, or trying to crack a small joke? Either way it's telling of who he is.

@Ammokkx Every persona group has to have the person who's entirely too calm :D I really like how you introduced the scissors as a weapon. I feel like the way you wrote it helped to make them sound more lethal than "don't run with scissors." I also dug how you utilized lore in your post!

@Tenma Tendo I feel like you really got across the mix between being afraid, but wanting to work toward solutions at the same time. Clutching the locket was a nice touch and felt very real to her character.

Everyone's posts have been great so far. Looking forward to reading @Aislynn next :D
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@Raddum I couldn't help but chuckle when he asked for a crowbar. Out of character motivations...was he being serious, or trying to crack a small joke? Either way it's telling of who he is.


Sad as it might sound, he was serious.

Due to his upbringing he's a bit more practical than wealthier families that always had the latest technology around. It's bound to cause hilarity as Itaki tries to not only survive the Dream Hour, but also 2028 Seattle.

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@Fury PandaSo I think I got myself mixed up but is the posting order post thing a set order we have to stick to for the near future or were you just taking note of it?
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