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@Lucius Cypher Seems like a good character with some deep seeded issues. They are okay.

@Zelosse Don't know why you would want a Dwarf cook and then have him in armor but okay.

@Rekaigan Pretty good, I like them

@ADamnFiddle So Aqua, okay just don't expect them to be too liked in the middle of a battle and not giving heals.
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I'll throw in something when I get home. I got an idea for a dragon and his kitten.
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Can't wait to see it
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@Spriggs27 Well, I did something. Dunno if it's proper or anything.

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@Ennui She's good, looks a bit demonic but I'll let it pass

@ManoftheNorth Erik is good bruh
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@Kalleth I'll let the old guy onboard
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@Ookawa Why are you asking for acceptance? You are a co-gm, you don't really need to do that.

@Noodles I guess I'll take'em
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@Lunarlors34 quiet down. This is a library
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Name: Joseph
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Age: 27
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Magic: Protection Magic - Joseph can imbue himself or others with specific magic wards against certain attacks, like a Fire Shield that blocks heat, or a barrier that deflects arrows. He can also grant people immunity to poison or dieseases for a limited time. He can affect up to five people including himself whenever he cast a spell but he cannot have more than one protection at a time: making a new ward immediately dismissed the previous ones.
Personality: Joseph is a quiet, reserved man who prefers to act instead of speak. Despite his age he doesn't really know much about the world so he often just watches and observes. He is able to keep calm if only because he doesn't want to panic and always tries to think before he acts. Even though he's willing to do most things, he's very reluctant to act on his own and he often relies on others to instruct him. On his own he tends to just stick with what he's good at, and when he has to do something completely new he'd try to get some help first, or failing that, just risk everything on doing it right the first time.
Background: Joseph was a simple carpenter trying to survive a monsterous world when he received a vision. He woke up one morning and saw a vision of great warfare in a distant land, where he was clad head-to-toe in magnificent armor and wielding a mighty sword. He fought many enemies and saved many people, and it all felt so real to him. When he woke up he tried to just think it was all just a dream, but then a missionary arrived to his home. This missionary preached to Joseph about fighting some grand evil and that he was one of many chosen to be a holy warrior. Joseph didn't believe him at first since he was never even religious, but he did want more from his life. After a week thinking about it, Joseph sought the missionary out and decided to join his religious order.

When Joseph joined the missionary's church, they trained him and many others on how to become a knight. Many failed and Joseph was close to giving up himself. They put him through grueling, almost tortuous training. Hundreds had joined but after five years of training, only Joseph and three others became knights. But that only prepared him for the physical aspects of his knighthood; after proving his body was strong, he was made to learn magic, which tested his willpower and mind. He was given a harsh education and mentally challenged, breaking even, but he did not give up. He learned the spells by force of will and broke out of mind-altering enchantments and regained his personality afterwards each time they tried to change him. After another five years of this, Joseph was ready to become a true holy warrior. A real paladin.

It wasn't even a week before word reached the temple of a campsite that needed strong and able people there. Originally the temple turned the messenger away, but it was this moment that Joseph knew he was waiting for. He knew that there was more going on than meets the eye, and that all his training and his entire life up to that point was to bring him to that location. So after gathering his things Joseph left the temple and headed to this camp to face his destiny.
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Knight Armor - Strong yet flexible steel armor that covers Joseph's body completely, with a cloak. Specially designed by his temple to provide as much comfort as possible for Joseph so that he rarely need to take it off, even when he needs to wash himself.
Greatsword - A long two-handed sword heavy enough that most people need two hands to use, but Joseph has trained himself hard enough that he can use just one. Despite it's size and weight Joseph can strike fast and precisely with this weapon. He could neatly shave a man swinging this sword.
Crest Shield - A magic shield baring the crest of Joseph's temple. This shield is capable of blocking and even deflecting spells as if they were arrows.
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Chosen undead D:
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Something like that yeah.
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@Zaphander Me and Lunar have a number of problems with your Cs

We want to know more in detail about your protection magic

Then there's your shield that's able to deflect magic like Arrows

and the fact that he can wield a greatsword well enough to shave a man with his sword

I personally don't like how the backstory is set up, it makes it seem like Joseph and this holy order is in the world, but humans to the world are a rarity and having a holy order of humans in a demonic realm without them coming under attack constantly doesn't make sense to me, edit it to where he comes to this world like everyone else does instead of just hearing about the camp.
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@Spriggs27

I added more information about his protection magic.

What sort of issues do you have with his shield? I guess you don’t like a shield being able to block magic. When I meant deflect I mean how sometimes when an arrow hits a shield it doesn’t go into the shield but bounces off. It doesn’t mean the spell is automatically reflected back to the mage. It does mean a mage has to be more precise with his magic instead of just shooting and expecting it to go through his shield. It’s basically a magic resistant shield.

I might have exaggerated it, but I just mean to say that Joseph is really good with his sword. He’s not a barbarian who simply swings around a big heavy weapon and just uses his strength to deal damage. He is strong, but he knows how to aim his strokes to where it’ll do the most damage instead of just hacking away trying to overpower everyone.

I didn’t mention it because it’s a secret even to Joseph, but his “Holy Order” is actually controlled by demons. He’s been brainwashed to be their knight who thinks he’s fighting a great evil, but he’s just a spy who thinks he’s a hero. They’ve been sending him visions and training him to become a knight so they could have someone in the camp who is unwittingly feeding his temple information. That’s not to say they mean to hurt you guys; they just know that since they’re actually demons, no one will trust them. So they raise and manipulate humans like Joseph to be their frontman.
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If I were to let your char into the rp and accepted him, would you have even told me that he was a spy?

Knock the fact that he is a human, one of the rarest races to the realm, but was born here and had his life be faked up till he went on his journey to the camp to spy on the camp group?

I dislike the idea and don't like the character, every other human in the rp has come from another world and come less equipped and less armed.
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Not really, no. I was hoping that maybe you all may have noticed something inconsistent about his temple and religious order and might've tried to look into it yourself. And if you didn't, then he was a good spy. Like I said they aren't going to try to harm the group while Joseph works for them, and even if he dies they'll just send another, or OoC they stop being involved since if Joseph is dead I'm probably using a new character or left the RP.

How rare are we talking? I figured maybe there might be a few pockets of human villages hidden around the world. And his life wasn't faked; for the most part he really was just a regular human trying to survive this world full of monsters and demons. Then the demon temple recruited him as well as many others and trained them to be their minions. I can change that Joseph does come into the camp like the other humans, though the demons would still be spying through him since he is one of their few paladins, so they'd have a reason to watch him closely anyways.

But if you don't like the character I guess that's it then. I hope your RP does well.
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