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Sounds good. Whenever you're ready, just pm my your CS and I'll approve it.
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So I've finish typing up some plot. It's of course very long. It's also very dark. I'll post it today.
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Plot point is up. Again it's dark. I tried to treat one of the subjects it goes into as delicately as I could. I hope it does not offend. I'll begin work on a plot point to move the story on to the following morning when the real story begins.
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@Elevation, @13Org, @SonofJet, @HokumPocus, @Jerkchicken

So just a recap, can I get a show of hands who is still in the RP?

I absolutely would understand if anyone wants to drop out because of the mature themes in the last post. I did my best to handle the touchy subject of harassment as delicately as I could.
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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Jerkchicken
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I'm here I'm just doing other stuff atm
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Sounds good, Chicken. Take your time.

Story-wise, that post made sense to me, with the queen's history and everything. But I feel like this might be the inappropriate medium for where it went so I'm second guessing my decision... Any thoughts?
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I guess it's fine, like the subject-matter is iffy and needs a certain delicacy so it's not like super edgy shock value shit or like overwrought drama. I read Berserk so my metrics are probably really skewed on judging this.

Like tonally I would say this makes the world's slightly tone more darker, and thus my character stands out even more. But that's not necessarily a bad thing.

Plot-wise my character has antipathy towards royals so no real care about them. Although I guess being able to deliver two assbeatings is fine.
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Whelp... That's one carefully treaded answer there. Well at worst I'll cough this up as a learning experience of where to draw the line in medium such as this. What's done is done unfortunately.

In the meantime I'll continue feeling insecure about that post but I'll keep it to myself. Ha ha ha - that was me nervously laughing fyi.
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I don't know man, ether move on or rewrite it. Lingering on it will only make it worse.

This rp moves slowly so it's hard to tell if they got scared off or if it's just business as usual.

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I'm here! sorry for the delay. College stuff (and a particularly annoying teacher who seems to dislike me... a lot... T_T)

I'll have my post done tomorrow! :-)
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Im still around just super busy thanks for covering my post pez.
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Im still around just super busy thanks for covering my post pez.


No worries Elevation. Oh and that's Pezz with to Z's thank you very much. :P
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I'm here! sorry for the delay. College stuff (and a particularly annoying teacher who seems to dislike me... a lot... T_T)

I'll have my post done tomorrow! :-)


No worries Org, take your time. Show that annoying teacher whose boss. That way you can go and say to them, 'What's that Mr/Ms Annoying Teacher? I got an A on my assignment? Ha! Take that!' That will show 'em.
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Working on my post right now.

Oh, just a thing. Karina, although she is undercover, is still a high ranking officer in the military of the nation of touch.
She can't just ignore direct orders from her higher ups if they somehow find a way to send those orders to her while she is on field.

If the emperor indeed goes in a mad rage due to Y'lleant's little 'gift', the military will be probably pressed to act sooner than they normally would. Even though they need only to show the emperor the results (aka. strategy and how the war will go on is basically the military's business) they can't ignore the emperor if he order them to attack the nation of sight immediately.

Also, if you want to use Karina's father (as the general), I have no problems with it. In fact, i would even enjoy if you did so XD
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@13org Sure, I might be able to RP a grizzly old general. I'll need some cliff notes in regards to how you imagine him to be, along with past history you think would be important to his and your character. Once I have that in hand, I'll just need some time to get into his head, and I'll be set to go. Also, Yay or nay on killing him off somewhere down the line?

Also, by the way, Chres is already up the stairs making his way to his room. He's had a bad day, and even on the best of days he's not much of a social person. More of a sulky, grumpy mess of person even then.

Lastly, Y'lleant's BFF gift won't be making it to the Emperor most likely until after escaping the town.

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Still here, lol
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Fixing Chres' part.

Also, sure! no problems in killing him. Regarding him, he is a general through and through. A bit... distant as a father and often treats Karina more as an officer than as his daughter. Just like Karina, has a very strong personality. He is a man of few, firm words.

About his past, nothing too much notable other than the fact that he really loved Karina's mother, and after she died he basically started living for his work, trying to forget about the pain of losing her. That's probably the reason why he is so distant from Karina.
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Gotcha. I'll play around with some ideas and let you know what I come up with.
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@Vertigo I'll be making a post to kick off the morning after within the next week. Let me know when you have your CS done and I'll approve you for joining. You can also Join after or during the chaos of the morning after. Whenever is good for you.
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I'm still lurking - dealing with finals IRL at the moment, and moving to another state like, the day after the last one. BUT, I've got a few days off until the next exam, so I'll get cracking on a post soon. :)
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