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No.


I think you mean:

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Go ahead and pump out a cs!!
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"A great band of heroes of many backgrounds and ambitions have gathered in a Mennonite town, this band of argonauts poised to enter Kothar. Their journey may take them into the strange land of Baccum and as far as the desolate Brimlands beyond."

Last few lines of OP.

Will you guys be adding in details of how or why we all ended up in that little town?
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I figured you would, at the end of the backstory.. but if you need us to do it we can I suppose.
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I figured you would, at the end of the backstory.. but if you need us to do it we can I suppose.


I’m sure we can all add a blurb about glory, gold, adventure, or some such.
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I’m sure we can all add a blurb about glory, gold, adventure, or some such.


Yeah, damn right you can. - Aristo

It would be very helpful.. and and 'Risto are pumping out stuff on the civs. 600% more information on the Baccumese have been written, Aristo is pumping out some Kothar.
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Twin Speared Savior


Name: Cical Cumlainn (Si-Sahl Koom-Lahn)
Sex: Male
Place of Origin: Baccum (Exiled)
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Psyche: Bloodthirsty, courageous, selfish, untrusting, cocky, hardened, carefree. (In no order, with varying degrees of severity. You can decide for yourself)
Skills: To say Cical is an assassin is untrue, be it how uncouth his methodology may be. To say he is a front-line grunt is similarly untrue. This is not because he doesn't fill those roles, quite the contrary. It is simply because he does not fit the descriptions of either. He is incredibly skilled in combat from his history and experiences, utilizing his learned ambidexterity to wield two spears. Each spear is used with the same finesse as other men place into one. Their combat advantage is unparalled when placed against standard soldiers.

Over time during his exile, Cical has gained an uncanny resilience to natural elements and forces of mortality. That is, he has trained his body by experiencing said forces. Forces such as hunger, thirst, hypothermia, hyperthermia, exhaustion, pain, blood loss, broken bones and bruises as well as simply being alone for extended periods of time. That's not to say he is invincible, far from. Cical is still very much a mortal man, however his mind closes off the irritation of mortal problems and forces his body forwards; even if that would result in death. This skill also allows him to live and navigate around the wilderness with only slight issue. During his time in the wilderness, he has acquired a riding skill from the horses of Mennon as well as Qualin from his home. However, the four legged beasts seem to dislike the presence of the man and frequently disobey directions, or simply buck.

Equipment: Not much for wearing clothes (let alone armour), Cical has few pockets to hold trinkets. However, the most notable item in his use are his twin spears. By him, they are named Zi and Kio for short and long respectively. The names meaning he has yet to disclose.
The only other pieces of equipment he has at hks diaposal is a silver dagger, two small crystals hanging off his hip and a leather satchlet full of ashes on the other.




Bio:


Edit: Changed some things as per request and sorted some other stuff out with the new info I got. Also added a new section at the bottom of the bio to reflect the journey to the unnamed Mennonite village.
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Sorry for any errors or weird words where they shoulsnt be. I typed it on mobile. Anywhere there it is ^-^
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Is his outfit too modest?
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(Someone delete this I messed up lol)
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Is his outfit too modest?


I would say yes for a Baccum but it's not my decision :)

Son of a bitch I pushed post instead of edit 》•《
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Sorry for any errors or weird words where they shoulsnt be. I typed it on mobile. Anywhere there it is ^-^


Hey! I like the sheet so far, but we were planning on keeping enchantments for later and not having them as starting items, to allow for some nice equipment progress. Also we have a lot more info on Baccum coming up that I think you'll like.

Also I feel like this character would walk like this: https://youtu.be/bt3CkXQl0uw?t=1m33s

Only other criticism I have, that I'm sure he probably gets a lot: if you use one spear to retaliate and one spear to parry (one that is also intended as a kinetic blocker), wouldn't it just be easier, more effective and quicker to use shield and spear, whose function is similar to the very enchantment you wanted anyways. Another criticism is the backstory, it was fine up until pope dream eating shamans and the punishment system, it just makes no sense that the punishment for consensual sex was death but coercive sexual offenses was a slap on the wrist. I get that it's more my fault for not explaining the shamans more, but I'll have the entire Baccum info up soon, then we can rework the background a little bit to fit a bit more, but for now hold tight and mend the backstory. (The spears are fine as they are [ minus the magic] , I just wanted to point it out)

@Briza LOOKS GOOD TO ME, KEEP AT IT BRIZAAAAAAAAAAA.
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Here is the Baccum tab, while we work on the other civs.


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Holy crap, Briza, that's a purdy looking CS! I also just now learned we can use tables!

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Yes, that's his canon walk now.

I'll remove the enchanted spear bit but there better be one for my boy in rp ;~;

Also, yes a shield would have a SIMILAR function. But not near the same effect. See, if a giant was swinging his four hundred pound club down on Cical, all He would have to do is hold up Zi in one hand in the laziest pose he could muster, and the club would hit, and bounce off due to physics. That is, the blow WOULDN'T carry through into the holder.
In a shield, you'd have to be strong rough to hold up to the blow, as well as all the shock from it. There in lies the difference. One completely stops and mitigates the blow entirely, the other absorbs some of the impact and TRANSFERS it over a greater area. Also you can't stab people with a shield :P

The bio was a bit... Summarized... too much it seems. I understand what you mean fully for the punishment thing entirely. But how I seen it in my head was that, the Prince of War IS capable of killing every one there should he wish to on his way to leave. The shaman knows this, bit also knows he will lay down and die if his lover will die too. Also, now that he realizes she wasn't at fault, he would still like to keep his daughter. Couple all that woth the general town people still loving their Prince of War, and he gets eternal banishment which is arguably worse than death in these hard times.

Edit: Right, and the Shaman is kinda fucking furious because she was supposed to be a virgin so she could get a bigger dowry for him.

Edit edit: Don't understand the pope dream eating thing either. I'm just making an allusion and relaying it to something we can understand. Irl the popes daughter (if he had one) would be revered, just like the Shaman's daughter. And he doesn't eat dreams, just watches like a creep :)
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I figured you would, at the end of the backstory.. but if you need us to do it we can I suppose.


I dont.. Neeed it. But i was merely curious as to if there was an overarching reason we -all- ended up at that particular town.

Like. If you had something pre planned is all i was wondering. :p

Just good to know before making an intro post, ya dig..

Edit: never thought id see technoviking again. That whole upside down waterbottle pass is legendary.
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I dont.. Neeed it. But i was merely curious as to if there was an overarching reason we -all- ended up at that particular town.

Like. If you had something pre planned is all i was wondering. :p

Just good to know before making an intro post, ya dig..

Edit: never thought id see technoviking again. That whole upside down waterbottle pass is legendary.


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Holy crap, Briza, that's a purdy looking CS! I also just now learned we can use tables!

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Ty. Credits to @Exit and this thread for the inspiration.
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