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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Rabidporcupine
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True, but I feel like if anyone opened a door and saw an unexpected apex predator on the other side, the door would be closed pretty quickly.
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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Girlie1Bomba
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okay so i just been informed by Mokley that we cannot control the vines so please disregard my post. I'mma start working on a new post asap. Sorry for causing confusion.
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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Zoro
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I feel bad that David and Gary have sort of been ignored, even though they've been right there the whole time. I'll come up with a contrived reason for mister Reis to do something with them if I have to next time it's my turn to post.
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Fixed post. Cheri is now at main entrance to diner.
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@Girlie1Bomba Right now you have Cheri ending up kind of all by herself. I'd suggest having her end up outside the doors to the restroom where everything is going instead so that she'd be easier to include in the main story. Maybe do something with David so he isn't stuck just standing by the door by himself?
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Hidden 6 yrs ago → 6 yrs ago Post by Mokley
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Aaaaactually, there's plenty of plot to be had outside the diner -- if, rather, anybody's interested in evacuating with everyone else. ;)

I'll reiterate here that there is no wrong decision, and no way to break the plot or wander off in the wrong direction. I'm following whatever you guys do and building scenes around that. So if any of you feel your character would naturally move to a different location, don't feel you'll miss out on anything -- there'll be plenty to do no matter where you are. ;)

Edit: also also! Just to clear up any minor confusion -- we're gonna say the window Cheri's talking about is one of those little ones high up that you commonly see in bathrooms, and Cheri had to step up on a chair (that just happened to already be set up under the window to the womens bathroom for reasons we might be disgusted to discover later) to see inside -- thus the window is not an escape route for poor Jill.
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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Girlie1Bomba
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@Girlie1Bomba Right now you have Cheri ending up kind of all by herself. I'd suggest having her end up outside the doors to the restroom where everything is going instead so that she'd be easier to include in the main story. Maybe do something with David so he isn't stuck just standing by the door by himself?


Yeah that's a good suggestion but it's all good bruh. Like Mokley said it's more in character for her to be standoffish and not jump in all heroic. But don't worry she will defo interact with the charas.

As soon as more peeps get their responses in I'll do a reaction for Cheri 😘
Hidden 6 yrs ago → 6 yrs ago Post by lady horatio
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Thank you, guys! I was a bit stuck, and the changes and input here in OOC have been very helpful. :) I'll try to get a Jill post up for you today—within the hour, if I can get it done before going out to dinner with my family; otherwise, later tonight.

Edited to add: Though I can wait, if Jeremy, Gary, or D would act in the next few seconds as the door is thrown open and Joao and David rush in—I know the other three were on standby to come at the tiger with fire and such, so if they're right on Joao's heels, they'd probably be acting faster than Jill.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Rabidporcupine
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Ok then, I'll try to get a quick post in after work just to officially commence the plan.
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Ahem. For the true connoisseur its actually Optimechs Gundam-o-tron...

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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Kalmar
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Hidden 6 yrs ago → 6 yrs ago Post by lady horatio
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My post is up! But if anyone was specifically waiting to grab Jill and hustle her out the door, let me know and I'll edit. :)
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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by DJAtomika
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@lady horatio I think David will. Once he sees Jill run out the bathroom, he's not going to be holding the door open much longer. Is anyone else in the bathroom though?
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@DJAtomika I gathered we had quite a crowd! The best I can tell, the room looks like this: João huddled behind the table, flanked by Jeremy with his torch and Gary with the fire extinguisher. I'm not sure of our girl D. actually came inside or is just ready with her gun, since Gary took over extinguisher duty.

Please, anybody else chime in if you think your characters would react! Otherwise, DJ, would you like to do a collab post? Jill won't take kindly to being touched, but since she does sort of stumble her way out, it would be easy for David to grab her and assist—though if he's holding the door (which I didn't realize he was; I should do another reread!), he may not want to shut the others in.
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@lady horatio Sure, we could do a quick collab. I'll post it too.
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Collab post in the works, friends! Just sent DJ a message, and will try not to go too much further than David and Jill exiting the bathroom, so it doesn't mess up any other characters' potential for action.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Briza
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@lady horatio, D is still on the outside of the ladies' room.
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OK people, to ensure everyone stays within plot/setting parameters, as of now please wait for a mod post before any more posts! I'm planning to write after work today! :D
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