2 Guests viewing this page
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

And we are officially out of the Inn! It only took us four months, lol.

I'll get working on a post soon. @Fetzen @eclecticwitch Shall I send some trouble your way?
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by eclecticwitch
Raw
Avatar of eclecticwitch

eclecticwitch The Effervescent

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

Fetzen had an idea for his post, so I'm not sure!!!
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Fetzen
Raw
Avatar of Fetzen

Fetzen

Member Seen 3 hrs ago

Yes, I had an idea and I apologize for not having carried it out as of now. My week's been extremely busy so far but I have a free spot tomorrow. As far as I'm concerned a bit of trouble tossed into our way could be very fun, but I'd suggest waiting until after my next post if that's ok for you ? @eclecticwitch@Pezz570
1x Like Like
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

No problem. Take your time, man. Whenever is convenient for you is fine.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by eclecticwitch
Raw
Avatar of eclecticwitch

eclecticwitch The Effervescent

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

Uh oh, Turkey should know better than to talk about a woman's weight!!
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

To be fair, Ms. Witch, you did call him a Turkey.

Chres post up. I'll devise a Major Plot Point post before the end of next week. Maybe later. I want to give you all time to respond before Sending The Sightless after us. I'll also work on a minor Plot point to send trouble in Mr. Turkey's direction (Hey now, At least I didn't say it to his face :P). I'll have the post up in the next few days.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

Hey! @Elevation welcome back! I love the idea of a cottage to hide out in! I've been pondering where to go and your character's background in this town solves all those problems. One quick change though, can we make it inside the town's limits. The town is walled off and they are trying to prevent people from leaving the town.

Also let me know if I need to get you caught up on anything. I'll stop RPing your character now that you're back.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Elevation
Raw
Avatar of Elevation

Elevation

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Pezz570 yea we can make that change no problem im sorry for my absence ive been living in a ranger grave for the past 3 months almost and only just had time to post yesterday.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

No problem man, don't worry about it. Whew, That sounds really rough though.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

Chres post up and a short plot point. I rushed through the plot point since it's late, so it's a little sloppy.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by 13org
Raw
Avatar of 13org

13org Stay fresh!

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

Ouch... Chres just struck a nerve calling Karina a 'kid'

Saying things like 'I couldn't die because I had to protect you' also doesn't help (she has a small complex about the whole age and size thing.)

There is also the fact that that Karina simply cannot trust Hark anymore. He pointed his weapon at her first. The 'group' is honestly breaking apart right now. Karina won't trust Hark, it doesn't matter what Chres says, and now that Chres said all this, including basically throwing on her face that he did 'save' them all she is even less inclined to stay with the group.

The situation is already very bad, having to worry not only with the Cultists, but with people who are supposed to be your allies is too much. The dangers far outweighs the benefits for Karina.
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

Well shit. That was definitely not the take away. To be fair I wrote that at like 1:30 AM. So I was like really really tired. It sounded good at the time. Sooooo... My bad I guess? lol

Anyway he specifically left out words like save and protect so as to not convey the idea that he was saving them all. The take away was supposed to be that each of them was an asset in completing this mission. Killing himself would have only hurt the group's mission. not that.

I'll do a quick rewrite so it gets the point across better.
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

There we go! All fixed. Let me know if that sounds better. @13Org

I did leave the kid part in there however. Karina will just have to get over it :P. She is 14 years younger than Chres and fresh out of her teens after all.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

Yup I think I'm satisfied with the modified pep talk. It's a lot less rough around the edges. Note to self don't write pep talks when tired. :D
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by 13org
Raw
Avatar of 13org

13org Stay fresh!

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

Oh, you didn't need to change it at all. I was just mentioning bcos Karina is in a tough position right now as she doesn't trust anyone in the group (and with what just happened, it's even worse).

The thing with her age is fine! as I said, you didn't need to change anything from the start XD
Karina is a bit sensitive about the whole 'being called a kid' part because other officers look down upon her due to her age, despite her undeniable talent and intelligence.

@Pezz570
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

Lol, understood. Oh wellz. It's done. The newer speech is cleaner anyway.
1x Laugh Laugh
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Pezzle
Raw
GM
Avatar of Pezzle

Pezzle

Member Seen 6 days ago

I'll be typing up a plot point for tomorrow.
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by HokumPocus
Raw
Avatar of HokumPocus

HokumPocus RATS WE'RE THE RATS WE ARE THE RATS

Member Seen 10 mos ago

will start slapping up a post tomorrow lol
Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by 13org
Raw
Avatar of 13org

13org Stay fresh!

Member Seen 0-24 hrs ago

You there guys? I was waiting to write something more before @Pezz570 posted again but... O_O
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by eclecticwitch
Raw
Avatar of eclecticwitch

eclecticwitch The Effervescent

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

Millie will post today~. Just doing some reading to relax after work!

@Pezz570 sorry sorry sorry! She's just so bossy!!! I promise I'm not trying to be mean.
1x Laugh Laugh
↑ Top
2 Guests viewing this page
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet