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@Stern Algorithm...six feet, huh?


Ye, girl tall. Wierd-lookin' feet adds a few inches too.
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@Cio Arrogant is fine, look at Erode's app. If I find a similar looking image, I'll let you know. Anyway, ACCEPTED.


By the way, I might be limiting the slots to 12 for now.
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I've got a character that can be quickly adapted for this, though I guess I should ask outright whether a quirk that fundamentally changes their body composition, ala Kurogiri is too wonky to fit with the stricter quirk criteria you're running.

Basically, is a goop girl gonna be too broken to work?
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@Asura We've got someone trying to go for a goop guy though. Currently trying to work out the kinks with that app, so probably we should avoid too much of an overlap?
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I'll just throw down a pun and a quirk for now then, as I work out the finer details, hopefully this evening.

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I came up with a cool (if not a lil useless) idea for a quirk and now I want to make a second character... I understand that's probably not possible though, as the slots are limited and it wouldn't be fair.
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@Toots
Oh wow, you're right, it's shockingly similar. I had no idea black even existed. It's a touch of a shame to give up the art whore aesthetic but at the end of the day it's neither here or there really. I'll edit in the quirk to be black instead.

EDIT: Modified the canon quirk to include bringing people and objects through with it. It's all in the character sheet, including limitations on that. Let me know if that's okay.
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@vFear Everything seems okay, but the alteration of the quirk to allow transportation of people seems stronk. The user of this quirk in the manga could only do this given almost a year of training.



Once she brings them in with her into the "Black", is there any way to counter it or are they trap there for as long as she's making use of her quirk?

@Asura So far, so good. I like what I see.

@ShwiggityShwah I'm having a hard time visualizing what you're wanting to go with. What I'm imagining are limbs that would probably look like Sero's tape, but still retain the ability and strength of one's arms, if not stronger.
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@Toots do you think that later on it would be possible to make more than one character? :>
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@Toots

writeups.org/wp-content/uploads/Yumik…

Looks like that, the anime read or die is a big inspiration for the power. Literally people control paper. The effects are awesome.

The arm essentially is like stacked paper that rolls out. But connected. Like the tape but they are just extended limbs.

If he stretches past a point he needs to use paper from another part of his body. Its like fold a body, more of and more of him go into reach out but he cant seem to fly the way edgeshot seems to, or at least reaching past a building. The longer he reaches the more he stretches out but be cant send all of his limbs in different directions past a certain point.

Example. Past twelve meters, his other arm gets smaller as the papers shift to slide over to the other arm to provide more reach and stability
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@Toots
I imagine just shining light on where they are in the black would pop both of them out. This would probably go standard without anyone or anything additional being in there either. Even then, as she is now she can do it for maybe 4 or 5 seconds at the most, if that? Just enough to get someone out of a collapsing building or through the crack of a door to get them out of a room filling with smoke. I'd like to have that develop as she does.
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@ShwiggityShwah Hmmm. But with Foldabody, he's body takes paper-like properties, so all the structures from muscles down to the nerves are intact even if folded. It makes sense why he's limbs are still strong despite being like paper. But with actual paper limbs, how strong could those flimsy things get? And what if his unfolded arms get cut, torn, or burned? No repercussions?

@Cio Not an impossibility.
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@vFear I get that, but in a one on one, they're basically helpless once grabbed and brought into the black, right?
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@Toots
If I'm honest, I didn't really think that far ahead. I'd imagine that it'd be difficult to keep them in there if they struggled a lot when her peak is maybe 4 or 5 seconds at the most as she is now when they're cooperating. I'm willing to restrict this further if you'd like, or just flat out remove it until later on.
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@vFear I thought about it. It's cool, go for it. So I guess the 4th sloth is yours. ACCEPTED.
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@Toots

Let's keep it simple. An unfolded arm is only going to be a few sheets of his arm. If they get cut, or damaged, he gets damaged but the limb isnt cut off.
He loses the sheets, sustaining an injury and weakening the limb. Some of the sheets torn represent damage but he loses some stability

Also.

vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/powerlist…

Again I refer to the anime read or die. Paper is also made of carbon, same things as diamonds, all that matters is bonds. Tearing one paper is easy. Try tearing 30 at once. That's still pretty thin but significantly harder.

theboxotruth.com/the-box-o-truth-31-t…

If you want me to get scientific papers about how just 20 sheets of paper have been known to resist slicing of knives and can act as make shift armor, 7inches stops a bullet, or the tensile strength of paper adds exponentially per sheet layered. But I'm trying to keep it simple. He cant lift more than a typical athlete with it, adding in leverage and mechanical physics.

It's a stretchy power that's just for visual theme.
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@ShwiggityShwah It just feels more like magic than something like a bodily function or some mutant ability at best. Not really getting a MHA vibe with how it is now.

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@Toots

*Pff*

We have very differing opinions. Read or die is magic, I'm just using them as a visual.

Over the top spectacle is MHA, with physics almost tossed out the window as with most animes. I'm actually acting within scientific bounds by what paper can do and I'm still getting resistance.

It's a stretch power.

Is it being rejected only by visual asethetic?
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@ShwiggityShwah I asked for a visual, that's what you gave me. Can't blame me for that. The visual I'm getting is stacks of paper as limbs, which like I said, seems more magical for me. If you can give me an example that would appear less magical, I'd appreciate it.

What I'm getting at is that if it's a stretch powers then it's just an extension of your character's body. Whatever damage it recieves, your character is gonna receive as well.

If the limb is thinner out and stretches as if it was paper, if it gets severed, it get severed. The same would apply with any other stretch ability. Unless, I'm missing something?

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