@Altered Tundra Cut the wording by over 50% and polished it. Take a look and tell me how it is?

Basically my character's greatest strength and weakness comes from knowledge. Her own false memory/knowledge has stunted her from learning about expressing one's emotions leading to unhealthy/oddball ways of showing it. From her past believing emotion caused the tragedy and giving her a realistic set of hang ups/behaviors (that adopted children have) to go alone with her. The digimon partner (almost symbolically connected by the birds she had as 'friends' growing up.) as emotional intelligence that will hopefully warm her up and make her more social and behave less odd, that's going to help her through it. And to a lesser extent, my bird's dim-wittedness and timidness will be lifted up by its tamers vast amount of knowledge and stubborn determination.

Perfect counters/friends for one another, if I do say so myself.

@Altered Tundra Well, there he basically had to self-detonate to kill Devimon.

@SleepingSilence Sounds like Izzy and Sunny will have some nice, if not interesting, dynamics with Conrad and Larry.

@tobiax This is true! Digi-Kamikaze always wins, though probably not something you want to do for every big bad.

@Altered Tundra I thought it only worked because Angemon was exactly as strong as Devimon.

@tobiax I always saw it as more Angemon needed more power, so he stole borrowed the champion-level data from the other 6 to have just enough power to kill both he and Devimon.

It's been a while since I've seen that particular scene.

@Altered Tundra So I'm assuming that works out. Yes? I'll post my characters in the proper section, if that's the case.

Also, I know how I've already been told how every other person has been in private/stable contact. So I'm assuming the first post be posted during/over the 6 days left the others have to post/have their character sheets reviewed? Assuming nobody is being caught by surprise here.

The stupid hider tags are not cooperating with me. :/

Edit: Nevermind, got it to work. I’m almost done.

So, it's been a little silent, so I figure I will update you guys on a few things that'll be happening in the next couple of weeks.

First off, all character sheets, cept for Hero who, for the time being, Hero will be taking a backseat from things, so I'll be handling all of the reviews and character questions for the time being, will be expected to have their sheets completed by October 23rd, 2018. It's being changed from what's seen int he IC 0th post due to this being the official announcment and so those who have yet to post theirs/haven't finished have plenty of time.

Secondly, @tobiax & @SleepingSilence's characters are accepted. You both can move them to the CHARs tab whenever it suits you. As for @Crimson Flame and @Inkarnate, please tag me when you have finished your character sheets so that I can review them as soon as I can. Speaking of sheets, @Bornlucky @OGSG - where do you two stand on yours?

And Lastly, my hope is to get this RP started by the end of the week of the 23rd (likely the weekend of that week). If not, then it'll be during the week of Halloween.

@Altered Tundra

I think my sheet was finished unless you wanted me to write out more in the Digimon's sheet.

@Inkarnate You seem to be missing the move list for each form. Once you include them, you can move Cheryl and Betamon over.

@Inkarnate You seem to be missing the move list for each form. Once you include them, you can move Cheryl and Betamon over.

Despite linking to the wiki where that info is readily available?

Got'cha. Will do it when I get home.

@Inkarnate Not that it's necessary, but it's for the purpose/option of changing the move set, if you're so inclined.

@Crimson Flame

On the Digimon side of things, we don't have any sort of problems per-se. It goes with everything we asked for, so it's all good there, but the sheet for Bianca - there are a few things both Hero and myself would like to be changed.

First and foremost, if you can, could you find a pic that seems more with the anime vibe of the series? Given the kind of character Bianca is, both Hero and I could help you there. Also, both of us agree that it's somewhat bothering that a 13-year-old would have any kind of curves, let alone those in the right places. We ask that you rewrite it so that it's not present in any form. No 13-year-old should have curves of any sort. They are, after all, kids of preteen ages.

Regarding the personality, there's something about it that makes us feel it's more the personality of a 16-year-old rather than a 13-year-old. We would ask that you adjust it accordingly. Maybe tone down on some parts revolving around her being groomed for the family business/name and focus more on how she is still very much a kid (you could carry that to the biography too). Perhaps include how her brother's death had an effect on her. I mean, she's a kid and kids don't often handle death all that well.

Aside from that, both we don't see anything else that needs work. Make those changes and she's accepted.

I’ll work on fixing those things tomorrow.

Um... I may need help finding that anime image...

I’ll work on fixing those things tomorrow.

Um... I may need help finding that anime image...

Awesome!

And just let us know and we'll help you out. <3

Alright, I'm having trouble finding a cute image of an anime girl with blonde hair, purple eyes, and that actually looks 13. Help plz.

Everything else should be fixed though.

Alright, I'm having trouble finding a cute image of an anime girl with blonde hair, purple eyes, and that actually looks 13. Help plz.

Everything else should be fixed though.

We'll get on it, expect a PM from either one of us soon. My search is limited at work since all the good sites tend to get blocked.