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@Todd Howard It appears we have all but Kindness filled. Fill that, and you will have my undying gratitude.
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Ah, yes. Kindness.

Like how I'm making another character out of the kindness of my heart, and not just so I can write more for amusement. (joke)

Will brainstorm, and have something up late tonight or tomorrow.

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Appreciated greatly.
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I mean I do have Kyosuke, but I'm not going to block anyone else. Also Reliability.
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Also Reliability.


If Reliability is the most concerning one then I'll work on that instead. I'm not far into the design process.

Will have something out today.
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I mean I do have Kyosuke, but I'm not going to block anyone else. Also Reliability.


Ah, right, forgot Reliability.
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Aight, took a shot at it. Here's a smashing new addition to the squad.

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@Todd Howard I like the concept. Not one you see often, so points for originality. (Though it will make the after-story bits a bit of a headache.) Two minor points- First being the character art- it's a bit too cartoony, [plus it appears to be a fanart from that terrible attempt at a Lorax movie?] so I don't feel it's a fair representation of the character, ya feel? Also, I get having to fill in the Techniques for Bancho Lillymon, (Also, awesome choice) but, at the same time, I'd rather you fill in the defaults before adding a custom. I get having Rosethorn Yoyo there, but I get the feeling "Absolute Territory" is supposed to be the Yoyo attack. Don't ask why, I just get the visual of using the full length of the yoyo to prevent enemy approach. If you need help for Twin Petal and Nightmare Assemble, I can throw my hat into the ring.
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@Todd Howard I like the concept. Not one you see often, so points for originality. (Though it will make the after-story bits a bit of a headache.)


I'm glad you like it, though if it brings in any sort of actual problem I can go for something different. I don't want to hinder you guys to have a gaudy movie star on the roster if it'd be easier to have more of a simpleton that isn't as well-known.

[plus it appears to be a fanart from that terrible attempt at a Lorax movie?]


What the fuck is a Lorax

I had been searching for something overly gaudy and honestly it had been the best I could come up with. I will edit it to just text, I should've just not been lazy to begin with.

Also, I get having to fill in the Techniques for Bancho Lillymon, (Also, awesome choice) but, at the same time, I'd rather you fill in the defaults before adding a custom. I get having Rosethorn Yoyo there, but I get the feeling "Absolute Territory" is supposed to be the Yoyo attack. Don't ask why, I just get the visual of using the full length of the yoyo to prevent enemy approach. If you need help for Twin Petal and Nightmare Assemble, I can throw my hat into the ring.


Thank you.

I'll use my head and put them together. I should've done this, I had just decided to admittedly wing it and I understand your request. I'll work on the CS as a whole and see what you think afterwards.

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What the fuck is a Lorax


It's whatever this thing is.

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It's whatever this thing is.



... Can this be my partner digimon?

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I have edited Perdy to have a written appearance, and also edited Bancho Lilimon's techniques. If there's still issues, let me know.
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@Todd Howard I think Absolute Territory is supposed to be a kind of area denial attack, rather than something that wraps up the opponent; something that pushes back the opponent or hits everything in a certain range to create space around Bancho Lilimon. Or at least that's what I'd do for it. Something like flailing the yoyo around herself fast enough that it creates a kind of cage of vines?

It's hard to tell what it's supposed to be really. The only places I've seen that phrase used is in Neon Genesis Evangelion (translated as Absolute Terror Field in English) and in Japanese slang as a term for the area of exposed skin between a woman's skirt/shorts and her stockings/boots, which isn't a part of Bancho Lilimon's design oddly enough.
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@Todd Howard I think Absolute Territory is supposed to be a kind of area denial attack, rather than something that wraps up the opponent; something that pushes back the opponent or hits everything in a certain range to create space around Bancho Lilimon. Or at least that's what I'd do for it. Something like flailing the yoyo around herself fast enough that it creates a kind of cage of vines?


I kinda like the cage idea. Weaving it around the section of the battlefield she's in. Gonna edit again.
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@King Cosmos Yeah, that's what I was thinking, but didn't know how to articulate it.
AT field you say? Now isn't that interesting. I didn't know that about it. (Actually makes Evangelion more thematically consistent if that's the case, but kind of ruins the surprise.)
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AT field you say? Now isn't that interesting. I didn't know that about it. (Actually makes Evangelion more thematically consistent if that's the case, but kind of ruins the surprise.)


I think the exact translation for AT Field is something like "holy area which cannot be intruded upon", which is where the term Zettai Ryoiki came from which is kind of hilarious to me.

I could try to explain what the AT Field is exactly, from my understanding, unless that would be a spoiler for you?
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@King Cosmos Oh, I've seen Evangelion. I know what it is. I just found the thigh pun rather interesting, given the way Evangelion units work/what they are.
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@tobiax yeah it's basically an otaku culture in-joke that spread to the wider community, to the point that it's an actual term used in fashion for that style. The area of exposed thigh is the "holy area that shall not be intruded upon"; such a weird origin for a fairly well known phrase.
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@King Cosmos Mhm, I see.
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Hopefully this'll work better. Did a slight edit again compared to the one above (Which I got rid of) but it's still just the mega techniques and appearance that have seen any editing, aside from a grammar mistake I noticed.

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