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@King Tai I think your guy is good to go!

He might have trouble taking on any hero with super powers though, just a heads up.


Cool cool :)

I think he'll be fine. Think it depends on what powers he's faced against. Unless I need to up the ante a little of his tactile telekinesis to make him a little more even against other powers?
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@King Tai

No he's fine how he is, its just a heads up for when he's up against someone he can't just beat down.
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@Animal Yes it is.

@Chiro Its fine in theory, but I would still be keeping an eye on how powerful the item makes them.
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@Dynamo Frokane
Would solid matter be a better descriptor word? Turning something like fire or just energy into a card does seem a bit broken.

He is able to reverse the effect on the card at any time, allowing him to turn it back into an item. So essentially it gives him a much bigger 'carrying capacity,' and he's really good at moving things.

His alias is Dealer.


I see what you mean but 'solid matter' covers so many different materials it would be OP even if you dont use it that way. To keep the power you would have to be super specific about what can be transformed. It is a good idea but the application has too many variables.
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@Dynamo Frokane
Even with the weight limit and no organics? Could you give an example of how specific it should be?
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@Duoya Whats the weight limit again?
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@Dynamo Frokane
300 Pounds. Could go lower if you think that's a bit much.
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Working on an idea. Very Venom / Prototype shapeshifter. Sheet should be up today.
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Sorry I'm going to have to drop out.
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@Oxenfree Scroll up to see what I said to Steen about Venom/Shapeshifters
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@Dynamo Frokane
300 Pounds. Could go lower if you think that's a bit much.


Drop it to 100. I'll be keeoing an eye on this to see how its used in IC. I might still ask for it to be changed if its used in an OP way.

Add the nessecary info and then you're approved.
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Not a problem. As I'm writing it, it's pretty much limited entirely to manifesting armor, blades, tentacles and such out of biomass, limited by how much biomass she's able to ingest and expel (which means a fun weakness is that she eats like an army). You'll be the judge, of course, but I doubt it'll end up particularly overpowered.
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@Oxenfree Im somewhat reminded of the characters from [Protoytpe] who would 100% be too overpowered for this RP. So I hope your character is nothing like those. Anything shapeshifter are extremely powerful just by design, usually better kept for very dunb villians with huge weaknesses like Clayface.
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Sorry I'm going to have to drop out.


Thanks for letting us know.
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@Dynamo Frokane
I can easily shift that to machine mastery and the living battery thing. And true, Iron Man's whole thing is designing his tech to stand up to different situations. And already got a superhero name. Its the alias, its a nod to the OC she's loosely derived from. Though funny enough, its not a Mega Man reference.

Anyways, if I make those changes, would I be fine? What do I need to add detail wise about the suit and cannon? I also did consider changing the suits origin, but that'd probably be a bad idea. Just that its alien tech her father found at some point during his career, and left it to her to decide if she wanted to use it. Bad idea only because it'd be really close to how Samus gets her power suit in Metroid, what with the whole mechanism and all. It'd be a different alien race, reptilian instead of avian, though.

With the living battery thing, I could explain a different FC appearance for her, as part of a new weakness. If she's a living battery, there could be the risk of a bad discharge, so she wears a specialized skin suit that prevents the energy from discharging into a person? I'll also have to look at Machine Mastery and Machine Genius again. Power Suit itself would be pretty basic starting out anyway, akin to how Iron Man's was intially, without the whole arc reactor power, or flight power. Just a glorified high tech suit of armor, until she can improve it, with say, weapons designed to stun targets, non-lethal stuff. Thoughts?
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Yeah machine mastery and living battery is fine.

After you decide on a final image fore the suit just add detas of what the suit can do and any strength and armor benefits (keep it reasonable). And what the cannon does along with any other notes.

Atter that you should be good to go.
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Your character has clearly had a lot of effort put in but is way way way way too strong having 5 major element manipulation powers and multiple animal forms, I cant accept this submission.

I think if you tried to power down this character it would change them too much so Id ask for you to simply submit an entirely new one if you still want to take part.


If I may ask, five? If you're counting the electricity, then it's in a limited form, and not part of his core control. He can only use it while in one form, and only for a limited time. The animal forms I feel you may be confused on; it's not that he can shift into these animals, rather that the forms listed are based on the animals in question. Powers are strictly confined to each form, and said forms cannot be switched easily; it would take several moments to change out the cores to use a different form and power. I hope this can clear up any confusion you may have with this, and if need be, I can adjust accordingly.
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@DocRock

Yeah machine mastery and living battery is fine.

After you decide on a final image fore the suit just add detas of what the suit can do and any strength and armor benefits (keep it reasonable). And what the cannon does along with any other notes.

Atter that you should be good to go.


Roger that, do you want me to edit the existing sheet, or make a new sheet? I can do either relatively fast tbh. Just wanna make sure before I commit to an action.
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@snek dkles

Even with these limitations, access to this many forms and this many powers is still too powerful for what I have in mind for this RP. Let me know if you have any other superhero concepts.
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@DocRock Edit the existing and let me know when its done.
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