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@Oxenfreesoon as I read "Project Scylla" I kind of expected something like


But that's just me and my love of SMITE
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@thedman Our first psychic boi! Jared has a consistent voice and a strong motivator in his story from his brother. In terms of notes, I'd be interested to see his sheet describe more of what 'psionic potential' is in the context of Daedalus's understanding, as well as see a bit more of his thoughts on what's been done to him and what he's become.

@NorthernKraken I love, love, love how you formatted this sheet and may steal it and remake Emmeline's like that at some point! Kieran is a great character as well - I'll cut to the fact that I have no real notes and get to the next one because I'm already late on these.

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A very interesting take on a classic monster! I especially love the implication that some aspects of her condition are the results of a creator going off the Daedalus rails. Not so much in the way of notes, but if you wanted to take another pass and add more I think it'd be interesting to see more of how the other researchers think of his... project. Again, not a 'you must do this' note, just my writer brain going 'cool story idea'!

@Serendipity Very well realized idea that I hadn't even considered; the notion of a person who might consider them self to be chosen by Daedalus, rather than victimized by it, as it seems she does. Again, not much in the way of notes, keeping in mind the PM you sent me (I so love delicious secrets).

Again, if I have a suggestion, it doesn't necessarily mean you have to take it, or that you won't get in if you don't, they're just my thoughts. Thank you all so much for applying and showing your interest and being so invested in this idea! I already know that choosing is going to be a nightmare task, and without even considering specific characters, I've decided to raise the number of players from five to six - a not-insignificant part of my heart wants to raise it higher, but I think it best for the cohesion of the narrative that it stays there. I made this change because I wasn't expecting the amount of interest and effort that this idea would garner, and as a result I've adjusted the number. Tomorrow I'll start looking at revised sheets. For now, I sleep.
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Fiddled with the powers. Added a bit of a backstory. May add more details later. I'll wait to see if my concept is fine.
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I added a big section about how Daedalus sees psionics.
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Judgement Day is upon us!
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The anticipation is excruciating!
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So how we all been? xD
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Good :) Made the trek through the wilderness to uni for exams lol, you?
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@NorthernKrakenNice! I had Pro Wrestling training today, hit my head taking a DDT but other than that I'm good xD
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@GingerBoi123 Dear lord that sounds intense *o* What's a DDT and are you okay?
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@NorthernKrakenI'm fine xD Just gonna have a bit of a bump, that's all.



^ This is a DDT
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@GingerBoi123 Looks, err, fun? Tbh J know absolutely zero about wrestling lol xD
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@NorthernKrakenHahaha, yeah that's fairs xD Honestly, what I usually say to people is that it's a soap opera with stunts xD
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@GingerBoi123 I mean, it must be fun or you wouldn't keep going back :P How long have you been doing that for?
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@NorthernKrakenI started in September and it's been once a week since then
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Okay, first off, apologies for A) missing a sheet in my last review, that's a consequence of lack of sleep, and B) falling short of my re-review schedule; yesterday ended up being a bit hectic for fun, not-at-all police-getting called reasons. Anyway, we have come to it at last, the projected day of selection, and though it was a hard choice, I'm very grateful for all the work that you put in. If you didn't make the final cut, it's not because I hate you, or because your character was bad - ultimately it came down to a lot of thinking about group dynamics and the cast that I think would tell the best story.

Anyway, without further ado, the cast:

Subject PBV-2424, 'Project Proteus', Buford Thomas, as played by @TheGrundlesnart

Subject TR-781, 'Project Ichor', Olivia Hare, as played by @Naive1

Subject EP1138 v3, 'Project Iris,' Elaine Paige, as played by @Serendipity

Subject 481-RONIN, 'Project Ajax,' Jason Ryker, as played by @GingerBoi123

Subject 8712, 'Project Elephant,' Kieran Smith, as played by @NorthernKraken

Subject 521-OB, 'Project Papyrus,' Sam Hell, as played by @Hellion

Thank you again to everyone who applied! Those of you who are accepted, please feel free to move your sheets to the characters tab. Expect the IC tonight or tomorrow morning!

Go team freaks!
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@GingerBoi123 Cool :D Is that with uni/school/college (idk how old you are lol), or is starting in September just a coincidence? (gonna assume not school, because that probably isn't the kind of thing health abd safety's gonna let anyone under 18 do lol)
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@NorthernKrakenHaha, nah, it's outside of school and stuff
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@GingerBoi123 Haha, okay - just figured it might've been because any time I've started a new hobby in September it's because, y'know, that's when all the uni societies kick off :P
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@NorthernKrakenYeah, that's true. I was gonna join my local DnD society but they play when I have work :/
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