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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Vongola_Hasayo
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CS is done. @Hitman Hope it's okay and not too much in terms of ideas and execution. Let me know if there's any changes you'd like me to make or suggestions you have.
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@Vongola_HasayoI'm confused about one thing.

It says he uses a Gauntlet, but in all of his references he has a sword of some type.

And the Weapon images don't... really show a gauntlet either. From my Understanding, a Gauntlet type weapon is something that goes over the forearm and hands in a practical manner to act as defense and a means of offensive application in some way.

What we see, or what I did when I just checked is some form of a Big Buster type sword that has a Gatling gun.

Can you please clarify to me your choice of terminology?

I apologize if I come off as overly inquisitive and stand off like; but I am confused at current by the choice of wording used.
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@CAS1006 He doesn't fight with it, it's just something he stole from Atlas before leaving. He doesn't know what it does or how it operates, it's mostly a kind of trophy of sorts. I didn't know how to describe but it's in in the appearance images.

This is what I"m referring to. It's kind of hard to see in the image so I sloppily boxed in the image ^_^;

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@CAS1006 He doesn't fight with it, it's just something he stole from Atlas before leaving. He doesn't know what it does or how it operates, it's mostly a kind of trophy of sorts. I didn't know how to describe but it's in in the appearance images.

This is what I"m referring to. It's kind of hard to see in the image so I sloppily boxed in the image ^_^;



Sorry if I am giving you a hard time.

But can I ask you? You as the player and the writer, what does it do out of curiosity? Surely you should know. XD
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@CAS1006 My idea was that it would store a small portion of the wearers aura over time and act as kind of an emergency aura battery once the wearers aura had been broken, giving a burst of aura for a short time to bolster the users chance of survival.
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@CAS1006 My idea was that it would store a small portion of the wearers aura over time and act as kind of an emergency aura battery once the wearers aura had been broken, giving a burst of aura for a short time to bolster the users chance of survival.


I don't think that is an awful idea by any stretch, but if it is mostly a tech based thing, why not act as a pocket shield generator? Machines storing a part of your life force is a bit of a hurdle I don't quite get.

Granted, if the GM approves it, then I really cannot have too much of an issue.

My only real issue was it's significance in what it does was never addressed in the CS.
It read off as "I have this thing." And that was it. It was treated with significance without too much of a reason other than a trophy, but was still gear.

Again, I hope my confusion did not give you needless anxiety; I'm not trying to pick on you... Just trying to be sure I understand everything is all.
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@CAS1006 Nah, it's all good. I was pretty iffy on it too. I left it in for this exact reason. See if anybody felt the same. Any feedback is very much welcome.
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@CAS1006 Nah, it's all good. I was pretty iffy on it too. I left it in for this exact reason. See if anybody felt the same.


Well, it worked. XD

I noticed immediately and was like. "What is the significance?"

And then felt bad I pressed on for an answer.

But to be fair, I can be like this when something does not click in your head. Thank you for being patient with me.
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how come nobody told me i spelled so many words wrong in my cs oh my god
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how come nobody told me i spelled so many words wrong in my cs oh my god


To be fair, it was much better than what it used to be.

I was looking more at the changes than I was the Grammar. So my bad.
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anywho i made it look prettier + changed pronouns


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To be fair, it was much better than what it used to be.

I was looking more at the changes than I was the Grammar. So my bad.


oh its okay!!
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@sophI feel like her dislike will be updated to "Anything to do with Cassius. I hate him."

Joking aside. What is the deal with the pronouns thing?

And there is a lot of small text, even with glasses I'm squinting like crazy. XD
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@sophI feel like her dislike will be updated to "Anything to do with Cassius. I hate him."

Joking aside. What is the deal with the pronouns thing?

And there is a lot of small text, even with glasses I'm squinting like crazy. XD


i wanted to have tinu go by they/them simply because i felt like creating a nonbinary character (++ i know how to write one), but i decided against it for reasons. until i said fuck it and decided to just go with it. the most prevalence it should have to their character is them correcting people when they first meet, otherwise it shouldn’t matter at all really

also the small text is for aesthetic but if it needs to be removed i can do it!!
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i wanted to have tinu go by they/them simply because i felt like creating a nonbinary character (++ i know how to write one), but i decided against it for reasons. until i said fuck it and decided to just go with it. the most prevalence it should have to their character is them correcting people when they first meet, otherwise it shouldn’t matter at all really

also the small text is for aesthetic but if it needs to be removed i can do it!!


As someone who is socially awkward about that sorta thing, mostly due to how I understand things, I find that a bit perplexing. But I'm not going to say. "Make it disappear either." The Nonbinary part that is. That being said... If my character does say things, please understand it is more of the character rather than my actual views and not how I actually view others.

I had a female character named Noir, and she snapped calling someone a "Whoreson" in a private rp and the player took it way to seriously... despite the character is well... just that. To take deep offense of how she was annoyed and uttered a phrase she normally would not say... is not me personally giving you the finger... Like, you'd assume everyone would know that the player does not equate to a character... But experiences tell me "You should just explain because people take things way personally."

(Yeah, some people just assume the player is just the character in different rps. And is usually if not always used as some type of commentary, because I've seen a trend on other sites where others cannot differentiate between the two. So I'm saying it now. Cassius is not me, and I'm not Cassius. What the character does and say... does not represent me. It is a character.)

The very tiny text however will actively be a pain on my eyes that my new prescription just isn't built around. That unfortunately is not something I am physically able to deal with. But I also realize I don't want to demand it be removed either; like who am I to tell someone how to enjoy their character? Fucking no-one in that instance.
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<Snipped quote by soph>

As someone who is socially awkward about that sorta thing, mostly due to how I understand things, I find that a bit perplexing. But I'm not going to say. "Make it disappear either." The Nonbinary part that is. That being said... If my character does say things, please understand it is more of the character rather than my actual views and not how I actually view others.

I had a female character named Noir, and she snapped calling someone a "Whoreson" in a private rp and the player took it way to seriously... despite the character is well... just that. To take deep offense of how she was annoyed and uttered a phrase she normally would not say... is not me personally giving you the finger... Like, you'd assume everyone would know that the player does not equate to a character... But experiences tell me "You should just explain because people take things way personally."

(Yeah, some people just assume the player is just the character in different rps. And is usually if not always used as some type of commentary, because I've seen a trend on other sites where others cannot differentiate between the two. So I'm saying it now. Cassius is not me, and I'm not Cassius. What the character does and say... does not represent me. It is a character.)

The very tiny text however will actively be a pain on my eyes that my new prescription just isn't built around. That unfortunately is not something I am physically able to deal with. But I also realize I don't want to demand it be removed either; like who am I to tell someone how to enjoy their character? Fucking no-one in that instance.


oh dont worry, i know all too well about separating the player from the chatacter. its the main thing that makes roleplaying fun in the first place. also the main reason why i made the decision regarding pronouns is more personal and i’d prefer not getting into it in a thread, but if you wanted to dm me i would

also i’ll remove it dw!! all the info in the cs is the same either way
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@soph I probably have a good idea why. But I don't want to assume, and it's good to know you're understanding.

I'll be honest, as someone who has Autism and suffers from depression, my biggest fear is my curiosity and questions burdening others
Me and my Hubby talked about it a few times and he tells me I shouldn't worry as much. I've always tried my best to keep my inquisitive side to a minimum because I look at today, yesterday, and the DM's of trying to interact with everyone as... "I fear I am coming off as annoying when I am trying to be friendly.

But Ben always tells me the following when I do not get something:

"People who truly believe in tolerance will understand if you are not fully onboard with something or truly if you are fully not capable of being able to understand something, because if they reduce you to that, they are reducing themselves as a quality of person. Just because you may not agree or understand, isn't the same as decrying them or telling them they are wrong or do not exist because of an idea. If they treat you less than a person because you don't get something, than who is really being oppressive and dehumanizing?"

Edit: Either way, I really hope I didn't make anyone feel uncomfortable here. Or give anyone a hard time. It is never my intention.

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@Vongola_Hasayo looks good!

onto the matter of teams. Teams can be RNG'd, but I think it's preferable to rig them up based on personality pairings and synergies.

I'll have them done tomorrow (need sleep), but any suggestions you have will absolutely be taken into account.

All the best,
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I'm going to do one adjustment and swap weapons.

Cas will use a Bowblade simply because of how well it will synergism with his semblance in all aspects.

But ohhh boy, this will be interesting.

Edit: The edit is done, as well as a few slight alterations in his background to make more sense.
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Definitely, I'm getting all excited over who will be with who. Imagine if it's all conflicting personalities, that would be a massive trip of getting adjusted to your team. But overall, I think everyone here has made some awesome characters, and with awesome people like y'all behind them, I know this is gonna be a fun ride.
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awesome people like y'all


Gosh, you make me blush. XD
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