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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Raineh Daze
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No.
Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by Jasper19
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Oh ok then I'll just think of a different character
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Name: Leon Tolandson
Race : human
Gender: male
Age: 22
Appearance: armored- Leon wears plate boots with flexible leather for the rest as he cannot afford more plate armor unarmored - Leon has blond hair of medium length that gets in his eyes because of that he usually wears it to the side he has hazel eyes with more brown then green he is 5'5 and his spear is unadorned and plain
Personality: Leon is a fairly peaceful person until his friends or someone he cares about it hurt he likes to read he is worried that he will not be able to successfully serve the knights and works in bettering his skills he likes to learn different languages so he can come off as more inviting when talking to someone for leads he is neither shy nor hold but likes to take the middle approach he is carefree and joking when he is not in combat but when he engages in battle he is serious and grim as he doesn't enjoy war itself but joined the knights to protect the kingdom
Backstory: Leon was born to a fairly wealthy family on the outskirts of the kingdom as a boy his father's tutors trained him in reading, writing and language's His father then trained him in the art of war he became proficient enough with the spear that he could hold his own in a fight after that his father shipped away to the inland and he hasn't seen him since
Equipment: Leon uses plate armor boots leather armor and a spear
Skills: Leon is proficient with the spear and knows multiple languages
Would this be an acceptable character instead
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Okay, the problem isn't necessarily with the character ideas.

The problem is that you're obviously really new to this and the writing standard simply doesn't match up with what's expected. Writing on a mobile or not, your posts are completely lacking in proper punctuation. In none of your posts so far have you used a single full stop to end a sentence.

Additionally, with a bio that brief, it's extremely doubtful that any in character posts you make would really be long enough for casual. If you want to make bullet-point style bios without punctuation, you'd be better off joining roleplays in free.
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Alrighty thanks for the advice
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I'll get my post up tomorrow, sorry I haven't been around the past two days.
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As soon as at least the majority of people have posted I'll update again.
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I'll be updating tomorrow!

Edit: Nevermind updated already. ^^;
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Lmao Forina got snubbed. Gimme dat salt, Asu.
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Oh shoot let me edit. Forgot to include that. ^^;
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yowch aria getting the "i guess you're good enough"
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@OwO: Hey hey, Fanilly picked her as one of the team leaders! That counts for something!

She just legitimately didn't know who was the best choice... I don't think she should tell anyone she ended up picking people because she wasn't sure who to pick though.
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as if it wasn't obvious enough when she picked the new guy, ufufufu
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At least she didn't make the fatal mistake of picking Elodie.
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@HereComesTheSnow: To be honest, I actually agonized over who to pick for a while, until I decided most of the knights should be able to lead a flank in a relatively simple charge. ^^;
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Query: Is there room for one more and a non-human at that?
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Well, we've had two people drop out, so there's room for one more, but PM me and Vita what you're thinking for non-human?
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I have the beginnings of a Naga character in mind, but it's gonna take me a little bit to get a properly working backstory.
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Just got back from a trip overseas, so I'll see to a post as soon as I can.
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I'm here, working on a post. I blame Shadowbringers for my absence.

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