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Let it be known that all finished character sheets are due by Sunday. I’ll do my best to review sheets as they come in and offer suggestions and fixes in order to give everyone a chance to fix their errors.
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Well then, I will look forward to my review.
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@Lauder Did you glean anything new from Javiyah by the by? Not to rush, of course.
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I did see the edits, but I am refraining from doing multiple reviews per character, so be sure to make it as great as you can possibly make it and be paranoid of my wrath >:]
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@Lauder sorry I'm trying not to spam but I have a handful of Dwarf-related qustions.

1. Is there any difference between the two Dwarven kingdoms you mentioned in the first post or is that also free to be built upon?

2. What did you have in mind for the average life span of dwarfs? Are we looking in the 100-150 ballpark or even further like 200+?

3. It's stated dwarfs don't take kindly to outsiders but what about the other way around? Are they looked at as inferior in any way or just regarded like anyone else?
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1. Given that those two kingdoms are located in the same general mountain range, they would not have too much different give or take a few idealistic traits that can be decided upon at a later time. Though, I will say that they would be similar enough that outsides would confuse the different kingdoms if not for their colors and slight mannerisms.

2. I would say that dwarves would live around 100-150 which does make them significantly older than most of the other races given a medieval technology level and so on, who lived to an average of 40+ years because times were just shit though, a dwarf living beyond such an age of 200 is not impossible given they lead a healthy lifestyle and are generally well looked after.

3. Most races probably would look down upon each other, but dwarves less so, because they are revered as some of the best crafters and inventors throughout the lands (even if they are now in a state of stagnancy). In fact, most humans would be very eager to win over a dwarf just to get a slight boon out of them. Basically, everyone puts on that fake smile you give that family member you dislike, but has a load of money.
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So assuming around the 150 mark, a 100 year old dwarf would be roughly equivalent to a 50-something human? I was thinking of making my character just over a hundred years old.
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Give or take, yeah.
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Ok I will look over the edits when I am feeling a little more ambitious later, and see about grammar. The lack of names and specifics has a lot to do with being unsure of how much creative license I should take with the setting, while the gaps in details are indicative of crunching years of time into a few paragraphs and not wanting to overload the profile. So when I revisit it I will do so from the position that you have invited me to provide some of those details.
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Do not be afraid to go all out! I am not afraid of a lengthy, yet detailed, backstory! Like I said before, you have something good going for you!
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@Lauder first attempt, sorry that the backstory flags for the second half or so but it's 2am and I was keen to get something up for review so that I'd have time to make the edits, kind of ran out of steam so it may read a little more like a list than a backstory.


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Great Great, I’ll get a review up tomorrow! Initial read through made me very excited to do another review!

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How are your characters coming along? Haven’t seen you two post much, just want to be sure y’all are still cracking at it!
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How are your characters coming along? Haven’t seen you two post much, just want to be sure y’all are still cracking at it!


Puttin along! The Fourth and some RL things derailed by plans of posting it, but I should be able to post the CS tonight or tomorrow.
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@Lauder high praise indeed, thank you for the kind words. I actually had a blast writing this sheet and I'm really excited to see how he deals with the dark setting and more sombre characters.
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@Blitzy Sombre characters? Whatever do you mean? 😎
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@Blitzy Sombre characters? Whatever do you mean? 😎


My lips are sealed... but some of y'all could use a cheerful dwarf grandpa in your lives
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<Snipped quote by Enzayne>

My lips are sealed... but some of y'all could use a cheerful dwarf grandpa in your lives


My dwarf grandpa wasn’t a cheerful sort, and now I am grumpy forever >:[

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That is my edit, and I am sticking to it.

Edit: Hopefully I havent overdone it with the details.
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