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I'm loving the variety we're getting so far, for the currently completed sheets I'll be doing some reviews live on our Discord with the end results being posted in the OOC. As for everyone else please don't feel rushed, as long as your CS is up by August 25th you have nothing to worry about.


My apologies. My laptop went out. I'll try to make that deadline if I can.
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Consider me interested, I'll try and have a character up later today.
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@EvictedElement - There's so much detail that any question or nitpick I could have had was quickly answered, I feel humbled to have your character apply if only because it does set a bar for everyone. That said I'm greatly looking forward to seeing Gill interact with new people and I'm very happy to accept him without any urgent questions, please feel free to add him to the character tab at your convenience.

@Trainerblue192 - There's something missing from your sheet, and I apologize if I hadn't been clear, but the Reason for Enlistment is supposed to be a writing example. If you could fix that part, I think the rest of the sheet is solid.

@Bounce - You answered a lot of things in our back and forth in PMs, I'm glad to see the completed CS. He's accepted, go ahead and move him over!

@Achronum - it's okay I guess so you can be accepted I suppose I can't wait for the insistent terminology and good job with the name

@Amalyra - I feel the red text used for A'lythana's text is a little too dark to read comfortably, if you could change it to something lighter I'm sure it'd be appreciated. For your sample text, the last paragraph should be broken up (the rule of thumb is new speaker, new paragraph).

@Obscene Symphony - Too hot DENIED please see yourself out or move him over I guess




Think that's everyone that has given me a CS so far, a few need some changes before they can get accepted, please tag me whenever they're updated! Thank you!

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@Hero Post has been edited with the requested changes.
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@The Irish Tree - I like him a lot, please move him over!

@Amalyra and @Trainerblue192 can also move their characters over (the former I had asked on Discord and just reiterating just in case), this is the second to last reminder that no more character submissions will be accepted after the 25th.
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Looks at clock, then at deadline.

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@Flood - So the only thing I'm having a little trouble understanding is that the appearance used for the character is Xaela, but the naming convention and what's listed on the CS is Raen. I'd like a little explanation on this as I don't see any on the CS (though if I have missed it feel free to point it out).

@Alfhedil - Still on time! I think there's a minor typo in Soul Crystal section, but otherwise everything looks good and she can be moved over!
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Last reminder that CSs won't be accepted after today!!!!
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If a spot ever opens up, i would love to give this a try!
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Since its been awhile since we spammed the OOC thread, I just want to say here that all talls deserve to be bopped.

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The Smols.
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