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I posted a new IC! It has lost of action, but not much description yet. I am definitely getting a good feel of the RP though. I should start writing good descriptive posts after 2 or 3 more.
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@Zyamasiel, are you talking about the Val'gasra in the IC post?
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I will wait for another post or two before I post again. I don't want to go too fast for you guys.
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I made a new updated map of the Val'gasra empire. I can't post it here for some reason so I will on discord, but I can't right now because my school's internet blocks discord. Oh. @Zyamasiel? Should I post another IC or, should someone else as a response to yours? I am posting too much.
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@Nate1008 Circ has a post coming up, then after that it's up in the air. Gattsu has something brewing in his mind as well.
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Ok. I made another IC post. I know I am being a little too fast, but it's mainly because I have lots of ideas on my mind and I want to get them out and I have no other active Roleplays at the moment. I will wait for someone else to post now.
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Ok. I made another IC post. I know I am being a little too fast, but it's mainly because I have lots of ideas on my mind and I want to get them out and I have no other active Roleplays at the moment. I will wait for someone else to post now.


Looks good to me. I enjoy the characterization of the Val'gasra and the queens and their internecine strife. I'll hopefully have a post up today or tomorrow and will probably include some interaction between my metal alien and one of the Val'gasra scouts up toward Tunisia.
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Sure. I will have the Val'gasra territory and region map posted by roughly 3:10 PM, it is 11:56 AM for me right now.

The Region map will include a zoomed-in picture of Val'gasra territory with landmarks, region names and other things like that, while the Territory map will show where their territory is and how far it has gone. Oh. And you may have noticed that the Val'gasra Queen Vi'san has (almost) successfully crossed the Glasslands and has constructed a new hive in Xanathan turf, but she barely survived and has lost her brood. She needs to build a hive connection node to boost the hive minds range so she can talk to the other Queens and tell her forces what to do without needing to tell them manually.
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@Circ, I am ready for the Val'gasra encounter. Or did it already happen? I am a little confused by your recent IC post.
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@Circ, I am ready for the Val'gasra encounter. Or did it already happen? I am a little confused by your recent IC post.


It happened (Reaex and a flesh maurader looked at one another), but you can pursue it if you want. I figured the flesh marauder wouldn't be interested in Reaex because Reaex is basically a machine.
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It is not a flesh marauder. It is a ravager. But ok, sure. Oh, and they can infest machines, it's just hard for them to do so, and it takes a lot of flesh, work and time and the machine must be subdued or willing to become infested. Regardless, machines cant be eaten and that party is searching for food, so they will leave him alone for now. They are just looking for him, but they will not care too much about him when they do find him because he is robotic.
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It is not a flesh marauder. It is a ravager. But ok, sure. Oh, and they can infest machines, it's just hard for them to do so, and it takes a lot of flesh, work and time and the machine must be subdued or willing to become infested. Regardless, machines cant be eaten and that party is searching for food, so they will leave him alone for now.


Okay, I'll edit my post to say ravager instead of marauder.

Also, instead of a single paragraph, consider making a google doc where you post your thoughts. That way you can produce a more detailed and interesting post that gives me and others a bit more to chew on and reply to.
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Also, if you edit your post for things other than spelling and grammar, such as adding content, it is very likely people who have already read your post won't realize you've changed something of substance, and they will miss it entirely. This is why it is better to wait and write a cohesive post instead of giving us your stream of consciousness. :)
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Ok. I will fill in what I can and change my future post description.
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Thanks for updating the map Circ!
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Wait... @Zyamasiel. I just realized something. Markis can hear the things creatures think about. Right? Well, the Val'gasra hive constantly thinks to each other. If Markis gets close enough to the Val'gasra hoards, he will be able to hear the whole empire's thoughts. Perfect spying. Markis will definitely be a powerful foe the Val'gasra will ever face. I like Markis and what he can do. He is an intresting character.
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Hey guys! I am going to add new creatures to the Val'gasra hive. They will be getting 3 new creatures. 2 Val'gasra and 1 Val'garon.
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I added them yesterday. Its on the CS now.
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I added them yesterday. Its on the CS now.


That flesh golem would definitely make someone shit their pants.
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Yeah. Almost as much as the Mind snare.
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