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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Always
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@Shadow Dragon You got this lol
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by KatherinWinter
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@Always why does Blair think Vlad is desperate?
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The wording he chose, she's just making assumptions based on the fact that only three survived, and he's trying to make them into an army.

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@Always I ask because your assumption means I'm not writing him the way I want him to come across. Can you tell me what would make him seem less desperate?
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@KatherinWinter

"the only ones who have survived the process. We are still working on the process."

To me it feels like the fact there was 'failures' gives a sense of hope in them is her basic logic of him saying that.

She's also straight-up not scared of anything(most things) and likes to test people's buttons.
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@Always no one is fearless.

I sort of see how someone might that line as him saying 'finally we succeed.' But that wasn't my intention so I need to change something.

However that doesn't help me write him as cocky or arrogant. Which is what I'm trying to do. I'm trying to get across the point that it doesn't matter if they die.
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@KatherinWinter

"If the three of you cant get along how can I trust you with others? Also, don't forget that each one of you is disposable."

"Misbehave and see what will happen. Don't act like you think your special"

"I guess if that's true, I'm just going to have to replace you, then again, that is after you die."

"You expect me to send you on a mission when you don't even understand teamwork? Nice joke. "

"When you are done head back to the laboratories"

"I believe you have potential, just mixed in with a load of trash"

Just got to jump into the arrogance, and cruelty of him.

And didn't mean it like that- she has fears, but she's never been scared of someone.

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@Always I don't think I can pull off cruel. I'm not sure I can even pull off arrogant. Some of those are good. I'll see if I can use something similar in the future. I appreciate the feedback.
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@KatherinWinter

Okay, if you need any help let me know.

Hidden 5 yrs ago → 5 yrs ago Post by Raptra
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@Raptrabrb? @Shadow Dragon you need an approved character first.

Those are the first letters of the current three characters' names.
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Ohhh. So when @Shadow Dragon finally finishes the form it'll be brvb or vrbb?

I'm sorry- I know I am awful.
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@Raptra LOL gotcha. All I could think of was 'be right back' and I was sure that wasn't what you meant. So I asked.
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@Raptra LOL gotcha. All I could think of was 'be right back' and I was sure that wasn't what you meant. So I asked.

Guess the joke is that they happen to be spelled the same lol.
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@Shadow Dragon@Raptra@Always made some changes to the description in the first post. Take a look at tell me what you think.
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@Shadow Dragon@Raptra@Always made some changes to the description in the first post. Take a look at tell me what you think.

Yep, it's alright.
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@King Tai

I see you lurking and long time no see.
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@Always Sup :)
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@King Tai

Nothing much. The usual. College life and work :) What about you? I am honestly surprised y'all are still on this site.
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@Always

Just work and daddy life. yeah I still have people I've RPed with since day one on here and honestly I get on here mostly to check notifications. I don't RP here as much as I used to but I try and stay active.
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@King Tai it saddens me that no one seems to rp as much as they used to.
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