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@BurningDaisies I love that idea!
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Alright, tell me what you guys think:



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Awwww, widdle kiddy, kiddy-cat~

That said, here are my personal thoughts on Lord Chompy Bits.

The character feels like a combination of Salem, Chuunitrixx and Light. In the story, the character Graft has gone throguh a lot of effort to create vermin/animal-like spy-drones for Salem, a telekinetic doll. Lord Chompy Bits, if accepted, would completely negate the need for this, as he could just use his cats to perform undercover surveillance without anybody noticing or paying attention to a stray cat here or there. It would also clash somewhat with the story, since nobody would have thought of this yet as the character did not exist when the need for 'spies' was broguht up.

In addition to Salem's spiy-drones, Chuunitrixx also has a network of mimic-spies who are doing similar things. With Lord Chompy Bits presence, we would have three different people who specialize in espionage and undercover intelligence gathering. If that's what you want though, then that's up to you of course.

Also, his use of illusions, mind-control and fear are very similar to the effects of Light's insanity aura, albeit maybe not exactly the same, the end result is close enough.

Moreoever, when I read through the sheet, I get the feeling that he has no "true body", but can swap freely between the various cats. This isn't really fitting with the setting, as NPCs has to have a specific body which the Player who created them worked on. Even Salem who can swap bodyparts and take on various shapes or bodies, still has a 'true form', but I get the feeling that Lord Chompy Bits isn't so much a specific character as he is a 'consciousness', which is a bit too intangible. Of course, I may be wrong and he does have an actual body, but I didn't get that feeling when reading the sheet.

Finally, his skils and equipment that allow him to turn his fangs and claws into Relic-class weaponry and use High-tier magic... That doesn't really seem to fit either, as he is below level 60... Due to how the roleplay is structured, the max tier of magic any of the NPCs can use is 6th tier, so I'm not certain if that is what you called 'high tier', or if you were implying that Lord CHompy Bits could use magic of an even higher tier then that - which would be impossible. In addtion, again, Relic-class weapons seem a bit too powerful for a character who is barely half-way to the level cap... But again, I don't know the actual parameters or "numbers" of what you categorize as Relic-weaponry, so I might just be making assumptions that are wrong.

OTHER THAN THAT THOUGH!

I like his fuzzy little face. I imagine him sounding like an old, classy dandy when he speaks and I think he would be a fun character to have around and roleplay with, much because of his cat-like nature and personality.

That's what I think of the widdle kiddy. ^^
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A lot of fair points. Lets unpack a bit of this.

Awwww, widdle kiddy, kiddy-cat~

That said, here are my personal thoughts on Lord Chompy Bits.

The character feels like a combination of Salem, Chuunitrixx and Light. In the story, the character Graft has gone throguh a lot of effort to create vermin/animal-like spy-drones for Salem, a telekinetic doll. Lord Chompy Bits, if accepted, would completely negate the need for this, as he could just use his cats to perform undercover surveillance without anybody noticing or paying attention to a stray cat here or there. It would also clash somewhat with the story, since nobody would have thought of this yet as the character did not exist when the need for 'spies' was broguht up.

In addition to Salem's spiy-drones, Chuunitrixx also has a network of mimic-spies who are doing similar things. With Lord Chompy Bits presence, we would have three different people who specialize in espionage and undercover intelligence gathering. If that's what you want though, then that's up to you of course.

Also, his use of illusions, mind-control and fear are very similar to the effects of Light's insanity aura, albeit maybe not exactly the same, the end result is close enough.


To be honest, I started off with a concept and just ran with it while the thoughts were still fresh.
I did skim through most of the other sheets, and at a glance, I can tell the Chateau has such a varied bunch that I would overlap with someone else no matter what I did. Melee DPS? Magic DPS? Tank? Support? Scout? You have multiple of each.

Edit; I have no idea how to solve for the "The other Characters should have thought of involving Lord Chompy Bits" part. That's kind of a glaring problem...

Edit2; I'm more attached to the character than his abilities, so if this problem can't be reconciled, I'll just redesign him completely.

Moreoever, when I read through the sheet, I get the feeling that he has no "true body", but can swap freely between the various cats. This isn't really fitting with the setting, as NPCs has to have a specific body which the Player who created them worked on. Even Salem who can swap bodyparts and take on various shapes or bodies, still has a 'true form', but I get the feeling that Lord Chompy Bits isn't so much a specific character as he is a 'consciousness', which is a bit too intangible. Of course, I may be wrong and he does have an actual body, but I didn't get that feeling when reading the sheet.


I read through the abilities again, and I see what you mean.
To clarify, he does have a "true body". It's the one that wears the collar gifted from C.L.
I will add that as a note somewhere, so it's significantly more obvious.

Finally, his skils and equipment that allow him to turn his fangs and claws into Relic-class weaponry and use High-tier magic... That doesn't really seem to fit either, as he is below level 60... Due to how the roleplay is structured, the max tier of magic any of the NPCs can use is 6th tier, so I'm not certain if that is what you called 'high tier', or if you were implying that Lord CHompy Bits could use magic of an even higher tier then that - which would be impossible. In addtion, again, Relic-class weapons seem a bit too powerful for a character who is barely half-way to the level cap... But again, I don't know the actual parameters or "numbers" of what you categorize as Relic-weaponry, so I might just be making assumptions that are wrong.


Yeah.... I'm not attached to the Mantle of Dweomer Essence piece at all. My brain said "Oh, this would be cool!" and I went with it.

Naberal isn't much farther along than Lord Chompy Bits, and she can use 7th tier magic, as well as a few 5th tier ones.
Maybe it's mid-tier instead of high-tier? *shrug*
In any case, the tiers seem kinda loosely defined, so it's really just a matter of changing the semantics in the description, so he meets the expected power level of this game.

OTHER THAN THAT THOUGH!

I like his fuzzy little face. I imagine him sounding like an old, classy dandy when he speaks and I think he would be a fun character to have around and roleplay with, much because of his cat-like nature and personality.

That's what I think of the widdle kiddy. ^^


In my head, he is voiced by Tim Curry. o.o
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How does he feel about being randomly selected to be carried around and played with by a certain metal maid and what are his thoughts about naive fat bunnies also populating the chateau as a resident cute fluffy creature?
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How does he feel about being randomly selected to be carried around and played with by a certain metal maid and what are his thoughts about naive fat bunnies also populating the chateau as a resident cute fluffy creature?


Being the designated Minister of Fluff comes with a few responsibilities and privileges.
He was given strict guidelines by C.L. to protect the other cute monsters in the Chataeu from harm, no matter how inferior they are or how tasty they appear. Cats, being the superior species in this arrangement, receive preferential treatment of course. However, there was also no rule about be cruel and condescending to the other furry creatures, so emotional abuse is free game.

On the other hand, all Guild Members must pay tribute to his greatness upon entering his Chapter, such as a random bauble or victim to provide temporary amusement. Players had the option of petting him instead. As long as tribute is paid, anyone was allowed to pet him.
As Lord Chompy Bits would say "My Master's word is law! Defy this... and I shall tear apart your limbs and slowly suck the marrow from your bones!"

Edit; Haha! 666th post is about an evil, egomaniacal cat. How purrfect~

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@BurningDaisies How do you think he'd get along with Gromgard's goblins? They don't like cute or fluffy. They just don't attack it on sight anymore.
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@BurningDaisies How do you think he'd get along with Gromgard's goblins? They don't like cute or fluffy. They just don't attack it on sight anymore.


Hmm, it would depend on his mood, I guess? It's not a cat, and it's not covered by his Oaths as the Minister of Fluff.
Perhaps there's an uneasy truce?
Despite appearances, he has his own agenda, so I imagine the two could cut a deal, if it was mutually beneficial.
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Alright, guys. As some of you know, I had a depressive 2-3 weeks in January and I've slowly been catching up on my RPs, but I'm just not too interested in this at the moment so if you want to consider me inactive or remove me from the RP I understand.
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Different strokes for different folks. Take care of yourself and when the time is right for you I’m sure you’ll be welcomed back. The boss man just needs to put you in a dormant state for now and we’Lel do what we gotta do. Don’t sweat it.

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Good to know, good to know. Naturally the skeleton servants will gladly tend to any kittens as they demand, and Mamoru is always good at doing hard CC against anything soft and cuddly. As for the rabbits let’s just say Bone Daddy has an offering to all and any Chapter Lords who desire to partake in the fruits of his labor.
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Awww... But I wanted Ashara and Aurora to be best tail-sisters. :<
Well, I hope you find something that does keep your interest, and if you ever want to come back, I'm sure we'll welcome you back with open arms. For now though, farewell and good fortune to you!
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@BurningDaisies I don't think Light would even heed that 'bauble' creed thing at all, she barely heeds the other chapter keeper's demands unless directly asked with kindness. Or in the case of Graft/Flan, more out of caution than anything since those two are her natural counters. That being said, you be friendly with her, she'll show the same to you and she'll gladly start the friendship train. Although she doesn't like cats in general, what with looking part fish.

But yeah, all illusion/disguise stuff doesn't work on her, so she'll always know which cat is the main body and often talk to that one. That should be fun, I'm sure that'll be super off putting combined with her aura xD. Even worse if she pets ya xD.
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@Archmage MC As much I would love him to be comically evil and ham it up by "demanding tributes", I'm still not sure this is even his final draft. @Xaltwind brought a good point about him not fitting very well into the currently story. So I've been working on some revisions on the side.

Most of the normal roles seem to be covered, so I'm wondering how exactly to fit him in.

Incidentally, I've been meaning to ask, what exactly is missing from this group?
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Alright, tell me what you guys think:



TIM CURRY CAT!



Alright, guys. As some of you know, I had a depressive 2-3 weeks in January and I've slowly been catching up on my RPs, but I'm just not too interested in this at the moment so if you want to consider me inactive or remove me from the RP I understand.


Sorry to see you go man. Just know that you'll have a place here if you get interested again. Good luck with your other rps!
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We are lacking:

- A higher level Ranged physical fighter
- A higher-level dedicated Healer
- A higher-level Damage-over-Time character
- A higher-level specialist mage
- A higher-level dedicated assassin

I'm sure there are other roles missing, but these are the ones I can think up off the top of my head.
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@The Irish Tree@Xaltwind

I appreciate the feedback~

Based on what you guys have said so far, the concept is fine, but his abilities need to be revised. Which is good because I really liked how the Cats of Ulthar reference fit neatly with the horror aspect of the floor.
Two revisions have him as a full spellcaster: one curse-focused, the other luck/gambling focused.
One revision makes him into a... hunter/assassin.

I'll keep working on it.

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@BurningDaisies I suggest the DoT thing, seems like it'd fit him well.
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@Rockin Strings So wanna collab Light/Gromgard beating up that transformed cultist or nah?
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@Archmage MC Yes.


How do you wanna do it? google doc or something else?
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