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@Blu Oh Sorry, I had thought about doing that but I wasn't quite sure. In any case, fixed it in my sheet!
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@Blu Oh Sorry, I had thought about doing that but I wasn't quite sure. In any case, fixed it in my sheet!


Great! Everything's in order now so accepted~
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I put on gold and blue makeup to get myself in the mood to write my desert prince, but wearing eyeshadow made me sleepy so I took it off and had a nap and now here I am.

Anyway, wrapping up my CS now.
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CS is done!

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We truly are a class full of protagonists.
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When everyone is a protagonist, no one is.

Really though I made the rich, arrogant rival character.
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Feel like Class A is basically entirely that. But maybe that's just me.
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Well at the very least, we're filling every cliche of protagonists there are.
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Give Caelum new things to learn and places to explore and he'll be a happy noodle.
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let me introduce the class

here's drake, he's a fire swordsman guy

here's kiara, who specializes in electricity

here's alberta, who can make plants

here's sekhandur, who's literally the strongest man at the academy and has a list of powers that makes Najimi Ajimu blush

here's kress, who can make chairs
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"Theres not enough seats!" Kress can solve it.
"The ship is sinking, if only we had alot of wood to keep us afloat.." Let there be chairs.

"They are coming, we must barric-" Hes on it.

"Totally not english are invading!" Tea anyone?

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@Dead Cruiser Hoo boy, where do I start? Yeah, your character is definitely way too overpowered at this point for the RP. You'd have to make a lot of changes to his spells. Thematically, his spells just include a bunch of niches. He has necromancy, support spells, alchemy, elemental attacks, and even future sight. It's too much. Here's what I would need to see changed:



And lastly for your mana characteristic, it lists "The humbling magnificence of a billion stars shining in the desert sky." I hope this is just playing it up, but if you're serious then this needs to be changed into something even more humbling (for the prince that is). In it's current state, I can't accept the character, sorry.
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@Blu I can make the changes as needed. I won't edit the names of his spells, but those are just names so I don't think it should matter?

His flames are just regular flames. Nothing special about them except he can talk out of them.

I don't understand what you mean about his mana characteristic.
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@Dead Cruiser Thank you for being receptive to changing things. The names don't matter so keep them as they are. The thing about the mana characteristic is that it's showing just how powerful his mana feels. Like being in awe at a billion stars in a desert sky is pretty powerful so I'd appreciate something a bit more tame.
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@Blu It's mostly meant to be a poetic device, I was trying to describe the feeling of looking at the stars in the desert sky. Kind of staggering, it knocks you on your ass a bit.
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I would argue that some people thus far have some pretty powerful mana descriptions?

Like...
Overwhelming.

A Serpentine Orgy Of Chaos.

near-abyssal qualities.
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@Dead Cruiser @ERode Combined with the actual spells it seemed like it added more to the OPness than the others, but point taken. I can work with that since it's meant more to be poetic.
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Overwhelming


to be fair, i meant more overwhelming as in "oh god, why'd you spill the entire 2 litre on the floor" than "all my senses are fried because there's too much"
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I can't believe I didn't ask this before, but how are each persons sleeping quarters at the academy? Is it individually customized rooms with bathrooms, or be it split with one or several other students? Or is it dependant of character wealth?
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I can't believe I didn't ask this before, but how are each persons sleeping quarters at the academy? Is it individually customized rooms with bathrooms, or be it split with one or several other students? Or is it dependant of character wealth?


Never given it much thought. What do you guys prefer?
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