Billy looked at the money and said, "Six dollars? I thought we was getting thirty?" He looked at the cash, then up at Grainger, "...a piece."
Is what Billy might have said, .... no. He wouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth like that. "I'll take it!"
By all means, skip ahead. We'll let the disgruntled Taylor and Finney have it out later in the story. A little sub plot we can weave into the story.
Is what Billy might have said, .... no. He wouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth like that. "I'll take it!"
By all means, skip ahead. We'll let the disgruntled Taylor and Finney have it out later in the story. A little sub plot we can weave into the story.