Nice. good format. There are incoming updates for the weapons. Magnetic sights are something I hadn't considered.

That is correct. Squad call signs will come in handy later, because I will issue them frequencies. All Marines and Isis 7 Security Forces will have access to the battle net, which provides them with the ability to communicate with fellow units in the locale.

Okay, I've adjusted the plot (grammar and consistencies mostly), drawn up a list of items, inserted a new affiliation (Gamma Mechanised Infantry), posted three different vehicle selections for said new affiliation to start with, but also for other people to find as the RP progresses. The first post of this interest check will now be the RP summary, and I will update it as often as I can until it is complete.

The hard parts are all done now though, it's just a matter of me sitting down and going toe to toe with my keyboard. Hopefully tomorrow will see the final draft.

Special thanks to Tearstone for creating the weapons.

epic cool Let me know if something changes

Final draft is up on the 1st post. The plot hasn't changed much, but the focus of the RP has so i would recomend you skim over the last half of it. Let me know what you all think, if anyone still cares, and I'll put it up tomorrow.

Sorry for the absence, the unplanned magnitude of what was supposed to be a simple violent RP defeated me at first.

God, this is beautiful. I'm definitely piqued by this, and I'd love to know when you get an OOC up

Chantilly said
God, this is beautiful. I'm definitely piqued by this, and I'd love to know when you get an OOC up

I'll be sure to give you a shout.

There's so much more I could do to/with it, but the amount of evenings that it keeps stealing from me is becoming an issue so I had to say "enough is enough".

Hopefully the OOC will be up by tonight, after I've made a few more minor tweaks to cover the appearences of the marines, security forces and civilians, and to add a bit more detail to City 29's layout.

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/23594/posts/ooc?page=1#post-647252

OOC is up, create a squad and await further orders :)