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Alright, following suit I have also added a short clarification of Jorah's Crest ability in the trivia section of his sheet.
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@Hero Here is my CS for initial review. I took some liberty with where I put the height and eye color though so definitely let me know if I need to move it!

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If it's done it looks good. Once other Deer are up, it'll be good to establish relations with the other heirs. Move it over to the character tab when you get a chance.

I'll prob edit this a hundred times, but here she be!

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I'll DM you about a few things for this CS, once we clarify that up it'll be accepted. The other one is good, too, and I'll reiterate what I said with Achronum's CS; another heir means the two of you should have some sort of pre-established relationship.
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Please excuse the readability for the time being, I'll work on the formatting and such tomorrow. I just wanted to put a sheet up before I went to sleep to give the Golden Deer crew some extra time to think of relationship hooks should my dude be accepted.


Oh god, Jorah's going to love him and Clarissa is gonna have an aneurysm
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@Kestrel@Obscene Symphony Between the two of you, Clarissa is going to go grey by the end of the year.
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What's the balance of classes so far? :O

Well, both in regards to the respective Houses and individual classes i mean. XD
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Here's another wyvern rider with a Fate faceclaim because apparently me and Kestrel are sharing the same two brain cells rn
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What's the balance of classes so far? :O

Well, both in regards to the respective Houses and individual classes i mean. XD


Thread tells all, we have two mages and an archer in the character tab so far with one wyvern rider in WIP and another I believe will be posting theirs soon. I'll warn you at the moment that with what I've been given in PM's the rp is reaching its max capacity, if you think you have a better CS than someone else then go for it.
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Well, should be worth a try at the very least! Win a slot or lose, still will be fun to make an app this evening! XD
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@Hero Is there a list of the 'lesser known' crest effect like you were talking about before? Just to be sure. Looking over the linked wiki page, but struggling to find those little tidbits in particular.

Long day. I misread. Apologies. XD
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For the in-progs and WIPs, this is what we have so far



If your name isn't on the list and you already mentioned where you're going, feel free to yell at me. If your name isn't on the list but you know what you're going for, let me know.
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@Hero I do want to ask real fast, if you are still on: Do you have a list of examples for Crest abilities? Just to ask at the very least. If I don't get anything done by the end of tonight then imma just back out, don't wanna overthink it all or make too much trouble, but i do want to ask to be sure! :D

Aight, so I am running into some bad writer's block. So in an effort to avoid burning myself out tonight on this I'll just back out. Hope this RP goes well though! Apologies I didn't get here in time earlier though. Haha.
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@Achronum@Obscene Symphony I'm sure they'll get along splendidly. We just need Clarissa to let her hair down a bit. I do believe there's a tavern or two in the vicinity.

@Scribe of Thoth Between two wyverns and Clarissa specialising in Faith, we're one warp spell away from an LTC party composition. I'd say we picked the right braincells to share ;)

EDIT: @Hero Filled out the rest of the CS which should now be ready for review. Formatting and some language aside, the main changes are the addition of his crest power and some added bullet points to his personality and trivia sections.
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In case anyone is interested, I found some great resources going over the male and female Officers' Academy uniforms and alterations from the game. Should be very helpful if you want to figure out how your character wears their uniform!

EDIT: doesn't cover House leaders, cause their outfits are unique.
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Alrighty I'll be putting this in the 0th post on the ongoing list of things I need to organize. First up is relevant to anyone wanting spells for any reason--this is not limited to mages, but to anyone that decides to take up Faith or Reason. For each rank (from D to A) a spell is learned. Your character can pick any from each column as they rank up.

Black Magic is the typical elemental-based spell. For this rp there's a elemental square where each element triumphs over the other (in the order of Fire -> Blizzard -> Thunder -> Wind -> Fire) but that doesn't mean having only fire spells means running into a mage with wind is gonna be a bad time.

Dark Magic requires reason but for RP purposes will be considered a separate parameter; it requires lessons from the resident Dark Bishop Tomai. Dark magic has a variety of effects and are all non-elemental compared to their elemental counterparts.

White Magic has an assortment of spells, most of them recovery based. Some of the higher tiers also have unique effects against enemies.

Anyone that starts out as a Mage will be on Rank D at the start of the RP so they have some way to defend themselves in battle. Anyone that does not have either Faith or Reason as a Strength will have to build their magic from Rank E.



List of White Magic [Faith]


List of Black Magic [Reason]


List of Dark Magic [Reason - Special Lessons]
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Double post again whoops

Just checking in on @ThatCharacter and @Eleven, how y'all doin
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Apologies Hero, work picked up on a Sunday of all things. Hoping to have a CS for you all tonight, likely Blue Lions to help balance things out!
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@Hero Just finished!

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@Eleven Good timing haha. I just have a few questions for the CS:

- How would you apply your Crest ability to the roleplay? Most fights and events are going to rely on narrative with only certain actions relying on a hidden roll.

- Despite the magic and dragons the rp is taking place in the equivalent of medieval times. I'm just concerned that with communication being inefficient/impossible during combat (as the notebook method wouldn't really be viable there with a sword in hand) combat scenes would be increasingly difficult, and the entire point of attending the Officers Academy is to learn fighting and warfare, so I think you might write yourself into a corner or get bored during scenes where communication methods aren't possible.
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- What I was thinking for her Crest was something along the lines of, if I give her an easy out in certain fights/events, then something bad has to happen next time. Which is super vague, haha, so I can come up with an actual system if needed. Maybe I can flip a coin (so to speak) to see if it activates in a certain situation?
(I saw that the Crest of Goneril was based on the Wheel of Fortune arcana, so I kinda just went with the theme, haha.)

- For communication, I was thinking if some of the other characters could happen to know sign language, that would mitigate the issue a bit? Writing to communicate was supposed to be a secondary method. That said, signing during combat could still be challenging. I was hoping it could be interesting to see how they can overcome that, but if it seems like it'll be more annoying than anything, I can rework that part out.

- Another thing that came to mind was that I can change her Crest ability to one that allows her to transmit her thoughts to others? That seems like it can take care of both issues. I wasn't sure if that was too superpower-y though.

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