@DogSo, I have to be honest with you on this one: I don’t really like this. At all.
I’ll be the first to admit personal bias, but considering the inspirations I’m working with, I’m uncomfortable with such a cynical character. Yes, I know there’s a
gas attack in the backstory alone, but the tone of this tale is supposed to be more hopeful, if not necessarily upbeat. Reading your submission just made me feel... defeated.
I’m sorry, but I don’t think I can accept this, not in this state. I know you said you’re unfamiliar with Spider-Man lore in general, so it might not hurt to brush up on it more before trying again.
Thank you for your time.